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Saga The Prodigal Son (post-RotS AU; Obi/Ani); A/N 8/3/10

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jedi-Princess-Solo, May 19, 2005.

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  1. Jedi-Princess-Solo

    Jedi-Princess-Solo Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    ~What if the duel had ended with slightly different results?~


    I've had this idea in my head for a while, but decided to wait until after RotS came out to start it, since it would be SPOILER heavy in certain parts. Essentially, it's one look at how things might have gone had Anakin not been stuck in the suit. I've used some aspects of the novelization , as well as the movie, so little detials might seem odd if you haven't read the novel, but it's not necessary to follow the story. Hope you guys enjoy the ride!

    ~JPS~
     
  2. Jedi-Princess-Solo

    Jedi-Princess-Solo Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    [b][i]Never cease loving a person, and never give up hope for him, for even the prodigal son who had fallen most low, could still be saved; the bitterest enemy and also he who was your friend could again be your friend; love that has grown cold can kindle again. [/i] -Sören Kierkegaard[/b]


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    Another day.

    Time passed inexplicably in the barren sands of Tatooine.

    Day stretched on endlessly under the scorching fire of the twin suns high overhead, and the chill that fell with the dark canvas across the night sky lingered long after the first rays of sunlight began to peek over the rocky mesas in the morning.

    A world of extremes, and of extreme danger.

    The danger went beyond the krayt dragons and the Sand People, it was part of the planet itself, deeply ingrained in every bit of sand and rock.

    By day, the endless sea of coarse sand was broiling and scalding, but once the twin suns fell, the desert world took on a frigid atmosphere, harsh winds howling outside every door. With air as dry and bitter as the sand underfoot, acrid and completely parched, it seemed an inhospitable place at first glance, yet there was life among the scorched sands.

    Those who called Tatooine home were of a solid mold, rough and battered, but strong in both body and spirit. It was a necessity, that strength, when you lived in a world that was constantly trying to kill you.

    Yoda had voiced some reservations about sending the boy off to grow up in such a harsh place, but it was the right place for young Luke.

    Owen and Beru were good people, the closest thing he had to family, and they would raise him well.

    And if Anakin had survived this place, as a slave no less, so could his son.

    There were days, however, when Obi-Wan Kenobi wondered if he himself could survive a lifetime in this desolate wasteland, and just who would guide Luke to his fated path if he were to simply collapse in the sand.

    He was beginning to hate sand as much as his former Padawan had.

    Once, a lifetime ago after a particularly stressful incident with said Padawan, then a twelve year-old bundle of terror, he had vowed that as soon as the boy ascended to Knighthood, he was going to take a long vacation on some remote desert world.

    The Force, it seemed, had a taste for irony.

    After three long years in the barren, desolate wastelands of Tatooine, the twin suns scorching everything their rays could touch, Obi-Wan Kenobi would have given anything to see water again. He wasn't picky, it wouldn't have had to be the fathomless oceans of Mon Calamari, where water went as far as the eye could see, or even the majestic waterfalls of Naboo.

    Water, of any kind, would have been a sight for sore eyes.

    But of course, that was only a dream, wishful thinking that was the product of an old man's longing. Water, like so many other precious things that he had taken for granted, was out of his reach now.

    In the distance, a krayt dragon was calling for its mate.

    Obi-Wan picked up his pace a little, drawing his dusty robe closer around his frame as he continued his weary trek back from his nightly vigil on the edge of the Lars homestead.

    It bothered Owen for him to be on Tatooine at all, but Anakin's stepbrother couldn't deny that having a Jedi Master- albeit an exiled failure of one- nearby was invaluable when raising a Force-sensitive child, especially one as strong in the Force as Luke.

    Sometimes Obi-Wan wondered how Shmi had managed all those years with Anakin.

    He'd never met the woman, of course, he'd only ever been to Tatooine with Qui-Gon that once and had remained with the ship while his Master ventured into Mos Espa, but he felt a kinship with her just the same. They had both tried a hand at raising her son, after all, though it was inarguable that she had faired better.

    That day when he'd first arrived at the Lars homestead to give Luke into the care of his uncle and aunt, Obi-Wan had stopped at Shmi's grave for a moment, strangely compelled to offer up some form of apology.

