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Before - Legends Dirty little secrets~ Siriwan~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jedi_siriwan, Mar 21, 2006.

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  1. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Title: Dirty little secrets
    Author: Jedi_siriwan
    Timeframe: Pre TPM
    Characters: Obi Wan, Siri
    Genre: Romance, Humor
    Summary: Everybody has a secret
    Notes: This is my first story, hope some people like it!

    Chapter One

    Obi Wan and Siri were walking the temple grounds. They had been sparring for the past 2 hours

    so they decided to get some fresh air. "It's so beautiful," Said Siri, looking around at the

    big open field that surounded the temple. " Yes it is," said Obi Wan. " Are you still mad

    that I beat you when we were sparring?" laughed siri. " Hey you got lucky," cried Obi

    Wan. "There is no such thing as luck," said Siri giving him a hard shove. " Ow, that's where

    you burned me!" " Oh i'm sorry" cried Siri, rubbing the burn. " you know that just makes it

    worse", said Obi Wan. " Well, you know how much I love hurting you." "Yeah I do," said Obi

    Wan. Siri looked up, into his beautiful blue/grey eyes. "Don't try to be charming Kenobi,"

    said Siri. " Well a guy can try can't he?" Siri did a big grin. " Come on Prince Charming,

    let's go back to your room and make some tea." They walked across the grass and into the

    temple. A few minutes later they were at obi Wan's door." My master is in the room",

    said Obi Wan sensing his masters presents." With someone else." Siri looked at Obi Wan and

    then at the door. Obi Wan quietly unlocked the door and peeked in. His eyes widened at what

    he saw. Qui Gon and Tahl Kissing.

    Tbc.
    hope some people liked it so far, i dont know if i am any good!
     
  2. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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  3. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Is that good? [face_worried]
     
  4. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Well I see Qui-Gon has some explaining to do :p

    Very nice beginning. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

    =D= =D= =D=
     
  5. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Wohooo you go QuiGon!!!!!

    Great so far..PM me with updates please.(<if you do plan to do that)
     
  6. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I am glad some people like it! of course i will PM you
     
  7. MoeTharen

    MoeTharen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *Posting here so I won't be forgotten in the PM list*


    :D


    I really do like this very much. I hope to see an update soon. :D



    -Commander Tharen-
     
  8. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Yes it is good! I was just speechless. [face_blush] Please add me to your PM list. :D
     
  9. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oh thanks~ of course i'll add you!
     
  10. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    congrats on a great story!!and thank you for agreeing to PM me with updates!!
     
  11. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Thank you and your welcome!!
     
  12. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Chapter 2.

    Qui-Gon immediately felt his padawans presence. He stopped kissing Tahl. Obi-Wan's eye widened when he saw his master looking his way. He quickly closed the door.

    He couldn't talk about what he just saw with his master, not yet anyway. "Siri?" Asked Obi-Wan. " Yeah?" "Run." He took her hand and they ran.

    They ran to the room of a thousand fountains. "Obi-Wan, tell me what you saw and why we ran." Demanded Siri. " I saw my master and Tahl...uh? Kissing." Siri was just as surprised as he was." But... the code." " I know and we ran here because I don't want to talk to my master about what I saw, yet." " Wow, this is a lot to take in," said Siri. "Uh...Siri?" "Yes?" " You?re still holding my hand." Siri blushed and let go. ? Sorry.?

    Qui-Gon was so embarrassed. He truly loved being jedi and he truly loved his padawan but he also truly loved Tahl. He didn?t know what to do. He would have to talk about this with his padawan.

    Obi-Wan headed back to his room a few hours after he saw Qui-Gon and Tahl kissing. He knew as soon as he stepped in his doorway his master would be all over him, telling him that what he saw was nothing. But Obi-Wan knew his master had gone to far this time.
     
  13. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I sense the plot thickening...great post!

    Thanks for the PM!
     
  14. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I am so speechless! :eek:

    In other words...MORE!!!! :D
     
  15. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very nice update.

    I look forward to Qui-Gon's little chat with Obi-Wan.

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  16. MoeTharen

    MoeTharen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    He couldn't talk about what he just saw with his master, not yet anyway. "Siri?" Asked Obi-Wan. " Yeah?" "Run." He took her hand and they ran.


    [face_laugh]



    This is very interesting! I really liked your update! :D




    -Commander Tharen-
     
  17. Richenda

    Richenda Jedi Youngling

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    interesting post... always figured qui-gon would be a romantic at heart, but I have a hard time picturing him breaking the code to kiss somebody... but anythings possible right?
     
  18. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    chapter 3

    Obi Wan took a breath and walked into his room. " Padawan, there you are," said Qui Gon.
    " Here I am," said Obi Wan, smiling with a false smile. " Uh.. so padawan, how was your day?" asked Qui Gon.

    " Great," said Obi Wan., " and disturbing" he added under his breath. " What was that padawan?" asked Qui Gon. " Nothing." Obi Wan turned his back to his master and walked up to the kitchen table and put hid comelink on it. then he walked to the couch and sat down. " Padawan.. what you saw today was nothing." " Somehow i knew you were going to say that," said Obi Wan.


    Qui Gon sighed. He didn't know what to say. " Master, you broke the rules I could turn you in to the council and you could be expelled from the order," said Obi Wan," but i won't because you are the closest thing I have to a father and I would not be the same without you." Qui Gon's face suddenly lit up. He sat down next to Obi Wan and hugged him. "uh...Master your choking me." Qui Gon let go." Sorry." and then added," and what you said will never happen again."

    Siri walked up to Obi Wan, who was medatating in the medatating chamber. " Hi Siri," said Obi Wan, not bothering to open his eyes." Hey, so how did it go with your master?" Obi Wan sighed then told siri what happened. " Did I do the right thing, not telling any body about what I saw?"" That is up to you to decide." and she did something totally unexcpected. She leaned in and kissed his lips.
     
  19. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    She leaned in and kissed his lips. Yay how cute!!!! Great post and thanks for the PM!
     
  20. benknobi1

    benknobi1 Force Ghost star 6

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    Near the bottom of Chapter 2, the author misspelled the word "too"
    Near the bottom of Chapter 3, the author misspelled the word "decide"
     
  21. MoeTharen

    MoeTharen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:



    Ooooo she kissed him! :D This is getting rather exiting!


    -Commander Tharen-
     
  22. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    She leaned in and kissed his lips

    Yeah - you go Siri!

    Perhaps Obi-Wan will be a bit more understanding now?

    Very nice update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  23. Alishu06

    Alishu06 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was great, could u add me to your pm list?
     
  24. starwarsbeauty

    starwarsbeauty Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh I loved it! Great post! Please add me to your pm list!

    I love the stories between Obi wan/Siri and Qui- gon/Tahl! This was great!
     
  25. Jedi_siriwan

    Jedi_siriwan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!:D
     
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