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Before - Legends The Perfect Girl (AU Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon with a little AU TPM thrown in)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Lady-Kenobi, Feb 1, 2004.

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  1. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    The Perfect Girl
    By
    Lady-Kenobi



    Summary: During a mission, Obi-Wan tells Qui-Gon about his ideal mate.
    But will he ever find her?


    Disclaimer: George owns our Jedi boys and other SW characters. And I own the ones that you don?t know.




    Obi-Wan Kenobi wished that he and his kinsman and Master Qui-Gon Jinn would just leave Navarre and go either to Kertios or to Coruscant.

    The mission had gone well. Keep the peace while the King of Navarre signed a treaty with the Thane of Cordoor, but the King?s youngest daughter was excessively flirting with Obi-Wan constantly.

    A sexual innuendo here and excessive touching there. The Young Kertiosian Prince and Jedi Padawan felt uncomfortable in her presence.

    So much so that when she came near him Qui-Gon would place himself between Obi-Wan and the princess, giving his cousin the chance to escape.

    Tonight there would be a Grand Ball held in honor of the Treaty and Princess Anyna wanted Obi-Wan as her escort.

    He reluctantly agreed, another day or two and back to Coruscant to report to the Jedi Council and then home to Kertios to be with their families.

    He missed his mother, Queen Serah of Kertios so much. She told him that the next time he came home for a visit, they would compose a duet for The Atorian Reed Flute, their favorite instrument.

    His mother was gentle, beautiful, very kind and very considerate of others. Unlike Queen Narsha, Anyna?s mother.

    He wondered if the Navarrians knew who he was. Probably not, since they held only themselves in such high esteem.

    To them all he and Qui-Gon were Jedi, not Nobles of two ancient planetary houses.

    The older Jedi sensed his companion?s distress and sent reassuring waves through their bond.

    ?Don?t worry, my young Liegeman. They think of us as commoners not equals.? He smiled at his Cousin Serah?s younger son.

    Obi-Wan sat down on the divan in their quarters and contemplated his fate.

    ?Dating is hard enough for anyone my age, but when you?re a Jedi Padawan and a Royal Prince. It gets near disastrous. Not just princesses fling themselves at me but Senator?s daughters, Courtier?s daughters, and even Commoner?s daughters too.?

    Qui-Gon just laughed.

    ?You think it?s funny, cousin!? The youth retorted.

    ?You?re eighteen, Obi-Wan. Enjoy it! Run around a bit, sow some wild oats, but save yourself for marriage.? The Lord told the Prince.

    ?I know what I want in a girl and it?s nothing like Anyna. She?s rude, crude, and a trifle bit conceited. If she weren?t a Princess she would be no better than a streetwalker.?

    ?What is your idea of the perfect girl, my Prince?? Qui-Gon questioned.

    ?Well she would have to stimulate me.? Obi-Wan replied.

    Qui-Gon was a bit shocked.
    ?Obi-Wan watch your tongue or I?ll tell your Mother!?

    Now it was Obi-Wan?s turn to laugh.
    ?No it?s not what you think. I want to be stimulated intellectually and emotionally. I want a girl to talk about all sorts of matters: art, politics, books, theater, and especially poetry and music. I want her to love me unconditionally for who I am on the inside not on the outside. I want her to love my heart, not my looks or my position in life.? Then he smiled as he took a goblet of wine from the carafe on the table between them and took a drink. ?And if I find out that after we?re married if she stimulates me sexually, then so be it.?

    He put his goblet down and looked at his kinsmen.
    ?I want what my Father has with my Mother. I want what you had with Tahl. I want a soul mate.?

    Qui-Gon smiled at him.
    ?I hope one day you find her, my Liege.?


    Seven Years Later



    ?Make sure they send no transmissions.? Qui-Gon told Obi-Wan

    Obi-Wan?s eyes and attention was focused elsewhere. On the young girl who just entered the Royal Nabooian Starship?s bridge. Her hair was down and
     
  2. Bekah_K

    Bekah_K Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I liked it! It was different from anything I've read as far as the relationship between Qui and Obi.

    This isn't the only post, right? There's more?


    ~Bek
     
  3. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Yes Bek,there WILL be more!
    Thanks for reading!
     
  4. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow Lady Kenobi, I was shocked to find you over here on this board. But it was a nice surprise. I've often wondered what one of your stories would be like in this time frame.


    This is a great story, I like the relationship between Obi and QG, its different. I too look forward to more of this.
     
  5. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Glad you found me, Crys! Because I'm not that techsavy enough to PM and bring my readers to the Forum that I'm on. So if you can please inform Aeryn.

    Thanks!
     
  6. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    I will be happy to.
     
  7. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I'm here, I'm here Lady :D I got the message and put the link in the archive.

    Interesting story. So, Obi-Wan is related to a guy who is royalty? Hmm, Padme should consider herself lucky then.

    ~aeryn
     
  8. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Obi-Wan is the Prince. Qui-Gon is just a minor Lord. In "Love Letters-PartIII, Obi-Wan explaines it to Padme'.
    Actually he'll explain it in another "Love Letter".

    Thank you for putting this fic in the archieve, My Friend!
     
  9. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    I LOVE THIS MUSHY FIC!
     
  10. Lady-Kenobi

    Lady-Kenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Here's another for Lady S to read.
     
  11. Lady--Skywalker

    Lady--Skywalker Jedi Youngling

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    THANKS L-K!

    Obi-Wan a prince! Qui-Gon a lord! Very interesting!

    They know their families too.

    I saw some Shakespereian references!

    COOL!
     
  12. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Very kool. I never knew tht Qui and Obi were related! LOL

     
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