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Saga Strung Together- AU Obi-Wan, Anakin, Qui-Gon 12/06

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  1. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Summary: AU. About 7 years post TPM. Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker are the unknowing pawns in a race between two Sith as Qui-Gon Jinn struggles to reconnect with his former padawan and keep his current one firmly planted in the Light.

    A/N: I think I started to post this thing two or three years ago and never finished. So I decided to lock the old one, repost this two or three chapters at a time, and (hopefully) finish this up since it?s very close to being complete and other bunnies are biting. You?ll have to forgive the fact that I?m not the most polished writer to grace these boards. I really don?t have the time or the inclination to obsess over being perfect.

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    Chapter 1

    Power. As both a Sith master and Supreme Chancellor of the Republic nobody in the galaxy wielded more power than Darth Sidious. However, one never achieved such status by being content with his present position, thus no matter how much power and influence he currently possessed, Sideous was always pondering ways to acquire more.

    To his reasoning the way to prove himself as the greatest Sith in history was to have the most powerful apprentice by his side, and nobody dripped with more Force potential than a young man named Anakin Skywalker, the Jedi?s so-called ?Chosen One?.

    Sidious had sensed the boy?s vast potential several years ago on Naboo and had made it a point to keep in close contact with the young Force prodigy after he was taken as an apprentice by the venerable Qui-Gon Jinn.

    Much to the Sith?s delight it was soon clear that young Skywalker had an exploitable weakness or two. For a start, there was the boy?s strong sense of attachment and possessiveness- a trait strongly considered to be taboo among the closed minded Jedi. However, what the Sith Lord truly reveled in was Skywalker?s own thirst for power and control.

    Gripping the rail of the balcony on which he stood, Sidious peered out into the dark Coruscant sky and smiled. Anakin Skywalker was out there somewhere, and he was no longer a little boy or a Force novice. He was an exceedingly gifted Jedi padawan, and he was ripe for the taking. All he had to do was get around Master Jinn.

    OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo

    Always the picture of grace and elegance. To anyone who had ever met him it would come as little surprise that Lord Tyrannus managed to keep an air of regality in his quick stride despite the dark dreary surroundings of the Sith?s lair located deep in the underbelly of Coruscant.

    His master had summoned him and when Darth Sidious gave an order it was in one?s best interest to obey it as quickly as possible. However, that didn?t mean that one needed to look rushed.

    In truth, Tyrannus despised taking orders from anyone- his Sith master in particular. However, being the Sith?s apprentice served his purposes-for now. Soon enough, he would take on his own apprentice and make his move to overthrow Sidious. He would then create his own order of Jedi- one that did not fear embracing it?s power and influence.

    Despite what Darth Tyrannus considered to be his own personal code of honor, the Sith apprentice felt no shred of guilt over his desire to turn on his master- for there was no question that Sideous was merely biding his time with Tyrannus until he could lure the Skywalker boy to his side. Once replaced, Sideous would dispose of Tyrannus by any means he saw fit- but only if the dark apprentice didn?t dispose of him first.

    Tyrannus pursed his lips for a moment in thought. He grudgingly had to admit that he could understand his master?s fascination with the boy. Skywalker did indeed exhibit vast raw potential. The possibilities with the youth were seemingly endless. However, Tyrannus also suspected that the young Skywalker lacked both a connection to and control of his powers due to his late training and unusual upbringing. He was too impulsive and emotional and that made him too risky a prospect to a man like Tyrannus.

    Skywalker may have been Sideous? i
     
  2. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter 2

    Power. Pure and simple. Anakin Skywalker stood tall behind his master in the center of the Jedi Council chambers while awaiting their next assignment.

    He eyed his mentor of the past seven years appreciatively and smiled to himself. Few beings in the galaxy could radiate raw power like Qui-Gon Jinn. Impressively tall, powerfully built, and capable of leveling even the most pompous politician (and even some Jedi Council members) with one look from his piercing blue eyes- it was obvious from appearance alone that Jinn was someone you didn?t want to tangle with.

