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Delusions (JA, Obi angst/torture)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Neon Star, May 6, 2001.

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  1. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Delusions (JA, Obi angst/torture)

    Obi-wan walked into the room.

    ?Master?? he called.

    No answer came.

    He shrugged and started toward his room when he noticed something. He came closure to the couch. He first thought that his Master was asleep but he sensed something was wrong. He then noticed the bottle of pills near his Master?s hand and the bottle of Corrilain whiskey on the floor.

    ?Master?? he asked as he knelt and shook the older Jedi.

    He didn?t get a response.

    ?Master!? he yelled, fear wrapping around his heart.

    He pulled out his comm link and called the healers.

    He felt Qui-gon?s life force start to slip away and grabbed onto it with his own.

    The healers burst into the room. They noted the scene, and then quickly went to work. They got Qui-gon on the stretcher and quickly made their way to the med center, with a confused and worried Obi-wan trailing behind.
     
  2. Abbi_Cee

    Abbi_Cee Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, what could have happened to Qui-Gon? Need to know more. Write more soon.
     
  3. DarthTutor

    DarthTutor Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Feb 9, 2001
    Me too. I want to know what has happened.
    I may be a Sith, but it wasn't me!!
     
  4. QueenSabe7

    QueenSabe7 Chosen One star 6

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    Mar 23, 2001
    I want to know what the heck happened!!!
     
  5. TrianaJinn

    TrianaJinn Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 14, 2001
    I agree with the other responses. What happened ?!?
     
  6. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 13, 2000
    Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa...what's going ON?????
     
  7. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    OK, That sounded bad Please write more
     
  8. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 21, 2001
    Wow! Great start! You got me hook.
     
  9. The Jedi Princess

    The Jedi Princess Jedi Youngling star 2

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    More would be a good thing!
    :)
     
  10. Knight_Maria

    Knight_Maria Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 4, 2001
    AHHHHH!!!! What did Qui-Gon DO?!?!?! NEED MORE!!!! PLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE!!!! :D
     
  11. Lil_June_Bug

    Lil_June_Bug Jedi Youngling

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    Apr 30, 2001
    AHHHHHH WHAT HAPPENED????????

    More.
     
  12. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    They had barely saved him. Just barely. Obi-wan was still trembling inside from the thought of almost losing his Master. What had happened?! His Master wouldn?t? NO! He would not!

    Obi-wan didn?t know what to think. He looked sadly at the Qui-gon. They didn?t know when or if he would wake up. The drugs the Jedi had in his system had damaged parts of his brain. Obi-wan shuddered. He wanted his Master to be all right and he wanted to know what had happened!

    He felt a comforting hand on his shoulder. He looked up into the kind eyes of Mace Windu.

    ?Hello, Obi-wan. How is he doing?? Mace asked.

    ?He still hasn?t regained consciousness,? Obi-wan said softly.

    ?Obi-wan, I need to ask you. Do you know what happened?? Mace asked.

    ?No,? Obi-wan said.

    ?Obi-wan, did Qui-gon seem different this week?? Mace asked softly.

    ?No. You don?t think he would have done that!? Obi-wan demanded as he stood.

    ?Obi-wan, calm down. I just need to know. You know how rumors are and the healers said that is what it looked like,? Mace said.

    ?Well, it isn?t. So you can just stuff those rumors. He wouldn?t and you know it,? Obi-wan snapped.

    He then turned away from Mace. Mace sighed and left.

    *Come back, Master. I know you didn?t do it. Please come back and tell them. Please come back to me!* Obi-wan begged silently as he sat back down and gripped one of Qui-gon?s cold hands.
     
  13. TrianaJinn

    TrianaJinn Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 14, 2001
    MORE, please. :)
     
  14. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 21, 2001
    So sad! Wake up, Qui-Gon! :_| :(
     
  15. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    OK, I don't want to sound like the newcomer I am. but how do you put the faces on a post? Q&A didn't help. sorry. Please write more! Don't make me get on my knees.
     
  16. HannahBates

    HannahBates Jedi Grand Master star 1

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    Feb 20, 2001
    Check the calendar--it is some anniversary concerning Xanatos?

    I'm hooked. Please post more!

    Hannah

    P.S. How old is Obi?
     
  17. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 13, 2000
    Poor Obi! Great post!

    Is Obi just a lil teen in this one or older?
     
  18. Knight_Maria

    Knight_Maria Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 4, 2001
    AHHHH!!! What'S going ON!?!?! Did someone force that stuff down Qui-Gons throat or what??? :eek:
     
  19. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mar 23, 2000
    You've got me on the edge of my seat.... Please post soon!!!

    I would also like to know Obi's age in this.... Thanks!
     
  20. Abbi_Cee

    Abbi_Cee Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Of course Qui-Gon didn't do it, but now he has to wake up and tell them.

    Cheryl, do you mean the little happy faces and things? Go here: http://boards.theforce.net/images/faces/
     
  21. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    Oh please write more its killing me

    Thanks Abbi_Cee that was what I was talking about I understand this place now :D
     
  22. Knight_Maria

    Knight_Maria Jedi Youngling star 3

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  23. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Obi-wan sighed. It had been one horrible week. Qui-gon was still out of it. Obi-wan had not gotten much sleep and he had barely eaten anything the past week. Almost everyone thought Qui-gon had tried to commit suicide. But Obi-wan didn?t and he thought Master Yoda didn?t.

    But he had to prove to the others that Qui-gon didn?t. A desperate idea struck him. He didn?t know what would happen but he had to help his Master. He touched his Master?s temple and entered the cold and empty mind of his Master.
     
  24. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 21, 2001
    And you're just going to leave us there? After making us wait? Baaaaad Neon Star! Baaaaaaad! ;)
     
  25. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    Oh come on post more. I'll be your best friend.
     
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