Blessings Come In Different Forms (JA, Obi, Qui h/c, Obi angst)Updated 12/2!!!!!!

Obi-wan felt through the endless darkness. His memory pieced slowly back together and when it came into full form, fear rose in him. They were trapped! There had been a cave in. Qui-gon had tried to save him!

//Master?// Obi-wan called through their bond.

Alarm rose in him as only silence answered him. But his Master was alive he could feel it!

?M?Mas?Master!? he cried, gasping.

The air was so thin.

?Obi-wan?? a weak whisper filled with pain came to him.

He crawled toward the sound.

?Keep? talking, Master,? Obi-wan gasped.

The air wasn?t thin, or Qui-gon would be gasping as well. Had he been hurt more then he thought? He pushed that thought aside, wanting only to get to his Master. He reached out and his hand touched wet, sticky fluid. From the smell he could tell it was blood. His fear escalated. He moved closure and touched his Master?s arm.

?Obi-wan?? Qui-gon whispered again.

?Yes, its me, Master,? Obi-wan said softly.

?Are you all right?? Qui-gon asked softly.

?I am fine, Master. Don?t worry. What about you?? Obi-wan asked.

?I can?t feel my legs. But it is all right,? Qui-gon said and his speech slurred.

Obi-wan moved down and felt around. His hand touched raw flesh and blood at the knee. The leg was not severed, but Qui-gon was losing a lot of blood. Obi-wan reached out with the Force to see what else was wrong. He found that Qui-gon?s spin had been snapped at mid back. That was why he couldn?t feel his legs. Obi-wan frowned harder.

?Its bad, Master,? he said softly.

?Then we will just have to wait for help. Where did you get hurt?? Qui-gon asked.

?I am fine,? Obi-wan insisted.

?No, you are not. I can sense that. But my sense is drifting to where I can?t tell where you hurt. Now tell me, Padawan,? Qui-gon urged.

?I am having a little trouble breathing and my head hurts. I think something hit it. But don?t worry about me, Master,? Obi-wan said.

?I will worry. Now, do you still have your comm link?? Qui-gon asked.

?No, I lost it when the cave collapsed,? Obi-wan said, double-checking.

?Then we will have to wait for someone to find us,? Qui-gon mumered.

?Master?? Obi-wan said, fear creeping higher.

He couldn?t let Qui-gon drift off or he may lose him. He had to stop the bleeding. He tore a piece from his torn shirt and pressed it into the wound.

 

Looks good. Post more!

 

Mmmm... Late late late late night (Or early morning) fanfic.

That's pretty good stuff, Neon Star.

 

Great beginning!!!!

 

?Master, stay awake, please,? Obi-wan said softly.

?I am trying, Padawan,? Qui-gon whispered.

?Master Yoda always says Do or do not?? Obi-wan said.

?There is no try. Please, Obi-wan, I lived with it my entire life. I don?t think I can take much more,? Qui-gon chuckled softly.

Obi-wan laughed slightly himself but ended up coughing. He wondered why it was going darker.

?Obi-wan?? Qui-gon asked softly.

?I am ok, Master. Is it getting darker?? Obi-wan asked.

?No, Padawan,? Qui-gon said, fear creeping into his thoughts.

?Then I must be tired. Its all right, Master. How long do you think we have been in here?? Obi-wan asked.

?A few hours at most,? Qui-gon said.

The cave got darker in Obi-wan?s vision until he could not see anything. He frowned and tried to reach out to the Force to see what was wrong. The blow to his head had caused it, but he couldn?t tell what it was. The Force rang its warning and he quickly pulled his full senses out.

?Master?? he called softly, unable to see him.

There was no answer.

 

Ahh!
What happened? This tory is loooking really good by the way!
Post soon!

 

Oh, please post more soon! This is really good. Is Obi blind? I've always liked the Obi blind stories <g>.

Why yes, I am a sick puppy. LOL

-Kristi

 

You have to post more soon! Cool start!

 

Great start, you just jumped right into the action! I love it when the regular roles are reversed and its Qui-toture and Obi-angst!

MORE!

 

Ouch. Spinal injuries are nasty. I know someone who had one. Not a good thing.


Doing great.

 

Please you can't leave it there more more more.

Kim B

 

To the top.

