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To Bring Friends Back Together(a young Obi-wan fanfic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Neon Star, Jun 18, 2000.

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  1. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    In this fanfic, Obi-wan is three years old. He is a mischief young creche child who gets into trouble. But when he finds out that two friends of his (Qui-gon and Atrus) have an argument and split up, he tries to bring them back together. So are you interested?
     
  2. Jaded Skywalker

    Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I am!

    So, are you going to write it?

    Jaded Skywalker, (Atana from Order of the Gray)
     
  3. epic

    epic Ex Mod star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Ya, go ahead and write it.
     
  4. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I am going to write it today.
     
  5. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Coooool!!!!! I like!!!!!1

     
  6. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Very. Me have great intrest.
     
  7. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Here it is!
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    Young Obi-wan Kenobi crawled through air ducks. He didn't have a clue where he was going but he was just trying to get away from his angry creche master. He didn't mean to knock over inching powder onto the Master. He continued to crawl for a little will longer until he heard yelling from underneath him. He looked through the vent down at the two in the room. It was Atrus and Qui-gon having another of their "famous battles."
    "I can't stand this anymore!" Atrus yelled at the taller man.
    "Atrus, I told you that I didn't want to talk about it." Qui-gon said.
    "Yeah, like you haven't wanted to talk about anything else lately."
    "Atrus, this is not your problem."
    "Yeah right. It is defiantly my problem. You are pushing everyone away including me. Xanitos was not you fault."
    "I should have seen his faults and corrected them. Instead I let my pride blind me. So it is as much my fault as it is his."
    "All right. Maybe it is. But you need to talk about this with someone. If not me, then how about Yoda or someone."
    "I don't want talk to anyone."
    "You are not the only one that lost a padawan."
    "I know. But you don't know how it feels to give everything to someone then be betrayed by them.
    "How do you know what my life is like? Besides, I wouldn't push everyone away, like you do."
    "Atrus, try to calm down. How about you leave for now."
    "You want me to leave. Fine, I'll leave since you don't want our friendship to last."
    "I didn't say that!"
    "Then talk to me!"
    "I can't, you don't know how hard this is for me."
    "I could help you."
    "No one can help me."
    "Fine, be that way, mister all so mighty Jedi Master. I am out of this. Come by when you want to talk!" Atrus shouted as she walked out of the room
    Obi-wan was stunned. His two friends were having a fight. This was not good. He crawled into a side vent to follow Atrus. He was on top of a vent when it swung from under him. He fell down and hit Atrus from above.
    *****************
    Hope you like it!
     
  8. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 23, 2000
    Me still likes!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. Tenel'Ka

    Tenel'Ka Jedi Youngling star 3

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    oh no! Will Obi be yelled at? More please!
     
  10. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Here is the next part!
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    "Ahhhhhhh!" Obi-wan screamed as he collied with Atrus.
    He slammed into her shoulders and brought them both down.
    "What the!" Atrus said as she collied with the floor and saw him, "Obi-wan!"
    "Sorry, Atry." Obi-wan said with a sad look.
    "Its ok, but why dose it have to be me and Master Yoda that you have to collide with."
    "I don't know." he said with a cute shrug of his shoulders.
    "Well, we better get you to the healers to see if you damaged anything." Atrus said as she got up and picked him up.
    "No healers!" he pleaded as they headed down the hall.
     
  11. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    LOL what is it with Obi-wan and healers. He can't seem to get rid of them. Or a way from them.
     
  12. epic

    epic Ex Mod star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Heh, keep it up.
     
  13. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks for the comments and yes it seems like Obi-wan has a problem with the healers.
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    Atrus caring a screaming Obi-wan into the healers and put him on a table.
    "Now what did he do?" Anj-Paj(is that how you spell it?) asked as he examined the sqerming child.
    "He decided that it was a good day to jump on me, again." Atrus said casually.
    "Thats not true." Obi-wan pouted.
    "Well, he seems all right. You can take him back to the creche masters." Anj-Paj said.
    "No." Obi-wan said crossing his arms.
    Atrus sighed and asked, "Why not, Obi?"
    "Master Heron made at me."
    Just then the angery Creche Master appered in the door.
    "So you found the trouble maker." he said as he approached Obi-wan.
    "Yes, but why are you angery at him?" Atrus asked.
    "He delipertly spilt inching powered down my back." Heron said.
    "It was a accident." Obi-wan implied as he hide himself behind Atrus.
    "No it was not." Heron said.
    "I think that it was an accident and that you should not be angery at him for this simple mistake." Atrus said.
    "I will say wether or not he did by accident. Besides, he is not your responsiblety, Jedi Knight Atrus." Heron said then tried to push past her to get Obi-wan.
    "He is my responsiblely and if you touch him, you are going to regret it." Atrus said standing frim.
    The creche master ignored her and tried to push past again.
    "More aside." he said.
    "No, and I am warning you, Creche Master Heron." Atrus said.
    When he tried again to get past her, she punched him in the face. Heron went down, he was out cold.
    "Come on, Obi, I'll take you to the creche then I will go tell Master Yoda about this dumbo." Atrus said as picked Obi-wan up from the table and they walked out.
    Anj-Paj just groaned and had Heron carried to a bed.

