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FIC: Wounded (Rated R) (JA angst)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Obi the Kid, Sep 27, 2000.

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  1. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    k guys....here is my latest fic....it deals with a very iffy and adult
    subject matter. Let me know what ya think.........Thanks...Obi

    ***IMPORTANT*** Please take note of the rating
    and summary before reading this fic.




    Title: Wounded
    Author: Obi the Kid (hlnkid@aol.com)
    Rating: R (for adult subject matter, nothing graphic.)
    Summary: Pre-TPM, non-slash, (Obi is 17) Qui POV as he watch Obi sleep, on
    the flight home, after he rescues him from his captor. Obi has been the
    victim of a sexual assault. Based on Robin's fic: "Darkest Hour."
    Disclaimer: Obi and Qui belong to George, no money is made here.
    Feedback: YES, always needed.
    Archive: Yes, but please ask me first.

    NOTES: Thanks to Robin for allowing me to expand on her fic (Darkest Hour).
    If you haven't read it, and wish to, please heed the NC-17 Warning. However,
    you do not have to read "Darkest Hour" in order to understand my fic, it
    stands on it's own. But if would like to read it, you can do so here:

    http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/Robin.html


    **Inspiration for this fic from the song "Wounded" written by Stephen Jenkins
    (Third Eye Blind.)**
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    Wounded
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    Hate. Anger. Rage.

    This is what I feel now. I am a Jedi Master and will not be controlled by my
    emotions. Yet, I would kill this man?this animal?where he stands if not for
    the one thing that is more important to me than my own life.

    My beloved apprentice, more dear to me than any blood relation son could be.

    This man, who dares call himself a Jedi, is responsible for this. The brutal
    attacks on my Obi-Wan, were nothing but crimes of lust and power. They held
    no other meaning for him.

    For you, my padawan, these attacks have stolen your innocence. They have
    taken something from you, that you can never have back. But you can move
    beyond this. I know you are strong. I know the good and the caring that is
    in your heart. You will survive.

    The emotions whirling inside of me contradict all that I have fought for and
    believed in as a Jedi. But I will not give into the hate that I feel towards
    this man. He will pay for his crimes soon enough. For now, Obi-Wan, you are
    what concerns me. You lie there, curled in a fetal position, looking so much
    younger than your 17 years. How many times he forced himself upon you, I do
    not know. But the blood remains. I have been instructed not to let you
    shower or bathe, for fear that any evidence will be washed away. That
    decision has been tearing me apart inside. It seems that you are forced to
    lose your dignity as well as all else that has been lost.

    The death grip you hold on my hand has yet to lessen. I will not leave you
    padawan. I will not leave your side. That is my promise to you. You are
    safe here, although your mind does not allow you to believe that. Soon, we
    will be home and your healing will begin.

    Even with me close by, you cry out in your sleep. No doubt your thoughts are
    being consumed by the nightmarish demons that haunt you. All I can do, is
    sit by your side, hold your hand, stroke your hair?offer what I hope are
    comforting words. I will see you through this Obi-Wan. Together, we can
    defeat this enemy.

    Your breathing quickens as you sleep. The nightmares laying claim to your
    young mind. I am here padawan. He will not hurt you ever again.

    I sit here and wonder what our future holds. You and I have many years ahead
    of us. I can foresee that much.

    You are wounded now, but those are scars that will fade in time.

    I know your fears. I see them in your face. All we can do now is hold on to
    each other. Our strength lies in our bond. And that bond is something that
    this one man can never destroy. Despite what he believes, he has not won,
    nor will he.

    We will face this together.

    Peaceful sleep my Obi-Wan. We will be home soon.

    I will not give into the hate that I feel for this man. I will not let him
    tear apart the bond we have forged. I will not give into these dangerous
    emotions that threaten to overwhe
     
  2. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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  4. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    I've read Robin's 'Darkest Hour and you do a magnifcient job with Qui's angst.
     
  5. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 23, 2000
    Another wonderful job Obi! You have Obi angst down to a fine art!
     
  6. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks guys...REALLY appreciate it!! I was worried about this one!!!
     
  7. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 11, 2000
    Tissue sales rising...
     
  8. Darth Muis

    Darth Muis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 11, 2000
    Really good! I wish I could write that emotional!
     
  9. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Appreciate the comments :)
     
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  12. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    to the top
     
  13. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    up we gooooooo
     
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