 

He shook Qui-gon but he got no response. He shook harder and fear rose in him. Had he just lost his Master?

He heard scrapping of rock. He turned his head toward the sound, even though he couldn?t see anything. Another scrape of rock and the sound of something falling. He could sense the person outside. The sense was familiar but he couldn?t place it.

?Qui-gon, Obi-wan?? a voice, it sounded male, called.

The scrabble on stone grew louder. A hand touched Obi-wan?s shoulder.

?Don?t worry, Obi-wan. I am just here to help you. Now, what is wrong with you and Qui-gon?? the man asked.

Obi-wan sorely wished he could see the person.

?Master?s spin is broken at mid-back and his leg is bleeding heavily. You have to help him,? Obi-wan pleaded.

?I will. Now, what about you?? the man asked.

That voice sounded so familiar, but again he couldn?t place it.

?I can?t see and I am having trouble breathing, but I will be all right. We have to stop Qui-gon from bleeding first,? Obi-wan said.

?All right,? the man said and Obi-wan heard a sound like cloth ripping.

?I am going to wrap Qui-gon?s leg then I am going to take care of that head wound of yours,? the man explained.

Obi-wan nodded. He heard the man shift. He waited silently, hearing his Master?s faint but steady breathing. He thanked the Force his Master was still alive. He heard the man shuffle again toward him. Soft cloth, like velvet, was pressed against his forehead by firm but gentle fingers.

?Who are you?? Obi-wan asked.

?It is best if you do not know, little Jedi. But if you must call me something, call me Destiny,? the man said.

?How did you know we were here?? Obi-wan asked.

?I sensed it, now be still,? Destiny said.

Obi-wan sat quietly until the man finished dressing his wound.

?Now we just have to get your Master out of here. I should have thought better then to come alone,? Destiny murmured to himself.

?No one knows you are here?? Obi-wan asked.

?No, I didn?t want to be found. But I felt that I had to help you,? Destiny said.

?You said you sensed us. Are you a Jedi?? Obi-wan asked.

?Yes and no,? Destiny said.

The answer puzzled Obi-wan, but he didn?t ask any more questions.

 

up!

 

???????????????????
who's was that

 

A familiar voice Obi can't quite place, who claims he is and yet isn't a Jedi. With a very mysterious name - Destiny. My, oh, my.

I can't wait for more!

 

This is a great story so far! I like blind Obi stories too! They are great! Gosh, I am such a sick kitty!

More soon please!

 

I wonder who that could be.

 

Cheryl_Kenobi: You are just going to have to find out.

greencat336: Thanks for the comment!

KenobisGirl: You are not the only sick person around here, I also like blind Obi stories.

padawan3: Do you have an idea who it might be?

Thanks for the comments! Here is the next post!
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Destiny grunted as he lifted the unconscious form of Qui-gon onto his shoulders. Obi-wan could hear his struggle.

?Can I help?? he asked.

?I got it,? Destiny grated out.

?Why don?t you use the Force to help you?? Obi-wan asked.

?Because I need to bare this alone. The Force should not and would not help me,? Destiny said.

Obi-wan frowned slightly. Another answer to puzzle him.

He heard Destiny stumble on the loose rocks.

?All right, Obi-wan, come over to me and I?ll point you in the right direction,? Destiny said.

Obi-wan got up and stumbled over to where he heard Destiny?s voice. A hand closed around his arm and pulled him to the front.

?Okay, I want you to keep going. Use the Force to sense your way. The opening is about ten meters from here,? Destiny said.

Obi-wan nodded and stretched out with the Force. He stepped forward and trusted the Force to guide him. He heard Destiny stumble behind him. He reached out with the Force to help him and Destiny?s sense recoiled.

?No! Don?t do that!? Destiny snapped.

?I was just trying to help,? Obi-wan said.

?I am fine, just keep going,? Destiny said.

Obi-wan frowned and sensed the opening up ahead. He walked out of the cave and stopped. Destiny stepped out a moment later with Qui-gon on his shoulders.

 

si this guy can't use the Force, won't let obi help him and he won't tell Obi who he really is. very interesting

 

Another great story Neon.

Can we have another post please.

 

I like this too! You've got me intriged. Who is Destiny

 

I have an idea but if I'm wrong I'll feel like an idiot.