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FIC: One Special Knight (by Obi the Kid and BL Anderson)

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  1. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Subj: FIC: One Special Knight
    Date: 3/9/01 10:35:55 PM Eastern Standard Time
    From: HLNKID
    To: HLNKID


    TITLE: One Special Knight
    AUTHOR: B.L. Anderson and Obi the Kid
    E-MAIL: B.L. (anderson@hiwaay.net) & Obi (hlnkid@aol.com)
    RATING: PG
    SUMMARY: Obi gets in trouble...again. Pre-TPM
    FEEDBACK: YES!!
    ARCHIVE: Sorry guys. Only on Telly's page and mine (Obi's) right now.
    DISCLAIMER: Lucas owns them. We make no profit from the distribution of this story.

    NOTES: This is round robin that Brenda and I did while we were bored at work. Enjoy!!!

    ** Denotes: Obi's thoughts

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    One Special Knight
    ==============

    Qui-Gon opened his eyes and was startled to see his padawan staring at
    him. He sat up slowly, yawning. "What are you doing here, instead of
    in bed?"

    "Well...I was just trying to decide whether to tell you now or wait
    until in the morning."

    At once the Jedi master's stomach knotted. His apprentice had a knack
    for getting himself in trouble. "Tell me what?"

    ---------

    "Well, I um...I..." Obi-Wan's heart was racing.

    "Padawan!" The older Jedi's tone was firm. "What did you do?"

    Realizing there was no way out of this one, the apprentice took a
    nervous breath. "I lost your light saber."

    "YOU WHAT??? HOW?? WHERE???"

    "I kind of lost it in a game of...uh...poker." Before Obi-Wan could go
    any further, Qui-Gon was out of bed and grabbing his braid.

    "Come with me. Let's have a little talk."

    ---------

    Qui-Gon shoved the apprentice onto the couch. He paced before him
    trying hard to calm himself. It was hard to keep his focus on the Force
    however. Finally he stopped but dared not look at Obi-Wan. "First of
    all, why were you playing poker when you should have been sleeping?
    Secondly...how did you get my lightsaber??"

    "Well...you are a sound sleeper Master."

    The man whirled around but was able to stop himself before he grabbed
    that oh-so-tempting braid hanging there. Slowly, but through clenched
    teeth he said, "But WHY did you decide on MY light saber!"

    ----------

    Obi-Wan looked into the anger filled eyes of his teacher. "Because,
    I...um..."

    "TALK!!! NOW!!!"

    "I lost mine in last night's poker game." Attempting to move from the
    couch, Obi-Wan suddenly froze in his tracks.

    "What is Sith's hell is wrong with you? SIT DOWN!!! If you move, I may
    kill you."

    The apprentice grabbed a nearby pillow and hugged it to his chest. He
    felt sick. Qui-Gon was pacing the floor of the common area, he had to
    get control of his emotions before he actually did kill the boy.

    ----------

    "What is this sudden fascination with a game of chance? If you had
    better control of the Force you would have better self-control!"

    "But Master, what about that chance cube that Master Windu threw to see
    which of you would pay for supper when..."

    "Quiet! That is different. You don't understand. He tricked me and I
    was only trying to give him a taste of.... Why am I explaining this to
    YOU?" He paced again. "What do you plan to do to get my light saber
    back?"

    "Uh, I can't. I lost it in a fair game. I can't get it back." He saw
    the look on his mentor's face and realized he was losing his
    self-control. "Uh...maybe I could find something...of more value that
    Reeft would rather have...instead of your light saber?"

    "And what would that be. And...how do you intend to procure it?"

    "I guess this isn't the time to ask for an advance on my allowance..."
    his voice died off.

    Qui-Gon was glad he got quiet. One more word and he knew he would kill
    the boy.

    --------------

    An hour later, Qui-Gon opened the door to Obi-Wan's bedroom. "Well?
    Have you come up with any ideas as to how to get BOTH our sabers back?"

    A groggy padawan squinted when the light was flipped on.
    "Huh...wha...?"

    "You've been sleeping? Obi-Wan so help me. GET YOUR BUTT OUT OF
    BED!!!"

    Qui-Gon's frustration was growing. He would explode soon and he feared
    that his student would
     
  2. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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  4. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Hilarious! [face_laugh] I always enjoy you stories so much! Write more, post often! :D
     
  5. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

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    "I can see a storm of some kind on the horizon!" That was a good line! And Stretch! Hah, that was funny!
     
  6. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Heehee!!!! Thanks guys!!
     
  7. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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  8. Abbi_Cee

    Abbi_Cee Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL! That was too funny. [face_laugh] I especially loved the last line.
     
  9. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Abbi!!!
     
  10. Keyla_Kenobi

    Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 24, 2000
    HAHA!!! That was sooo funny!! :) I loved it! You both are great with humor guys!! :D
    Moreeeee!!!
     
  11. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Keyla!!!!!!!
     
  12. Maru-Ba

    Maru-Ba Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 25, 2000
    That was one funny fic! Keep up the good work. I really like the idea of the braid leesh.
     
  13. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You can take your padawan for a walk!
     
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