The Hunted (JA fic by Cassia and Sio)

Cassia's New FIC!!!! this time with SIO!!!! WOOO HOOOOO!!!! both my favourite authors!!! both VERY talented. They have co-authored this story.

Please Feedback! either here or directly to them and they would read it.

ONe thing I AM NOT THE AUTHOR(there have been cases people mailing me, saying I am a good writer... I wish).

Kim B


ENJOY


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Hi everyone!!!
I am really excited to post this story because it has been so much fun to
write. It is my first co-authored story, but hopefully not my last! =D I
want to say thank you to Siobhan for making this so much fun to work on! As
you can probably tell from the message line, this is going to be a nice long
story, so if you're game, strap yourselves in and prepare for the jump to
hyperspace!
I am going to have to be out of town for a short while (Yes, again... don?t
get me started on *that*...) from this Saturday until after next weekend,
but Sio will keep posting the story so that no one is left hanging for too
long. =D
Well, take care and I hope you enjoy!
--Cassia

Title: The Hunted

Authors: The Anonymous Torture Fic Writer and her Campy Mute Mush Shadow;
(a.k.a.: Cassia and Sio)

Rating: PG-13 for strong violence

Spoilers: hmmmm do we have any spoilers? Maybe for Titan AE - LOL just
kidding.

Archive: Early Years, Jedi Apprentice, Telly, Obi the Kid, Kim B. and
anyone Cassia has previously given permission to. All others, please ask.

Feedback: Yes please! You can send to either cassia_a@h... or
siobhancl2@h..., either way it will be seen by both authors. Thank
you!

Disclaimer: All recognizable Star Wars characters are the exclusive
property of George Lucas. All others belong to us. We have no official
permission to use these characters, but we are not being paid for it either,
and we do return them in mostly one piece, so that's okay. =D

Time Frame: 8 years Pre-TMP. Obi-Wan is 17.

Summary: Non-slash. When a mission goes awry, Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon are
caught up in a churning swirl of events that leaves Obi-Wan to the mercy of
a cruel and unbending society and forces Qui-Gon to make decisions that
could effect both their lives forever. In trouble and unable to turn to the
Temple for help, the pair must try to survive on their own and stay two
steps ahead of pursuit in a galaxy that is suddenly full of predators as
they find themselves having become... the Hunted.

Warning: This story contains violence and character torture. It also
depicts a loving, father/son relationship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. If
either of these things bother you, please do not read this story.

Notes: Everything between // is Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon talking through their
bond.
Things bracketed by * * are italics.


-THE HUNTED-
Part One:

Obi-Wan Kenobi's gaze drifted across the shimmering star-streaks of
hyperspace on the other side of the view-port.

He was glad this mission was almost over. It had been a difficult one from
the start, but it was finally concluded. Soon he would join Qui-Gon on
Coruscant and perhaps they would get a little breather...

The Padawan grinned ironically. Rest seemed to be such a foreign concept to
them lately. Something always happened.

Obi-Wan sighed and shifted restlessly. What was it that was making him
uneasy? He didn't know. Yet somehow, all did not feel right. The young
Jedi tried to check in with his Master, but Qui-Gon was much too far away
for him to make a connection. Still, when he probed the Force in that
direction he did not get the feeling that his unease had to do with anything
Qui-Gon was dealing with... so what then?

So far, the trip had been a quiet one. There was nothing visible to disturb
him. Settling back in the chair that he occupied in a corner of the small
transport's central area the young Jedi let his mind drift back over the
events of the past few weeks.

The security of a critical witness to a massive war-crimes trial on th

 

I forgot to say PLEASE FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!

Kim B
Once again reminding everyone not the author

 

AHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Cruel, cruel place to stop! *falls off the cliff*

Anyways, an absolutely AMAZING start! Poor Obi; he already got injured and it's only the first post!

LOL! I love the author line, although you forgot to mention "who both apparently enjoy to torment readers with nailbiting cliffhangers"!!! But Torture + Mush = very very good fic I can't wait for more!

 

That was a great beginning! I hope Obi is okay. I am looking forward to reading more.

 

uppers.

 

AAAHHHH!!! *follows jedi-faith off the cliff* Post soon!!!!!!!!!! Need....more.....

 

A new Cassia fict? I'm a very happy fan fict addict.

So far, this story is off to a great start. I loved how Obi-Wan never thought twice about sacrificing himself, but he wasn't about to go down without a fight either. Very well done. And, to top it off, he's already injured!

I eagerly await the next post. Cassia and Sio are doing an excellent job.

Hannah

 

Great beginning.As a FF reader I only read JA Qui/Obi non slash stories,so I was really pleased to see another one starting.THANX !!!!Keep up the good work.

 

post now you will that was sad

 

Cassia's starting a new story and this time she has a partner! Great begining guys. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

 

Holy.....Sith..
Need...A...Post....

