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What A Girl Wants - A Valentine's Day Mini-Fic (JA)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi Obi-Wan, Feb 2, 2001.

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  1. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    What a girl wants, what a girl needs
    Whatever makes me happy sets you free...
    What a girl wants, what a girl needs
    Whatever keeps me in your arms
    I wanna thank you for giving me time to breathe


    Sypnosis: Things get a little crazy around the Temple when Valentine's Day comes around, especially for our two favorite Jedi. Qui-Gon falls for another Jedi Master, and Obi-Wan tries to stop his life from turning upside down with help from Siri. Cupid, however, has other ideas and both of them end up catching the love bug.

    What do you think? If I get some good responses I'll make my first post tonight.
     
  2. Rokangus

    Rokangus Jedi Knight star 5

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    When the moon hits yours eyes like a big peice of pie
    that's amooooooorrreeee...

    Awesome, sounds like fun! Bring it on!
     
  3. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Romance for Qui and Obi??? What more could we want.

    Whataya waitin for???
     
  4. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You got my attention...
     
  5. Knight_Maria

    Knight_Maria Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm up for it! Sounds cool!
     
  6. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks for the comments! :)

    ~What a Girl Wants~

    Qui-Gon focused his blue eyes on the mirror in front of him.

    "Well hello, Master Gallia. How are you today? Oh, you'd rather me call you Adi? All right, but only if you call me Qui-Gon."

    Qui-Gon flashed the mirror his brightest smile.

    "How is your Padawan? Thats good. Oh yes, Obi-Wan is doing fine. Getting bigger everyday, that boy is. So, Adi, do you have a date for the Valentine's banquet? No?"

    Qui-Gon was so caught up in his conversation with the mirror that he didn't feel the boy coming up behind him.

    "Adi, would you give me the honor of escorting you?"

    "Oh Qui-Gon! You teddy bear! Of course I'll go with you, you big hunk," came a mock female voice.

    Qui-Gon turned beet red and turned around to see Obi-Wan doubled over laughing. He threw the bouqet of flowers he had been holding at the boy's head and glared at his Padawan. "Don't you have homework?"

    "Yes, but watching you ask the mirror out is much more interesting."

    Obi-Wan ducked to avoid the towel that came flying at his head. He grinned.

    "You and Master Gallia? I don't see you as a couple."

    Qui-Gon gave his padawan an indignant stare. "And why not?"

    Obi-Wan grinned slightly. "With all due respect Master, aren't you a little old for her?"

    "What?"

    "Well..."

    Qui-Gon crossed his arms over his big chest. "No I am not! Master Gallia is only five years younger than me."

    "Oh. I just thought...nevermind."

    "What?"

    "Well... you look older. I think it's your hair. It's getting gray."

    "Obi-Wan Kenobi, Master Gallia is not so petty that a few streaks of gray are going to bother her. She is a mature adult."

    "Yes Master."

    "Now go finish that homework."

    "Yes... sweetheart." Obi-Wan darted from the room, Qui-Gon on his heels. Obi-Wan ran around the couch, Qui-Gon reached over it and captured his Padawan. He carried the struggling teen to the fresher. He turned his Padawan upside down over it. "Now Padawan, you were saying?"

    "Master!" Obi-Wan shrieked.

    "What were you saying?"

    "I.."

    Qui-Gon lowered Obi-Wan's head closer to the water. Obi-Wan screamed.

    "Now Padawan..."

    "I was saying what a great couple you and Master Gallia make!"

    "Oh really?"

    "Yes.... and you look so young for a Master of your age!"

    "And how old am I?"

    "Uh... Fifty!"

    Obi-Wan's head was lowered within centimeters of the fresher. He squealed.

    "Try again, Padawan."

    "Forty!"

    "Thats better, but..."

    "Not a day over twenty!"

    "Good boy." Qui-Gon set Obi-Wan down on the floor. Obi-Wan felt the top of his head just to make sure it wasn't wet. He glared at Qui-Gon. Qui-Gon smiled. "Go finish your homework, Padawan."

    Obi-Wan walked out mumblling something about taking a shower.

    Qui-Gon chuckled and turned to study himself in the mirror. Maybe he should do something about that gray...
     
  7. Glad is June

    Glad is June Jedi Master star 4

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    I hope Qui doesn't end up with green hair. No. Speaking as an ex-beautitian he's got too much red in it. It would probably turn a pinkish firey orange.
     
  8. Bria

    Bria Manager Emeritus, -MNFF Council star 7 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    *giggles* Bring this one! Loved this: "Oh Qui-Gon! You teddy bear! Of course I'll go with you, you big hunk." Heh, way to go, OB1!