    At this moment, Qui-Gon Jinn?s powerful gaze was focused squarely on the twelve member of the council. As was the custom, the Council members kept the master/padawan pair waiting several minutes before addressing them. The Council would say that it as to allow the duo some time to ?center? themselves, but Anakin believed the real reason was that the high ranking masters enjoyed watching others sweat before their presence.

    Mace Windu was the first to speak, (right in the nick of time Anakin thought for if he had to wait in silence much longer he was certain that he would have heaved a huge sigh of frustration).

    ?As I?m sure you are aware,? Mace began, ?there have been attempts on the lives of several Senate members recently.?

    Qui-Gon swallowed before answering, a subtle indication that for some reason Mace?s statement had already struck a nerve. ?We are aware,? he answered simply.

    ?The latest threat seems to be aimed at Senator Amidala of Naboo,? Mace continued. ?We?re sending you and you?re apprentice to Naboo first thing in the morning. You are to escort the Senator to an as of yet undisclosed location until we are confident the threat has passed.?

    ?With all due respect,? Qui-Gon countered, ?I find it very difficult to believe that Amidala has asked for protection.?

    ?You?re correct. Her protection is at the behest of Chancellor Palpatine, and I?ll have you know that he requested you and Padawan Skywalker specifically for the assignment. You should consider it a great honor to be trusted so,? Mace replied.

    Qui-Gon had said something in response, but all words were lost on Anakin Skywalker by now. His mind wandering to the lush planet of Naboo and it?s beautiful Senator. From the moment he laid on her all those years ago, she had been in his every dream. Now they would be reunited- only this time he was no child.

    Even better was the fact that he had been requested by the Supreme Chancellor himself. Surely Padme would be impressed by the faith that the highest ranking official in the Republic placed in him and his master. He was beginning to think that he couldn?t have dreamed of a better assignment when Qui-Gon?s voice brought him slowly back to reality.

    ?Very well, masters. My padawan and I will pack at once,? Qui-Gon said turning on his heel to leave.

    He was halted by Master Yoda. ?Dismiss you, we did not.?

    Qui-Gon turned back around to face the Council and Mace continued, ?We thought you should know that we?ll be sending Obi-Wan with you.?

    The Jedi Master tried to hide his shock under a mask of neutrality, but his padawan didn?t fare as well, and from behind him Qui-Gon heard the boy yell a surprised and frustrated, ?What??

    The twelve members of the council all glanced at one another, their disapproval of Anakin?s behavior evident on their faces.

    Qui-Gon Jinn, above all things, was a masterful negotiator. He recovered from his shock quickly and threw a warning glance over his shoulder. He straightened to his full height and immediately began smoothing over the situation.

    ?Forgive the rudeness of my padawan?s outburst, but I can?t help but agree with his sentiment. There is no way that Knight Kenobi could be fit for duty right now.?

    Qui-Gon raised a suspicious eye towards the group. It was common knowledge that Kenobi had only recently returned from Dantooine and had not returned well. If the Council was willing to send the knight
     
  3. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Quite a bit to start out with here, but a wonderful read so far. I liked how each chapter started with power and we got a glimpse of both dark and light side of it. Of course I loved the description of Qui-Gon. [face_love] :*

    Really sounds like Anakin need to be knocked down a peg or two, he's very arrogant.

    I'd like to know hwere this is going, might I ask for PM updates?

     
  4. Ocelotl_Nesto

    Ocelotl_Nesto Jedi Master star 4

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    I dont need a PM, I watch/lurk the board during lunch... Keep it coming. I like the plotline.
     
  5. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    A/N: Umm...I actually forgot that I was reposting this until someone was kind enough to remind me. I?m easily distracted...usually by other stories.

    Thank you, leona and Nesto for the replies. And thank you Dooku_Darklighter for the reminder. [face_blush]


    Chapter 3

    The stout politician walked softly into the training salle and stood silently next to the preoccupied Mon Calamari Jedi that he had recently become acquainted with. Noting the cause of her distraction on the catwalks above the senator clasped his hands behind his back and waited patiently to be addressed.

    After several moments the young Jedi finally spoke but did not turn her eyes away from her subject, ?Forgive my rudeness, Senator Bitsma, but if I don?t focus he might try to pull a fast one on me.?

