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A Dream's Cause and Effect

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Buffynick60, Aug 15, 2000.

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  1. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I found this Fic about 5 months ago and the author wont finish it, i can get in contact, so im posting it here to see if anyone wants to finish it! Its has a preety good plot line forming, so take grabs, and start writing!! :)

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    Title: A Dream's Cause and Effect
    Author: Anna
    Rated: PG
    Summary: Obi-Wan experiences troubling dreams that no one can explain.
    Meanwhile, his dreams interfere with his everyday life.
    Spoilers: Spoilers for Star Trek: New Frontier, maybe minor ones for
    the JA series
    Archive: Padawan Journals, all else, just tell me
    Feedback: Please. This is my first Star Wars story and I'll accept all
    kinds of criticism, but no flames please.
    Disclaimer: I don't own Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, Mace Windu, Yoda or anything
    else related to Star Wars except for some books. Mac and Elizabeth
    belong to Peter David and TPTB of Star Trek. I'm just borrowing them
    all. Please. I'm not worth the lawsuit and I'll return everyone when
    I'm done playing. I promise.
    Author's notes: This is a cross over of Star Trek: New Frontier and
    Star Wars, pre-TPM. While it'll be helpful to know the NF universe, it
    won't be mandatory in this story. Obi is fifteen, almost sixteen in
    this story, so about nine years before TPM.
    Anna

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    Qui-Gon entered Obi-Wan's room when he felt the fear that his
    apprentice was fighting. He sent soothing waves through the Force to
    the boy as he soothed the short, spiky hair. He could not see the
    dreams through their bond, but he knew enough to know that they had
    been keeping his Padawan from having a good night's rest for the last
    week.

    Finally, he could sense Obi-Wan calming and the dream subsiding. He
    eventually left Obi-Wan's side to go catch a few hours of sleep in his
    own bed, wondering what it was that was bothering the boy so.

    ********

    Obi-Wan walked into the sitting room early the next morning, but not
    earlier than Qui-Gon. Sometimes he wondered if his Master ever truly
    slept, or if he just stayed there all night.

    "Morning Master," he greeted, unable to entirely keep the exhaustion
    out of his voice.

    "Padawan," Qui-Gon responded, inspecting his apprentice thoroughly.
    The circles under Obi-Wan's eyes seemed darker and he could tell that
    Obi-Wan was practically forcing himself to remain standing. "Maybe we
    should go to the Healers again," he said.

    "Please, no Master," Obi-Wan pleaded, shaking some of his tiredness
    away. "We were the for *five* hours the day before yesterday and they
    didn't find anything. It'll be the same today."

    "All right," Qui-Gon agreed, smiling slightly. It was true. The
    Healers had found nothing wrong with Obi-Wan other than a lack of
    sleep, for which they prescribed a days worth of rest. Obi-Wan had
    reluctantly followed their orders, but his sleep had been anything but
    restful.

    *******

    Obi-Wan cut through the Meditation Gardens on his way to class.
    Diplomacy 202 was his only class of the day and then he could go home,
    he told himself. He was so deep in thought that he walked past Bruck
    Chun without realizing it.

    Bruck glared at Obi-Wan. The two had a reluctant truce most of the
    time, but he wasn't going to let the other get away with ignoring him.
    "Hey Oafy!" he called after the distant boy. "Are you so afraid of us
    that you can't even stand to look at us?" he taunted. His friends
    laughed as Obi-Wan turned around in confusion.

    "What are you talking about Bruck?" Obi-Wan asked, yanked from his
    train of thought.

    "Are you so afraid of us that you can not even acknowledge our
    presence?" Bruck repeated slowly and snidely.

    "If I'd noticed you, I would have said something Bruck," Obi-Wan said
    and turned to leave.

    Bruck glowered at his dismissle. How dare Kenobi! He started after
    Obi-Wan without seeing Master Elizabeth who had been watching the
    entire scene.

    He got within a foot of Obi-Wan before the other boy turned around.
    "Bruck, just please leave me alone, okay?" he requested.

    Bruck responded by shoving Obi-Wan into the f
     
  2. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    HEllo is anyone reading this??????
     
  3. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I had read what you have posted on another forum a while back and thought it was excellent! I Bugged the author several times to see if it was going to be finished, but alas it never was. I would love to see one of the talented authors on this forum pick it up, or maybe convine the orginal author to!
     
  4. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I've seen this on the internet before and it said that the link was broke or something. I liked it a lot too.
     
  5. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I hope someone picks it up too, its a preety good fic. A good story line
     
  6. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    No one pick it up yat :( how sad :( back to my corner i see :(
     
  7. Maelisaandii

    Maelisaandii Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Its a really good fic... but since I've never read any of the New Frontier series I don't think I could pick it up. :(
     
  8. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    lol the funny thing is neither do i but i love the fic :) I sure hope someone does pick it up :) it has high potenital :)
     
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    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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  13. Jade's Fire2003

    Jade's Fire2003 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was pretty good, anyone planning on posting more?
     
  14. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    lol :) im just bored out of my head :) I sure hope someone does pick it up, even if they do or not watch Star Trek :)
     
  15. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I hope someone post, im no writer, im a looker, seeker, finder, whaterver u can call it :)
     
  16. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Reader. Is that what you call it?

    Just a thought.
     
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