    ~*~Bria
     
  9. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thank you so much for the replies!

    *~*~*

    "Obi-Wan Kenobi, I want to talk to you!"

    Obi-Wan turned around to see and angry Siri walked up to him. "Whats the big idea?"

    "Huh?"

    "Master Qui-Gon asked my Master and I to have dinner with you two tonight!"

    "Yeah, so?"

    Siri looked at him and crossed her arms. "Why?"

    "Qui-Gon has a crush on your Master."

    "What?"

    "Yeah. I think he's planning on asking her to the Valentine's Banquet."

    "Oh. I thought that... nevermind."

    "What?"

    "It's nothing. I have to go. "

    Siri started off, but stopped and turned. "Do you have a date for the banquet?"

    "No. Why?"

    "No reason."

    Obi-Wan shrugged and headed for his room.

    The smell hit him as soon as he entered the apartment. "Oh no, Master! You're not cooking!"

    "Whats wrong with my cooking?"

    "It's not edible!"

    "Padawan! Adi likes my cooking."

    Obi-Wan walked into the small kitchenette. Qui-Gon's back was turned to him, and he was stirring something.

    Obi-Wan leaned on the table. "It's Adi now?"

    Qui-Gon nodded. "She's a nice girl, Obi-Wan. So is her Padawan."

    "Siri?"

    "Yes. She's just as cute as her Master is."

    "Oh no, you're not going to try to set me up with Siri!"

    "Your fifteen, Obi-Wan. You should be looking for prospective females."

    Obi-Wan made a face. "That makes it sound like I'm buying a speeder."

    Qui-Gon chuckled. "Do you have a date for the Valentine's Banquet?"

    "No."

    "Then why don't you ask her?"

    "It'd be too awkward! I know Siri too well."

    "You'd rather go out with some strange girl?"

    "Yes!"

    Qui-Gon turned around with a spoon in his hand. "Padawan.."

    Obi-Wan burst out laughing. Qui-Gon was wearing a pink apron that said 'Kiss Me' across the top in bold red letters. Qui-Gon shrugged. "This is all they had."

    Obi-Wan shook his head. His Master, under normal curcumstances, would not be caught dead in anything like the apron he was wearing now. He sighed. This was going to a long evening.

     
  10. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 14, 2000
    LOL! I just seen this. Very funny!!
     
  11. Darth_Duck

    Darth_Duck Chosen One star 5

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    LOL, man this is great!
     
  12. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Ha! I love the idea of Qui practicing in front of a mirror! And the way Obi cnuck up opn him...hilarious!!!

    And I hope Obi's dread of a very long evening comes true!!!

    More soon???

     
  13. Jedi Susie

    Jedi Susie Jedi Master star 4

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    This is TOO funny! I love the lowering Obi to the water scene. "Not a day over twenty" Of course Qui's not a day over twnety (cough cough) ^_^

    I can't wait for more!
     
  14. PadmeCoen1138

    PadmeCoen1138 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Thisa is so cute! More!
     
  15. Knight_Maria

    Knight_Maria Jedi Youngling star 3

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    LOL!!!
    Qui threatening to dunk Obi! *grin*

    And the stupid apron. *laughs*
    More!!!
     
  16. DarthBoba

    DarthBoba Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    He shoulda dunked the brat, IMO...maybe given him a swirly..OMG this is hilarious!
     
  17. LadyVorgunby

    LadyVorgunby Jedi Youngling star 3

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    LoL...this is too cute! Obi's right about it being a LONG evening...maybe he and Siri can figure out a way to sneak out and leave the Masters in peace?
     
  18. Maru-Ba

    Maru-Ba Jedi Padawan star 4

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    tehe! This is funny. Keep up the good work.
     
  19. Jaded Skywalker

    Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL, this is adorable! Nice job Jedi Obi Wan!

    *starts singing*

    "Love is in the air..."
     
  20. Bria

    Bria Manager Emeritus, -MNFF Council star 7 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Qui-Gon was wearing a pink apron that said 'Kiss Me' across the top in bold red
    letters.

    This is too good. ^_~

    ~*~Bria
     
  21. Amidolee

    Amidolee Jedi Master star 5

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    *snicker*

    This is great! A fun romance fic! :)
     
  22. ArnaKyle

    ArnaKyle Jedi Master star 4

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    I just popped in...I'm loving this! This is one of the best funny fics I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
     
  23. Teebones

    Teebones Jedi Padawan star 4

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  24. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This is great Jedi Obi-Wan!
    I love the part about the pink apron
    ROFLOL!!!!!!
    cya
    - S-WK
     
  25. Amidolee

    Amidolee Jedi Master star 5

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