Saga Qui-Gon and Tahl Return! Alternate Universe SHORT story- please R&R

Title: Qui-Gon and Tahl Return
Era: AU Prequal Trillogy
Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, and Tahl
Notes: Kind of bad. Wrote it quick in response to a challenge where i had to use Tahl, Obi-Wan, and Corellian Ale. Worte it quick because i wanted to participate and wouldn't be there when it was due so i turned it in early.


Obi-Wan and Tahl!

Obi-Wan Kenobi walked through the halls of the Jedi temple when something caught his eye. A person he knew to be dead. His former master?s love-interest, Tahl, wandered the isles. She was dead, but she was here, and real! In her hand was a large cup of Corellian Ale, and she wobbled along and jumped into Obi-Wan?s confused hands.
?Halloooo, Hottie!? she cried, and pushed him near a supply closet. She kissed him passionately and Obi-Wan was amazed. ?How are you here?? he spat, her breathe stank of Corellian Ale, something Obi-Wan couldn?t stand. ?I have come for you, Hottie!? Tahl said just Qui-Gon rounded the corner. He saw them smiled, and walked over. He pushed Obi-Wan away, and kissed Tahl, took the ale, drank and passed out. Obi-Wan stuck him in the closet and ran. ?What in the world!? he demanded!
Obi-Wan jumped from his bed, covered in sweat. ?Oh, just a dream, weird,? Obi-Wan laughed and lay back down.


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lol.

 

thanks. I don't usually get replies to my fanfics. Posting means a lot to me! Thanks MasterSareBabe!

 

wow thats better than you thought its so funny that tahl said hello hottie

 

Thanks! keep posting!