    ?No apology necessary, Knight Eerin,? he replied. The Senator then glanced at the Jedi above working through the moves of an upper level kata then added, ? I never noticed before the grace and beauty of the Jedi arts. You are a truly amazing group of beings.?

    Bant Eerin gave the Mon Calamari equivalent of a deep frown. ?We don?t all make it look like that,? she began. ?In fact most of us can?t and even more still don?t even see the point of such training anymore. By and large we are negotiators.?

    ?Yes, but not all of you,? Bitsma noted.

    ?No, not all. Some of us are healers, some pilots or historians, and-?

    ?Some are soldiers,? he finished.

    ?Guardians,? she corrected. ?Never soldiers.?

    ?Semantics,? the man scoffed. ?When duty calls one to put his life on the line for the protection of others- that is a soldier. There is no shame in that.?

    Without preamble the Jedi leaped from the catwalk and landed a short distance from the Senator and the Mon Calamari Jedi. ?Well?? he questioned as he grabbed a towel from a nearby bench and dried the sweat from his face.

    ?Hmmph!? Bant snorted as she crossed her arms in defiance.

    A faint smile tugged at the corner of the young man?s lips at her gesture. He had performed perfectly, and he knew it.

    ?One of these days that cockiness of yours is going to get you in trouble,? she scolded.

    Obi-Wan Kenobi walked over and patted his long time friend on the shoulder. ?I?m sure it will,? he laughed, ?but today it gets me released from your tender loving care.? With a dramatic sigh he added, ?No more poking and prodding...no more Mon Cal stew, which I?m certain is just another name for Master Yoda?s gruel...?

    The young Jedi ducked a quick swipe of his friend?s data pad then turned and gave a shallow bow in acknowledgment of the Dantooine Senator.

    ?To what honor do we owe your visit, Senator?? Obi-Wan inquired politely, instantly transforming his demeanor from that of a childhood playmate to one of a revered diplomat.

    Bitsma responded to the change with a hearty laugh. ?You know very well why I?m here, Obi-Wan Kenobi. And the honor is indeed mine,? he said while playfully mimicking the Jedi?s bow.

    The Senator?s tone then went abruptly serious as he continued, ?I owe you my life. The planet of Dantooine is indebted to you for your service. We will not soon forget.?

    ?I appreciate the gesture, Senator, but you needn?t have troubled yourself to come here. I was simply doing my job.?

    At the Knight?s response the Senator turned and favored Bant with a wry smile then mouthed the word ?soldier? with a wink.

    Turning back to Kenobi he said,? Nonetheless, if ever I can be of service to you or the Jedi, simply say the word.

    ?Thank you, sir,? Obi-Wan nodded.

    Moments later Jedi Councilor Mace Windu entered the training facility and headed towards the trio. ?I apologize for the interruption,? he said in greeting, ?but I need to discuss a Jedi assignment.?

    Senator Bitsma took the subtle hint and politely excused himself from the group. ?I can see you all have business to attend to. Take care, Knight Kenobi and may the Force be with you.?

    Obi-Wan ret
     
  6. Cushing's Admirer

    Cushing's Admirer Chosen One star 7

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    Thank you for continuing. Hope to follow this to the end! :) [:D] =D=

    *Hisses* I don't like Sidious! Thanks for keeping Qui-Gon, Bant, and Tyranus around though. Not too keen on Ani being Qui's apprentice...that probably means there's resentment on both young men's parts. I've noticed it on Ani's so far. Interesting notion: Obi-Wan as Dooku's apprentice. Though I don't see it as likely, I do hope both men survive the story. Good job so far! :)
     
  7. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Dooku Darklighter, I like Qui-Gon and Tyrannus too much to leave them out. :p Heck, I'd throw Xan in too if I could find a way to figure him into the story. Oh, and there's definately a bit of resentment between Ani and Obi going both ways here. Poor Qui-Gon may have to referee. [:D]

    On with the reposting of a story that I should have finished three years ago.


    Chapter 4
    Obi- Wan Kenobi squinted to better view the transport he was about to board. To his dismay, he found it to be one of the smaller, sleeker models that the Republic had to offer. As a padawan, he would have been thrilled. As a knight, it made no difference- except this time he was hoping for a bulk cruiser- something large enough for him to sucessfully hide himself in.

