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Before - Legends A Single Tear

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Taraum, Feb 4, 2006.

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  1. Taraum

    Taraum Jedi Knight star 3

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    This is a poem. Set in JA #6 or7. This is Qui-Gon's point of view. It's about Obi-Wan.

    A Single Tear

    I sit.
    I look out at the world flying around me.
    I think of what might have been.
    Of what still could be.

    It hurts.
    I hoped, prayed, that I would never feel this pain again.
    But here it is.
    There is no escaping it.

    My eyes.
    They tear as I think of you.
    My vision becomes blurry.
    And the way I see mirrors the way I feel.

    A single tear escaps my eye.
    It runs down swifty, cleansing, as it seems.
    No matter what my mind tells me,
    My heart knows better.


    The bond is still there.
    I cannot escape it.
    You, I think, cannot either.
    We are still connected.

    A single tear is lost in a wave.
    We may not be on the best of terms,
    But I know that it is there.
    Else, why would I cry a single tear for you?
     
  2. Sarabi

    Sarabi Jedi Youngling

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    Jan 5, 2006
    WOW!
     
  3. micky-nikki

    micky-nikki Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oh, that's so beautiful and sad! It made me want to cry and hug the big guy. Great job portraying his feelings. The whole thing was wonderfully done.
     
  4. JediCouncilMaster

    JediCouncilMaster Jedi Youngling star 6

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    That's an awesome Poem, Taraum! [face_love]
     
  5. Taraum

    Taraum Jedi Knight star 3

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    Jan 7, 2006
    [face_blush] Thanks all.
     
  6. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 26, 2005
    Yes, loverly poem indeed!
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A beautiful and powerful poem! =D=
     
  8. MASTER_KAYM

    MASTER_KAYM Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 3, 2004
    Awsome! Really beautiful =D=
     
  9. Nienna_Narmolanya

    Nienna_Narmolanya Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 5, 2005
    Else, why would I cry a single tear for you?

    =D= Wow, Tartaum! A beautiful, powerful, and thought-provoking poem. Very well written! Every word seemed hand picked to convey the fullest meaning. :D
     
  10. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jul 29, 2004
    That was so beautiful. So dramatic. So... [face_worried] ... so ... :_| :_| :_|
     
  11. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A single tear is lost in a wave.

    :_| Wonderful!
     
  12. Kestrel_Kenobi

    Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 26, 2005
    This is lovely - so sad..*sniff*...but beautifully written.

    Great job :)
     
  13. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    Wow, very good poem. You portrayed his feelings very well.

    Good poem. :)
     
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