Crying Blind (Obi-Wan is injured during a mission and is blinded)

Basically this should be a short fic. Only a few or more posts. But you never what might happen if I get insparated.... I will start this fic as soon as I get some feedback.

I'd just like to say that this is also my first StarWars fic. Though I have wrote a number of other ones to deal with many Japanese Animes. Be nice.

Summary: Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan return from a mission and Obi-Wan is in critial condition from a large blow to the head he recieved (trust me, those can be VERY dangerous.) After he wakes up in the Healer's tower, he finds that he is blind. Now he has to learn to live again and deal with the emotions and stresses that come with his new blindness...

 

So start.

 

Sounds good. I'll be checking this out when you start.

Felicia Z.

 

I always love Q/O H/C and Obi angst.
I'm sure I would check it out if you started posting it.

As for feedback,I haven't read any of it yet to give you any.{LOL}

PEACE ewen

 

Sounds good. and yes, blosw to the head are very dangerous. My friend walked into a tree then bled all over everyone in school. It was kinda funny...

 

helloooo

*echo*

POST!

 

Post, please... sounds interesting.

 

*looks around* where'd ya go?! Me and my bleeding friend want this up...now.

 

** GASP **

 

So, where's the beef--I mean, the story?"

 

Really, where's the story?

I'm interested, too!

Come on post it

 

**crys**

 

cool idea. post more and I'll tell you more.

 

Jenny_the_Jedi_girl, I don't mean to be rude, but unless this is your own fic, it really isn't appropriate to advertise your stories.

 

You know I would LOVE to read this story (oh no, I've become such a sucker for Obi torture, sign-against-evil) but you HAVE TO POST IT FIRST! Gah!

 

Sounds good. however for people to like it you need to actually post...(hint,hint)

Oh and Miana Kenobi.. what Jenny the Jedi Girl is doing is no different to you advertising your story in your signature
MM

 

Actually, MM, it *is* different. Because if the story link is in your signature, USUALLY you've actually posted a comment on the story the thread is about. You haven't gone to MANY MANY stories on the board, posted "Check out my story!" and said not a single word about the story whose thread you're posting on.

Frankly, it annoyed me to go to several different stories, thinking they had been updated, only to discover another plea for readers. The plea had the opposite effect on me - I have no plans whatsoever to read those stories now.

kristi-wan

PS - TrainerRachel, this story sounds great and I would LOVE to read it! Please post soon!

 

**AHEM**

Okay, i'm going to sidestep the heated little discussion and move right along......

Yes, this looks to be a very good thread TrainerRachel. But it's not very nice to tease us so

A teaser is nice when it is immediately followed by the first post. So? Where is it?

 

Please post the story soon. [puppy-dog face]

 

Does the phrase Show me the money mean anything to you?


You are wanting feedback and have actually gotten it and we haven't seen one sentence of what promises to be a very good Q/O story.

Just a thought.I hope you actually post soon!!!

PEACE ewen

 

MysticalMagic, I don't want to start a conflict, but, as kristi-wan said, there is a difference. It's one thing to have a link in your signature, whether it be to your fic, someone else's fic, or even your own web page, but going into a story where you are not the author and telling people to read your story is a completely different thing.

Like I said, I don't want to start a fight, but if that is your point of view on the matter, then I respect that, and will gladly drop the subject.

TrainerRachel, hope this didn't scare you off, but we would like a post soon, please?

 

Hi guys. I'm SOOOOOOO SORRY about making all you wait. I know if I was reading some elses fic, I'd get peeved by now and leave. I do have an excuse though: My kittie got run over. *bigs heart felt sigh* Cat never had any road sense anyways.

I haven't been really in the mood if you guys know what I mean. I thought I'd send out this message to calm a few people out there *is scared for life.* j/k. I'll try to post within a few hours.

Once again, I'm really sorry.

 

Wow, I got this out in less then a few hours. Yaa! Then again, I did make it a small post.... *ends off muttering*

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The normal hush of the Healers Ward was disrupted by sound of two squeaky
wheeled gurneys and a thunder of feet down the echoic halls. Healers crowded
around the two transports shouting while running beside the gurney and
shouting orders to the staff.

?Get the operation rooms ready for Padawan Obi-Wan Kenobi and Master
Qui-Gon Jinn!? Called Healer Heckler. The two gurneys carrying the Jedi split off
into two separate rooms. The staff followed into their respected room.

***
Obi-Wan lay on a medical cot surrounded by medical instruments and a
few doctors. His chest lay bare and as white as the sheets underneath him. His
stomach was partial covered by a thin baby blue Healer Ward blanket. His breath
came out in slow steady movements.

Healer Heckler carefully bent down over Obi-Wan?s unconscious body.
With tiny tools, he carefully cleaned the loose blood off around the brain. The
blood got there from the dangerous blow the head he had received. Not only
ripping the flesh and veins along the left temple, but also tearing at the inner
flesh that protected his sensitive brain. Left alone, the blood with likely cause
perminate brain damage. That is if there weren?t any already. Not only had the
strike torn his barriers, but also his skull was cracked, pushing in on his brain in
vital areas. The skin surrounding the gash was blossoming bruises, decorating
most of his left side of his head.

Heckler sighed. He had no real clue how the sixteen year old boy had
gotten the gash. All he found was some residue of dust and shrapnel from rocks.
He could only guess the boy and fallen and hit his head. Master Jinn hadn?t been
able to tell him. He had just managed to fly his padawan and him in from a
mission on a ship to fall unconscious. With the would-have-been dangers of his
condition (if had not shown up here), how he managed to get that far was a
mystery. Though not deadly yet, they were plenty painful.

The boy would probably be a mess when he woke up. If he woke up.
Even if he cleared out all the blood and fixed his skull, the damage was done.
The odds were there would be something very wrong with the apprentices? mind
when he woke up. It might not be noticeable right away, but it would show
itself. Only time could tell...



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Geez, I truly am sorry for taking so long, and for this being so short. I?ll see if I
can get the next part done tomorrow... I?ll need to fill you all in on Qui-Gon?s
condition.

Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl: I don?t care if its my fanfic or some else?s. That?s just not
cool. In a way I kind of find that an insult. Like you don?t care about anything
else but your own success and you?ll run over other people?s work to do it. I
suppose I could be wrong. Who and I to judge and act as god? But think about
this: When someone comes onto your starting fanfic only to post a note to come
see theirs, how are you going to feel?

_TrainerRachel_

 

YaY! First one to reply to the *actual* story *grins and pokes TrainerRachel in the ribs*

This is great! I love the descriptions! Can't wait to find out what happened to Obi-wan and Qui-gon. Please keep going.

Kit

P.S; Sorry about your cat.

P.P.S: I have to agree with the sentiments about posting links to your fics in someone elses thread without their permission (outside of your signature of course). It certainly isn't cool.

 

Short but very well written. I'm glad you finally started posting this. I can't wait to see where you take it!

Felicia Z.