    He hesitated for a brief moment befor making his ascent up the ramp. He had expertly avoided his former master for the better part of seven years, and he knew that he would have little chance of doing so here. But it was either face Qui-Gon Jinn or the wrath of the Jedi council, and he reasoned that Qui-Gon was far more likely to leave him be once the mission was completed.

    His only hope was that the tall master would view him as any other Jedi knight assigned to him and not the burdensome padawan of his past. Qui-Gon Jinn, he thought to himself, Seven years and I'm still worrying about his opinion.

    The young knight straightened his posture as he approached Qui-Gon Jinn and Anakin Skywalker at the top of the ramp and shook off the pain that accompanied the movement. Now was not the time to appear weak.

    He stopped in front of the pair and gave a polite formal bow, "Master Jinn and Padawan Skywalker," he said, "it is my honor to be of assistance to you on
    this assignment."

    "Obi-Wan," Qui replied simply with a nod, but his piercing blue eyes were fixed intensly on the younger man as if searching for something.

    Obi-Wan waited for the towering Jedi to stand aside and allow him clear entrance into the ship, but Qui-Gon simply stood there... staring, unaware that he was blocking the knight's path. Obi-Wan simply stood for several seconds under the scrutiny, but grew more uncomfortable with each passing moment.

    "If you'll excuse me," he finally spoke up when he could bear no more, "I would like to look over the mission reports one more time".

    "Of course," Qui-Gon said a bit more hurriedly than he intended as he realized for the first time that he was blocking his former student's path. Qui-Gon quickly stepped aside to allow Obi-Wan clear entry into the transport, and watched as the man quickly made way for his quarters.

    The years seemed to have changed Obi-Wan very little. The braid was long gone and the spikes had grown out into copper waves that crept down his neck in the back and hung quite deliberatly in the eyes in front as if to hide anything they might unwillingly reveal. Qui-Gon wasn't sure if he was disappointed that those beautiful blue-green eyes were partiallyhidden from view, or if he was grateful that he didn't have to see the pain locked behind a mask of steely determination that he was sure he would find if they weren't.

    The Jedi Master decided that he would mediatate on that. It was, after all, going to be a long trip.

    OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO

    The trio of Jedi arrived on the planet of Naboo under the cover of nightfall, and all were momentarily relieved to be off of the small transport and in the fresh air. It had been an awkwardly quiet and uncomfortable trip, but now that there was a mission to accomplish the three easily settled into routine professionalism.

    After a quick scouting of the area, the Jedi regrouped near the waterfall to figure on their best course of action. The palace lie just beyond a pair of wrought iron gates held in place by two expertly crafted stone walls. A group of battle droids were just inside the gate in a seemingly aimless patrol of the palace grounds.

    ?What?s your assessment?? Qui-Gon asked turning his head towards Obi-Wan.

    Obi-Wan pursed his lips brie
     
  8. ConStar

    ConStar Jedi Youngling

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    So, you have rewritten this story.(?) Well, I liked it the first time around and I think I'll like it this time just as much. I favour storys that deal with the relationship between Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon and Anakin after Qui-Gon survived Naboo and took Anakin as his padawan. Being an Obi-Wan-Fan I admit that I'm not impartial in this. :p

    Please, keep posting!
     
  9. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    ConstarI'm quite partial to Qui-Gon hanging around as well. :D I'm glad you liked this the first time around.


    Chapter 5

    Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker cleared the distance to the palace, and, using Jedi enhanced stealth, avoided the few battle droids that were patrolling the halls within.

    They rounded the corner to their destination and found Qui-Gon Jinn standing before the entrance of the throne room with a look of deep concentration on his face as he tried to manipulate the wiring to the door.

    ?What?s the problem?? inquired Obi-Wan.

    Qui-Gon frowned. ?The door?s been jammed shut, and I can?t seem to-?

    ?If you?ll allow me, Master,? Anakin interjected as he took the wiring from Qui-Gon?s hands and began to work it on his own. It was only a matter of seconds before the door hissed open.