*faints*

 

Great start!!!



More soon?

 

Here is part 2 enjoy

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Notes: Everything between // is Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon talking through
their bond.
Things bracketed by * * are italics.

Part Two:


Qui-Gon Jinn shook Ran Tisane's hand. The man had gone through a lot
to get here, to give the testimony that he had, but it had paid off.
Justice had been served and the verdict of the jury found the three
Aurelian Generals guilty of the inhumane war crimes they had
committed during Aureus' resent civil war.

The man's sad eyes finally had a look of completion in them. "Thank
you Master Jinn, I owe this victory to you and your apprentice.
Thank you," Ran said sincerely.

Qui-Gon smiled and bowed. "It is our pleasure to... serve." A
strange cloud passed over the Master's face momentarily.

"Is everything all right?" Ran inquired with concern.

"It's fine, forgive me," Qui-Gon shrugged it off, but inside, he was
not so quick to dispel the strange feeling of apprehension that had
passed over him.

Qui-Gon finished his duties, but could not shake the strange cloud
that seemed to eat at the back of his consciousness. He did not know
what it meant, but was watchful all the same. The feeling followed
him onto his shuttle back to Coruscant.

The trial had ended up taking place not too far from the capital
planet so it was only a five-hour trip for him and he was back in his
quarters in the Jedi Temple. Yet even there he was not totally at
ease and that troubled him.

He wished he could reach Obi-Wan to make sure that his apprentice was
all right, but he had no idea where the Padawan was and their
scheduled rendezvous was not for another two days. Mostly dismissing
his ill ease, Qui-Gon decided that he would certainly feel a lot
better when he and Obi-Wan were back together.


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"Ooh Sith..." Obi-Wan moaned softly as he came to. For a few moments
he couldn't figure out where he was or why, or much of anything
actually other then that he had a pounding headache and he felt like
he had been used as a punching bag for a group of enraged Wampas.

Slowly his memory came back to him. The ship, the sabotage, the
pod... Peeling himself stiffly off the ground he found that he was
resting upon one of the pod walls. The damaged craft had landed on
it's side with the hatch now directly above him in place of the
ceiling.

He could not stand up completely in the small space, but rose as much
as he could and worked with the pod's hatch release controls over his
head. A few minutes later he was rewarded by a hydraulic hiss as the
door popped open, flooding the dark little pod with bright rays of
sunlight.

Obi-Wan blinked hard, momentarily blinded by the sudden light. His
eyes adjusted quickly however and a few minutes later he hauled
himself up and out. Looking around he found himself in an arid
expanse of land with no civilization as far as the eye could see.

"Lovely," the young Jedi murmured as he dropped to the ground,
sending up a small swirl of dust. He scouted his immediate area and
then returned to the pod for the survival packs that were standard
issue aboard escape craft.

Obi-Wan had no idea where he was or what planet this was, or even if
it was populated. Calmly assessing his situation, the Padawan did
not let those things worry him. The unknown was not to be feared,
but faced, then it would no longer be unknown.

Closing his eyes the apprentice Jedi let the Force flow through him,
searching for signs of nearby life...
Obi-Wan was rewarded with the living hum that sentient beings
created. This planet was inhabited, although no one was nearby.

Suddenly a different tendril of the Force brushed by Obi-Wan, but he
couldn't quite catch it's meaning. It seemed to warn him of
something, something... Obi-Wan's eyes furrowed tighter shut as he
tried to discern the meaning of the uneasy feeling, but it was gone
now.

A few minutes later he opened them again and turned

 

long part I hope you all enjoy and feedback..

Kim B

 

uppers

Kim
(not the author, sorry to remind everyone but I think it was improtant to mention)

 

Great post! Real long too

I hope Qui doesn't decide to wait too long; he has to go save Obi before the poor guy gets into more trouble... or maybe he should wait longer...

So how long before the next one?

 

Oy.....Obi's in trouble again.....so when's the Obi torture coming??

 

I heard soon.... he he he he he... torture, angst... all coming soon(from what I heard).

And the next part should be also soon...

Please Feedback, either here or to the authors directly... they really love feedbacks.

Kim B

 

YEAH another Cassia Story! And Sio Oooh this is too great! Obi-Wan's so gentelmanly, poor him, and poor her, more please!

Oh and Kim, despite what you say you deserve credit for this too, you post the stories so we get to read them!

 

I haven't finished yet, but so far it is GREAT!! I'll try and come back later.

Sarah >^,,^<

 

I really have a bad feeling about the next post

 

Ahh, am I detecting influences from a certain religious/politcal group in a small far off country? Good story guys, nothing like cultural differences to bring about conflict. Poor Obi, I suspect he's really put the proverbial foot in it this time. Looking forward to the next part.