     
  14. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Here is a short part!
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    They walked to the creche rooms.
    "Well, Obi, I'll see you later." Atrus said as she knelt and huged the boy.
    "Aren't you coming tonight, Atrey?" Obi-wan asked.
    "I don't think so, I have a lot to think about. Mabye tomorrow."
    "What do you have to think about?"
    "Some things. Now you need to get back to your group."
    "Alright."
    With that Atrus got up and left.
     
  15. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Way to tell him Atrus!!!!!!!!!!
     
  16. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Here is another short piece/ I promise I will write a bigger piece soon.
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    That night Obi-wan waited to see if Qui-gon was coming.
    "Come on, Obi. I don't think Wy-gon is coming." Bant said as she tried to get her friend away from the door.
    "I don't know what is happening but there is something wrong with Atrey and Wy-gon." Obi-wan said.
    "Like what?"
    "I saw a big fight of theirs and now nether of them are coming to watch us."
    "They'll get over it soon."
    "I don't know about that."
    "Time for bed, children." the creche master annouched.
    There was a lot of groans then the children climbed into their beds.
     
  17. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    This is so cute. More.
     
  18. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Good I love this story. Obi-wan is so sweet as a toddler.
     
  19. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks for the comments. Here is the next part.
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    Obi-wan peeked from under his covers. The creche master was asleep in her chair. He got up and crept to the door.
    "Where are you going, Obi?" Bant asked.
    "I am going to find Wy-gon."
    "What if you get caught?"
    "I won't." Obi-wan said and with that he snuck out of the door.
    He walked silently down the huge hall. He didn't have a clue to where he was going, he just knew that he had to find Qui-gon.
    "Where go are you?" a voice asked behind him.
    Obi-wan was so startled that when he turned around he slipped and fell down the stairs at his side.
    "Ok, are you, young child?" Yoda asked concerned as he made his way down the steps.
    Obi-wan's only answer was, "Owy."
     
  20. Jedi_Borme

    Jedi_Borme Jedi Youngling star 3

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    This is a good story. Can't wait to read the next part. Post some soon please.
     
  21. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    I love this story.
     
  22. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks for the comments!
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    Obi-wan opened his eyes and groaned, he was back here.
    "Now we are awake, hmm." Yoda said from beside him.
    "Yes, master Oda." Obi-wan said.
    "Doing what were you?"
    "Going to see Master Wy-gon?"
    "Stop getting in trouble you should."
    "Yes, Master Oda."
    "Get some rest you should." Yoda said as he got down from the chair he had been sitting on and left.
    Obi-wan closed his eyes but didn't go to sleep. A few minutes later he heard someone mutter outside.
    "You think, that after punching one person out, that she would stop." Anj-Paj muttered as he directed the padawans to put Qui-gon in the room.
    "I think he deserved it." one of the female healers said.
    "I don't want to hear it. Just put him in here with young Obi-wan tonight. Tommorrow we can make sure she didn't kill him or damage anything." Anj-Paj muttered.
    They layed the unconious Qui-gon down on the bed and after makeing sure everything was all right they left.
    (I'll ask him about that in the morning.) Obi-wan thought as he drifted off to sleep.
     
  23. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh no together at the healers again. LOL.
     
  24. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    An-Paj you are asking for trouble putting those two togeter, mayhem is sure to result LOL!!!!!


    Love little Obi, the way he says Master Oda, way tooooo cute for words!!!!!!!!!
     
  25. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Yes, he is, isn't he.;)
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    Qui-gon woke up and shook his head. He had a major headache. (That is the last time, I am going to get Atrus upset. This hurts way too much.) Qui-gon thought then groaned. He noticed that there was someone on his chest. After a moment, he recognized it as Obi-wan.
    "Hi, Wy-gon." Obi-wan said.
    "Hi, Obi-wan, What are you doing on me?" Qui-gon asked.
    "I was waiting for when you would wake up."
    "Well, I am awake now, so could you get off me?"
    "No."
    "Why not?"
    "I want to know what happened." Obi-wan said then crossed his little arms.
    "I don't want to talk about."
    "Tell me, please." Obi-wan pleaded.
    Qui-gon sighed, "All right, lets just say that Atrus and I had gotten into a fight. I made her really mad, so she punched me in the face, then kicked me in the stomach and sent me down the stairs, head first." Qui-gon said then groaned at the memory.
    "Owy." Obi-wan commented.
    "You got that right. So why are you here?"
    "I was going to go look for you since you didn't come to look after us and Master Oda saw me and surprised me and I fell down the stairs."
    "Wow, you?re lucky, that you were not hurt badly."
    "Yep."
    "So now can you get off me?"
     
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