    ?You?re almost as handy as an astromech,? Obi-Wan quipped .

    ?Handier,? Anakin answered back.

    Obi-Wan rolled his eyes. ?Yes, but droids are never obnoxious and they always do as they?re told. The same can hardly be said of you.?

    Before Anakin could respond an exasperated Qui-Gon pointed to the door and said, ?Shall we??

    The Jedi Master led the way into the darkened room and the two younger Jedi followed. All was quiet for the space of a heartbeat, but then a shot rang out from the corner. Instantly, Qui-Gon?s lightsaber sprang to life and the blast was deflected harmlessly into the ceiling.

    ?Master Jinn?? a small feminine voice called.

    ?At your service, Senator.?

    The lights flickered on to reveal the 21 year old senator hovered in the corner and still in her nightclothes. In an unusual abandonment of all formality Padme Amidala ran across the room and embraced the large Jedi in a warm hug.

    ?It?s so good to see you again,? she started but was rendered silent as she became suddenly aware of her lack of dress and the intense gaze of the young man just to Qui-Gon?s left.

    Sensing the woman?s deep discomfort, Obi-Wan shrugged off his cloak and draped it over her shoulders. ?Here, m?lady,? he offered.

    Padme visibly relaxed as she wrapped the garment around herself and felt a good measure of her dignity return. ?Please forgive my inappropriate attire,? she said, automatically resuming her political persona. ?Upon hearing of the presence of the battle droids I rushed right over here to contact the Senate before they could tamper with our communications.?

    ?A very prudent decision,? Qui-Gon said.

    ?Are we being invaded again?? Padme asked.

    ?Qui-Gon folded his arms over his chest before launching into his explanation of his presence. ?I believe the droids are merely an attempt at diversion. We encountered an assassin nearby and have reason to believe that you?re his primary target. We need to escort you to safety at once.?

    ?You mean to hide me,? she said defiantly.

    ?Senator, we are here at the behest of the Supreme Chancellor himself. He grew concerned for your safety when his sources told him you would be targeted next.?

    ?I hate cowering to some political bully,?

    ?Padme,? Qui-Gon began in an attempt to get past the woman?s political self, ?I needn?t remind you that there have been six Republic senators assassinated in the past year- three while under Jedi protection. And the attempt on Senator Bitsma was very close. You do your people or your ideals no good dead.

    ?Very well,? Padme conceded, for she knew the Jedi Master well enough to know that she would not change his mind. ?Lead the way.?

    Qui-Gon turned and led the senator out of the throne room. After she followed, Obi-Wan and Anakin fell in step behind, effectively forming a protective circle around the young woman.

    ?Once again I am grateful for your service, Master Jinn. I am indebted to you and your companions,? she said.

    Qui-Gon laughed softly. ?We are merely doing our duty, Senator, which I?m sure you can appreciate. And I believe that we?ve all met before, so you may drop the formalities if you
     
  10. Starwen_Skywalker

    Starwen_Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Great story! The whole situation with Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Qui-Gon is so tense. I'm just waiting for Obi-Wan or Anakin to lose their cool at any moment. I can't wait to read more [face_dancing]

    If you're doing a pm list, I would like to be on it.
     
  11. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Starwen Thanks for the reply. I think Obi and Ani get to lose their cool a bit in a chapter or two. [face_dancing] I'm new to the PM list thing, but I'm happy to send you one if you want it.



    Chapter 6

    The two enormous warship prototypes simultaneously screeched out of hyperspace and hovered over the planet of Naboo. A hooded figure stood at the bridge of the one he had affectionately named Dark Destroyer with his ever present ?right hand?.

    ?I?m not sure that I understand, Lord,? Jillian spoke plainly. ?If you only wish to acquire Skywalker why even bother taking Jinn or the Senator alive??

    Sidious turned to regard his protege. ?I never discard anything that might be useful, and the boy?s affection for them may mean the difference between him seeing things my way- or not.?

    Even as the dark lord spoke a small Republic cruiser appeared from Naboo?s atmosphere. ?It looks like we?re not a moment too soon, ? he smiled. ?Block them and prepare a boarding party.?

    OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo

    Obi-Wan Kenobi and Qui-Gon Jinn stood on either side of the Republic pilot with their arms crossed and faces in deep in concentration. Two warships, the likes of which they had never seen before, were blocking the path of their intended trajectory.

    Qui-Gon was the first to speak. ?Turn around. We?re going to have to change course.?

    Obi-Wan indicated a small fleet of fighters emerging from the warships and sailing towards them. ?Something tells me that?s not what they have in mind,? he commented.

    In a flash the fighters swarmed the unarmed transport and were raining blaster fire upon it.

    ?Do you see any way out of this?? Qui-Gon questioned the pilot with his usual Jedi calm despite the situation.

    ?Sure,? came the pilot?s sarcastic reply as he tried to avoid another round of fire. ?We just squeeze between the two big ones there and pray that we can stay on trajectory and make the jump to lightspeed before they incinerate us.?

    Kenobi grabbed the ships comm unit. ?Skywalker, get up here, now,? he ordered before plopping in the copilots chair and beginning the calculations necessary for the jump.

    ?What are you doing?? Qui-Gon questioned.

    ?Right now, Master Jinn, I?m praying your padawan is as good as he always boasting.?

    Anakin stormed into the cockpit, face covered in grease. ?This had better be important,? he barked, ?because in case nobody noticed the shields are about to go and I?m the one keeping them functioning.?

    Obi-Wan simply rolled his eyes. ?Stop whining, and start flying.?

    Despite the contempt he had for his subordinate rank in relation to Kenobi?s and his general dislike of taking orders from anyone, that was one command that Anakin Skywalker never needed to be told twice.

    ?Between them?? he asked as he forcibly dislodged the considerably stunned pilot from his seat.

    ?Yes, and preferably without getting us blown out of space,? Qui-Gon answered.

    ?This little trick is pretty pointless otherwise, Master,? Anakin said as he steered the ship full throttle towards the narrow gap between the two imposing ships while simultaneously avoiding the fighters on their tail.

    Obi-Wan gave Qui-Gon a sarcastic smirk- amused that, for once, someone other than himself was on the receiving end of Anakin?s sharp tongue. ?You know, I don?t recall ever being so mouthy as a padawan. You must really have your hands full,? he needled.

    Qui-Gon raised an eyebrow towards the young knight. ?Obviously you?re suffering from selective memory, because you?re entirely too young to be completely senile.?

    The two men braced themselves as Anakin unexpectedly threw the ship into a wild barrel in order to avoid the sudden fire coming from one of the lager vessels.

    ?Calculations?? Anakin questioned.

    ?Done,? Obi-Wan replied.

    ?Good. You?re not quite as incompetent as I thought you were.?

    ?What??

    ?Hit it, NOW!? Anakin ordered. A moment later they all breathed a sigh of relief as the ship safely lea
     
  12. Kynstar

    Kynstar Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh oh oh! Juz found this! Sweeeet Opal!! Loving it! So Dooku thinks he can get Obi to help him rid Sidious, eh? [face_mischief] I like that idea!

    Poor Obi :( One has to feel for him... and Anakin [face_shame_on_you] talking like that to your superiors... but then again it is Anakin we're talking about, eh? [face_laugh]

    Well done!! Love where this is leading to! :D :D
     
  13. dianethx

    dianethx Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Love the way this is playing out. Anakin really needs to shut up once in a while and Qui-Gon is not doing him any good letting him get away with it. I wonder what Obi-Wan is going to do if Anakin keeps this up.

    Great job with the tension. Please put me on your pm list for this one.
     
  14. Starwen_Skywalker

    Starwen_Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    You've written another amazing chapter! I just wanted to smack Anakin a few times for his snotty little comments to Obi-Wan. That boy could test the patience of a saint [face_laugh]

    I'll be interested to see if a relationship develops between Padme and Anakin. Keep up the good work and thanks for the pm!

     
  15. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I've only read the first post, but WOW! :eek: Please PM when you update, I don't want to miss a post! :D

    Once outside the throne room Tyrannus no longer bothered trying to conceal his pleasure at the turn of events. It was just as he had hoped. Jinn?s old padawan had become quite a force to be reckoned with. Soon, he would make his move to lure the Jedi to his side, but he had to ensure that Sidious didn?t get to Skywalker first.

