Before - Legends Kaltes Herz (Cold Heart)

Title: Kaltes Herz
Author: Noemi Tenshi
Timeframe: After... JA 7...
Genre: Angst
Warnings: Death
Summary: Err- someone is going to kill someone else...
Part: 1/1

Disclaimer: Only the idea belongs to me.

Kaltes Herz (Cold Heart)

Mein Herz ist kalt und hart wie Stein
Vorbei ist all mein Sehnen
Mein Herz ist schwarz und ungestalt
Mein Herz ist kalt

(Translation)
My heart is cold and hard as stone
gone is all my carving.
My heart is black and bulky.
My heart is cold.

[© Lyrics by Subway to Sally, Kaltes Herz]


I watch unaffected how the young man, so young and naive as I was once, struggles against my hold. I watch as his life ceases away. He stopps struggling and then stopps living. I wait for a feeling of remorse but none comes. I don?t care as I had done before... the incident.

Then I felt remorse and sorrow for so many things that I thought were unjust and cruel. Truth to be told I don?t think so anymore. Those things need to happen. Individuals, who do such - considered - evil things have their reasons, I now understand.

And I don?t care anymore if someone cries, hates, dies,... . It doesn?t concern me as I didn?t concern them.

I have one goal left to accomplish.
I want the satisfaction to see the light dimming in my former Master eyes.

This is why I am on this planet. I heard rumors that he?s here. And this dead, young man over there confirmed it. But he had wanted to warn my former Master of my planed actions. And this, I couldn?t let happen. My former Master will know of my presence, when I think he should know. And he?ll know soon.

So I walk the road down to his residence, losing myself in memories.
The betrayel of my former Master is overplaying in my mind. But I don?t feel the hurt, the sadness anymore as I felt then. I just have cold hate left. He?s going to pay for this.

For taking away my childhood, that I should have had. For taking away my family. For breaking the promis to be my family. And for taking away my father.

He told me lies about forgiveness and love. Tho he himself cannot forgive and love. But he expect this of me. I don?t think so.

A cold smirk is gracing my lips.

I walk in my former Masters appartement. He is sleeping. He has become careless. He didn?t sense the danger I pose.

But he is waking. Shifting uneasy and now opening his eyes. As he lay his eyes upon me he is wide awake and reaching for his lightsabre.

?Are you searching this, Master?? I ask playing with his desired object.
?What are you doing here?? he asks frightfully but accusing. As I had no right to be near him.
?But Master, you need your Apprentice, don?t you? You need me in such a dangerous mission? I say innocently, desperatly.

?You are not my Apprentice? he hisses trough gritted teeth. He appears angered but I saw the glimpse of sadness in his eyes at my words. I smile.
?Oh...? I say, appearing thoughtful, ?that?s true. So who is going to rescue you??

He doesn?t answer.

I activate his lightsabre and pierce his chest with it in an almost nonchalant motion.
He sharply draws in a breath and supresses a cry.
I watch him curiously. Then I take out the lightsabre and pierce him again. And again. And again.

?You... you have fallen!? he gasps, unbelievingly.

I crook my head to the side.
?I... have??
And then I aim at his heart. He doesn?t do anything to prevent the hit. He submitts to his destiny. He acceptes it... as a punishment.

...

It?s strange.
I don?t feel the satisfaction I thought I would feel as I tear his heart apart ? both with the sabre and my actions, words.

But also I don?t feel sorrow.
I feel ? nothing.

He takes his last breath and as he outbreaths he whispers my name from soon-to-be dead lips.

?Obi-Wa---?

He is dead.

I drop the lightsabre and turn to leave.
This chapter of my life is closed.
And so is my heart.

~+~

Weeeeell, I so wanted to write an evil Obi-Wan... he is always pi

 

Frightening!

Very intreging. I'm not sure I agree with you - but that's okay, too.

Well done! I liked the lyrics - I've never heard the group (not too much of a surprise).

Just Jill

 

Very dark and creepy!

It?s strange.
I don?t feel the satisfaction I thought I would feel as I tear his heart apart ? both with the sabre and my actions, words.

But also I don?t feel sorrow.
I feel ? nothing.

He takes his last breath and as he outbreaths he whispers my name from soon-to-be dead lips.

?Obi-Wa---?

He is dead.

I drop the lightsabre and turn to leave.
This chapter of my life is closed.
And so is my heart.

VERY powerful ending.

 

Wow, this is an atonishing piece of... art.
I love the way you described Obi-Wans thoughts and actions... .
First I thought you're writing about Xanatos... .
It was creepy to discover that *this* is Obi-Wan.
I hope to read more from you.

 

@just jill

Frightening!
Well, that was intended XD


Well done!
Thanks

I liked the lyrics - I've never heard the group (not too much of a surprise).
It's a german group... they're veeeery good ^.^
I love them.


@VaderLVR64

Very dark and creepy!
*beams* Thanks.

VERY powerful ending.
*sniggers*
Well a story without a powerful ending is not a good story.


@Healer_Leona

Nicely done. The song works perfectly with this darkside Obi-Wan.
I know. I heard the somg and I thought: Wow, that's Obi-Wan, as I like him ^^


Very creepy how he toyed with Qui-Gon.
Yeah, I liked writing it. It's fun.


@Tassea

Wow, this is an atonishing piece of... art.
*blushes*
Thanks

I love the way you described Obi-Wans thoughts and actions... .
First I thought you're writing about Xanatos... .
Yeah, I wanted you all to think that...

It was creepy to discover that *this* is Obi-Wan.
I hope to read more from you.
Thanks.