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Before - Legends Red shoes, for the MMM blind date challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Aug 27, 2007.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Red shoes, for the MMM blind date challenge
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA -
    Characters:, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan (22), Yoda
    Genre: vignette
    Keywords:
    Summary: middle part of a trilogy of vignettes.
    Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas.
    Note: the first part was a missing scene roulette challenge: Qui-Gon defies the council again
    To the rescue
    and the third part a: Over 30 Writers Club Summer 2007 FanFic Challenge
    Nice presents

    Red shoes

    Exrtravagant, he was looking in his purple robes with bright blue trimmings. A couple of bright shining black boots matched with a black belt. His hair was striking: platinum blonde and long, held together by a thong and he had a suntanned complexion with bright shining smiling eyes.

    His companion was lovely. Dressed in a yellow dress adorned with white lace and pink pearls, she had long red curly hair and bright cerulean blue eyes in a white powdered face with ruby-red lips. Pink socks and red shoes with a matching purse completed her outfit.

    They were entering one of the public transports that took them to one of the seedy districts of Coruscant and a conversation was going on between the two.

    ?Why did you do it again??

    ?What??

    ?That!?

    ?We are the best team?

    ?Huh?

    ?It?s only for a few hours?

    ?They don?t fit and I will get blisters.?
    ?They were the only ones available?

    ?Size matters?

    ?Size matters not?

    ?He will hear that?

    ?Stop fussing?

    ?You were fussing when your hair was dyed.?

    ?Humph, and what were you saying when we were doing that make-up?

    ?Looking like a ghost, doesn?t suit me?

    ?No you said something else?

    ?Yes and that was after you strapped those things to my chest?

    ?You needed them?

    ?Blast I think they are ??

    ?Hold on?

    The public transport stopped and the man guided his date to one of the public freshers.
    Once inside he helped his companion with the dress and the two walked towards the next transport, bickering again.

    ?Now they are really uncomfortable?

    ?Three hours and the officials will be in place?

    ?I am turning purple?

    ?You are exaggerating?

    ?Haatschii?

    ?What?s the matter??

    ?Haatschii. Yucky perfumes.?

    ?I don?t like them either.?

    ?Why is every woman so fond of them? Haatschii.?

    ?Not all women are. There are some who dislike them like you.?

    Next stop was one of the big gambling houses and the two exited the transport

    ?Shut up?

    ?Yes you will do the talking?

    ?No loud talking females allowed?

    ?I know?

    ?Look it?s just like they told us: only couples are allowed entrance? and he pointed towards a discrete sign next to the big double doors.
    The man and his date walked through the area with gambling and games going on to a door at the backside of the room.

    ?They are cheating?

    ?Shh?

    ?Yes?

    ?Shh. Shh! Is it so difficult??

    ?No? and in a soft whispering voice ?robbing an innocent that?s what that man was doing.?

    ?The officials will take care of it. Look?

    ?Good?

    Entering the next room the man guided his date to one of the tables surrounding a half circular cage.
    ?Ladies and gentlemen welcome to the great auction of Maass Garula. Today we have a big group from one supplier? a big fat Gran announced and a nice looking young girl of 20 was walking into the cage.
    The bidding started and took a long time.

    //They are hurting//

    //The healers will take care of that//

    //They have cold hands//

    //Not all of them//

    //She has and she is on duty today//

    More young beings followed and during that time two discrete thunks were heard.

    //free, my claustrophobic feet are free//

    A little kid was carried in by a garish looking woman. She thanked the buyers and said ?this is the last one.? The little kid was no more than 1,5 years old and he clung to the woman?s skirt with a frightened look at her and his surroundings.

    ?He is F..?

    ?Shh. I will try to save him
     
  2. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    Poor Obi. LOL But at least the slaves were freed! =D=
     
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very unique entry to the challenge! =D=
     
  4. MsLanna

    MsLanna Jedi Master star 6

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    Jul 8, 2005
    [face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh]

    What is it with men and high heels? Can't they take it like a woman?:p
     
  5. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I loved Yoda's dramatic appearance to save the child

    Poor Obi - he always seems to pay the biggest price on his missions with Qui :p

    I hope he'll at least enjoy the healing.

    Great job on this

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  6. Jade_Pilot

    Jade_Pilot Jedi Master star 5

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    Dec 10, 2005
    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Never send a man to do a woman's job...unless his name is Obi-Wan!

    Great twist on MMM! =D=
     
  7. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Sep 16, 2005
    Loved all the dialogue.
     
  8. JazzFox

    JazzFox Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oct 26, 2006
    lol funny story concept! Guys just don't understand pretty shoes I guess. jk

    You know what I learned from this? Never hire Obi-wan and Qui-gon as fashion consultants... lol

    Very funny, thanks for posting!
     
  9. Jedi Trace

    Jedi Trace Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    His companion was lovely. Dressed in a yellow dress adorned with white lace and pink pearls, she had long red curly hair and bright cerulean blue eyes in a white powdered face with ruby-red lips. Pink socks and red shoes with a matching purse completed her outfit.

    [face_laugh] Oh my! That's a mental image that will stick with me for days!

    Fun challenge entry! :D
     
  10. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    As long as one person looks good at the end of the day, that's all that matters. :p But I'm sure Obi-Wan doesn't mind taking one for the team to help people. He'll say the shoes were worth it. :D

    That dress on the other hand...yeesh! [face_laugh]
     
  11. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Oh dear, oh dear. Qui-Gon a blond and Obi-Wan in drag. I'm sure young Obi-Wan looked so fetching. The life of an undercover Jedi is so hard. :)
     
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