    As it was, Tyrannus himself wasn?t above employing the occasional unsavory when it served his ambitions. He removed the comlink from his cloak and punched in a code. ?Get me Fett,? he called into the device. ?I have a job for him.?


    =D=
     
  16. Cushing's Admirer

    Cushing's Admirer Chosen One star 7

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    Please add me to the PM List! I catch up soon! Thanks for updating. [:D]
     
  17. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Kynstar [:D] Yep, Dooku's gunning for Kenobi. The Count may be a bit misguided, but he does have good taste. :p

    diane- Thanks for reading. I definately see Qui-Gon as having a very warm relationship with Anakin, but I also see him as aging at this point and maybe a bit more lenient than he would have been in the past. You have my permission to whack me if I get him completely wrong. :p

    Starwen- Thank you very much. Now as for Anakin and Padme... [face_whistling]

    Vadey- Hi, mama vadey. Thanks for dropping in.

    Dooku-Darklighter- Thanks for the reply. I almost PM'ed you the last time, but didn't want to assume that you wanted to be pestered. :D
     
  18. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter 7

    Obi-Wan Kenobi eyed the soft cot in the corner of his cabin longingly. It had already been a long day and weariness was catching up with him. He let out a tired sigh and walked over to his travel pack to fish out the med kit- sleep would have to wait for just a little while longer.

    Med kit found, the knight went to his knees and laid out the bacta and a small length of bandage on the floor before him then attempted to slowly peel his tunic away from his scorched and raw shoulder. The threads of the burnt fabric stuck to the burn as he tried to remove the garment and Obi-Wan stopped for a moment and braced himself for the pain.

    ?It looks like you?re in need of some assistance,? a voice softly spoke from the doorway.

    Obi-Wan turned at the sound of Qui-Gon?s voice, and suddenly reminded of their vast height difference, tilted his head up. His jaw was set in a look of defiance, but he kept his voice flat and even, ?Thank you. However, despite my complete lack of competence, I don?t believe I?m in need of your help at the present. Besides, don?t you have a padawan to chase after??

    Qui-Gon crossed his arms over his chest and nodded then casually walked towards his former apprentice. ?Indeed, I do,? he said. The master stopped directly behind Kenobi, who was still kneeling on the floor and trying to work the charred threads of his tunic away from his burnt flesh.

    Leaning over the young man as if to whisper a secret Jinn growled, ? Stubborn fool!? then quickly ripped the fabric from the wounded shoulder.

    Eyes gone wide with pain, Obi-Wan doubled over and cursed in a ragged breath, ?Son of a Sith! What did you do that for??

    ?You?re too proud for your own good- a quality that apparently gets you into a great deal of trouble by the looks of things,? Qui-Gon lectured as he took brief note of the various scars that marred the knight?s back. He then grabbed the bacta and began to smear a generous amount over the burn. ?There?s no shame in asking for help when you need it, Obi-Wan.?

    Obi-Wan?s body instinctively jerked away from the sting of the ointment, but Qui-Gon grabbed his arm and held him steady. ?I don?t need help,? Obi-Wan insisted.

    ?Obviously the Council believes otherwise or else you would be out saving a planet all by yourself instead of assisting a master/padawan team on a fairly uncomplicated mission,? Qui-Gon stated matter-of -factly as he fixed the length of bandage over Obi-Wan?s shoulder. ?My guess is that they gave you no choice. ?

    Obi-Wan jumped to his feet and whirled to face Qui-Gon. ?The Council sent me to make nice with your padawan. It appears that he doesn?t play well with others. Correct me if I?m wrong, but didn?t Xanatos fail recess as well?? he snapped.

    He regretted the outburst the moment it came out. He knew how miserable it was living under the shadow of Xanatos? fall. It was childish and petulant to insist that Anakin suffer in the same manner simply because he wanted to lash out at Qui-Gon.

    The evident hurt on the older man?s face condemned him still further. It appeared that even after all these years Qui-Gon was still haunted by the old ghosts of his perceived failure, and maybe a few new one?s as well.