    She had trusted the Jedi to prote
     
  3. Trickster_Goddess

    Trickster_Goddess Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This looks really interesting so far, JPS. I can't wait to see where it all goes.

    I saw the midnight premiere last night- it was so sad, I'm off to watch RotJ just to remind myself it's all okay, lol, that there was a happy ending :p ;)
     
  4. cdmcc

    cdmcc Jedi Master star 4

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    this is really good, more please!!
     
  5. The Butler

    The Butler Jedi Padawan star 4

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    VERY intriguing. It doesn't change the duel too much, just gives Anakin one small reason to turn to Obi-Wan. Can't wait for more!
     
  6. Luthe

    Luthe Jedi Youngling star 1

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    ::wibble:: Yes yes yes. Good boy! Good Ani! And Obi-Wan! So much less a bastard than you are in canon! ::loves them both::
     
  7. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, just wow. The writing of Obi-Wan's angst was perfect.
     
  8. jedi-solo-fel

    jedi-solo-fel Jedi Youngling star 2

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    This looks to be another fantastic work, Jedi-Princess-Solo :D

    Poor Obi-Wan... 3 years in the desert, and then out of the blue Anakin shows up- he's just not having an easy day, is he?
     
  9. HanSolosGal

    HanSolosGal Jedi Youngling star 2

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    WOW! This looks really kewl! I too saw the midnight premiere, which ROCKED! ANyway, keep up with the good work!
     
  10. Jedi_BMK

    Jedi_BMK Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This is great so far. Great job conveying all of Obi-Wan's conflicted emotions concerning Obi-Wan. And that must of been a shock to him at the end. Can't wait to see more.
     
  11. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Oh, I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
     
  12. AngelofDarkness

    AngelofDarkness Jedi Master star 2

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    You finally started posting this :D

    Great first post, you really conveyed how tormented Obi-Wan is by the past. And when Ani showed up... yeesh, what a shocker for the poor guy. Me thinks a certain jedi Master might be in need of a stiff drink :p ;)
     
  13. Dally

    Dally Jedi Master star 4

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    This is an excellent start. Please post more soon.
     
  14. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost star 4

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    Great start. =D=

    Can't wait to see where you take this.
     
  15. Skarlaya

    Skarlaya Jedi Youngling

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    This looks to be another interesting work, JPS- I look forward to the next post :)
     
  16. JainaSoloSkywalker

    JainaSoloSkywalker Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Excellent stuff so far :D
     
  17. Goddess_Jaya

    Goddess_Jaya Jedi Master star 4

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    Wowzer. I'm not an OT girl, but your What-If scenerios always get me hooked. Exactly when is this set? I know it has to be at least a few months after ROTS, but is it any longer?

    Oh, and great post!
     
  18. Anakin_Heartbreaker

    Anakin_Heartbreaker Jedi Master star 4

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    This is awesome! :)

    You did a fantastic job of conveying Obi-Wan's thoughts, his feelings and his dilemma.

    The mental anguish must have been unbearable, knowing that he let Anakin live. But now, Anakin is lying before him...I truly can't wait to see where this is going. I hope you post soon! :)
     
  19. Siaynoqsbride

    Siaynoqsbride Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh, this is good. I really like this. Very intriguing, and it seems very well-thought out. Poor Obi-Wan! Anakin just showing up like that was a shock!

    Update soon!

     
  20. Jedi_Linewalker

    Jedi_Linewalker Jedi Master star 2

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    Emotional and vivid, realistic and captivating. Excellent job
     
  21. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oooh, I am enjoying this very much! You have Obi-Wan's emotions down perfectly! :D


    Eager for more! :D
     
  22. skywalker64089

    skywalker64089 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Joining the Throng in saying MORE PLEASE!

    The fact that Obi-Wan is constantly mulling the decisions that he made over the last few years is just like him. But seems like his reasoning is a little circular.

    S.
     
  23. Arcalian

    Arcalian Jedi Youngling star 3

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  24. Jaina_and_Jag

    Jaina_and_Jag Jedi Master star 5

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    I love this! :D Definitely interesting twist with Anakin not getting the blacksuit and all. :) Can't wait for more.
     
  25. agentj

    agentj Jedi Knight star 2

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    Whoa! Through most of it, I was thinking, "How is this AU? This matches up so well with the movie and the book!" and then--bam!--you laid it on us! You're evil, you know. [face_devil]
     
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