    The knight lowered his head in shame then whispered, ?I?m sorry.... What happened with Xanatos should have no bearing on you and Anakin... I was out of line to draw any comparison?s between the two.?

    Qui-Gon reached out and gently lifted Obi-Wan?s head, forcing the young man to meet Qui-Gon?s eyes. ?You?re forgiven,? the Master said softly. ?After all, I know better than anyone that we all speak without thinking sometimes.?

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    Padme Amidala let out a sigh of relief as she changed into one of the flight suits left on deck. The sheer nightclothes she had been forced to flee in had left her feeling somewhat exposed- especially to Anakin.

    The seventeen year old padawan was a far cry from the little slave boy she remembered from Tatooine. She reasoned to hers
     
  19. Starwen_Skywalker

    Starwen_Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oh, I loved that conversation with Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan! Apparently, there are hurt feelings on both sides. If only they weren't both so stubborn all the time, things would be so much easier for them. I'm eagerly anticipating more of this awesome story [face_dancing]
     
  20. Kynstar

    Kynstar Jedi Knight star 5

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    I too loved the conversation between Obi and Qui! Those two :( they need to get over the lil spat and make nicey nice! They're meant to be great friends!

    Great update :D
     
  21. dianethx

    dianethx Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Loved the conversation between Obi and Qui. I think you got Qui-Gon just right, stubborn but with a sense that he wanted to help Obi-Wan and to reach out to try and fix the rift between them.

    Loved this Qui-Gon reached out and gently lifted Obi-Wan?s head, forcing the young man to meet Qui-Gon?s eyes. ?You?re forgiven,? the Master said softly. ?After all, I know better than anyone that we all speak without thinking sometimes.?

    Hurray! I hope that's the start of forgiveness on both sides. Qui's going to need help with that current Padawan of his.

    Good job.
     
  22. Cole_Kenobi

    Cole_Kenobi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Awesome update! I luved the scene between Obi and Qui. Stubborn Obiwan, it was hystrical when Qui rips off Obi's tunic. And I thought for sure that Obiwan had signed his death warrant when he mentioned Xanatos. But I'm glad there are no hard feelings betweent the two. Wonderful update, wonderful story. I can't wait until the next chapter! If you have a PM list I would luv to be on it! Thanks!
     
  23. Alley_Skywalker

    Alley_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 27, 2005
    OMG! I LOVE THIS!

    If you have a PM list pease add me!

    Ok comments...

    1. I LOVE Qui/Ani stuff!
    2. The verbal duelsn are just totally LOL material! Go Ani!
    3. Obi underestimates Ani...though I guess Ani underestimates Obi a little.
    4. I hope the boys will end up liking each other :)
    5. Gosh Obi-Wan just really needs to grow up and out of all that jeolousy.
    6. This isn't going to be Obidela I hope. I actually, strangely for me, want to see a little A/P.

    Anyways great job!

    =D= =D= =D=
     
  24. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm STILL catching up. [face_blush] But each post pulls me in more and more. So please keep me on your PM list!

    =D=
     
  25. Opal

    Opal Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nov 17, 2003
    I'm having such a great day to begin with and actually seeing this get some replies is just frosting on the cake.

    Starwen Thank you. They are too proud and stubborn for their own good.

    Kynstar- LOL! You never fail to make me laugh. Yes, they do need to make "nicey nice".

    diane- You approving of Qui-Gon means a lot. Actually, you just reading means alot.

    Cole_Kenobi- Thanks so much for taking the time to respond. I've got no objections to pestering you with a PM if you actually want one.

    Alley LOL. Thank you. And...

    1.Qui/Ani is fun to explore
    2.Anakin is so much fun to write because the possibilities are endless.
    3.They definately both underestimate each other.
    4.I think there's hope yet.
    5.Yup. Grown men can be so child like at times.
    6. No. I can assure you that Obi-Wan and Padme will be friends and nothing more. Besides...those who know me know that if I were ever to start writing Obi ships they likely wouldn't be the kind that I could post here. :p

    Vadey It's so nice just to have you reading at all. I'll keep PM'ing you as long as you like. :)
     
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