To Lose What You Hold Dear~*~JA

You don't know what you have until you have lost it.


To Lose What You Hold Dear

Qui-gon chuckled as he examinded his Padawan's back and chest which were badly sunburn. It was just their first day vacation at the planet of Ganthra and Obi-wan had already gotten into trouble.
"Stop laughing, Master! It hurts!" fifteen year old Obi-wan whined.
"I told you not to go out there without sunscreen." Qui-gon said as he tryed not to laugh at Obi-wan's experison.
"Do you have anything for it?" Obi-wan asked.
"No, but I bet Atrus does." Qui-gon said.
"Fine, I'll go over there." Obi-wan said, with that he walked out of the apartment.
Qui-gon chuckled to himself and contiued to unpack. Just then he heard a loud bang and the building shock around him. Fear rushed at him, some of it his, some of it was Obi-wan's coming through their link. Qui-gon rushed out of the apartment.

 

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Wow, how many stories is this, Neon? All I can say is - MORE!!!

 

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Awww man you didn't pick Padwan Adventures!!

Oh well this was my second choice and its very good.

 

Thanks for the comments!
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Qui-gon rushed into the hall. All around him there was commotion as people streamed out of their rooms. He looked toward Atrus's room and saw that the door had been blown off. Smoke was streaming out of the room. Qui-gon's fear built as he made his way toward her room. He entered into it. He couldn't see anything and he could barely breath but he pulled his cloth to his mouth and started searching. He reached out into the Force to find Obi-wan and Atrus. He senced Obi-wan's dim precence close to him. He felt through the recoge until he felt a small braided object brush his hand. *Obi-wan!* he thought as he lifted the carnage off his Padawan. Obi-wan layed flat on his back. His face and cloths burnt. He moaned softly.
//Just hold on, Padawan.// Qui-gon thought to Obi-wan giving him strenghth.
"Someone get the medics!" Qui-gon yelled.
"Right away, sir." a young man said from the door and rushed off.
Qui-gon didn't want to move his Padawan, in fear that he might do more harm than good. He streched out into the Force for Atrus. He felt her close by. He pulled the carnage away until he felt her hand. He started pulling away the rest until she was free. She was in the same state as Obi-wan. Suddenly Qui-gon heard the medics outside. They walked in causesly.
"They are here!" Qui-gon said then coughed.
The smoke was chocking him but he needed to get Atrus and Obi-wan out first.
The medics quickly put both of them onto strechers and started out. Qui-gon followed behind them, his thoughts in termoly.

 

I think this is the apropiate time for Qui-gon to start praying to the force that his padawan and Atrus lives.

 

Ah! Save Obi-Wan! Oops! I mean, save Obi-Wan AND Artus!

 

Eeeeeeeeeek!! oh no!!! More, Neon!!

 

To answer your question, Gimpy. This is my seventh fanfic and my third one going right now.

 

Waiting for your next post Neon.

 

always waiting for more...

 

Wowsers Neon Star what anexcellent start!!!

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Qui-gon sat in the small waiting room. He felt that he had been waiting there for days when it had been under two hours. He had been trying so hard to give Obi-wan and Atrus strength that he had almost followed them into the segury room. Someone had stopped him from going in.
He tryed to dampen his fear for them as well as his worry and anger. This was not some regular accident like what the law inforcers had said it was. There was something more behind this. But what?
Suddenly a medic came, interupting his thoughts.
"Qui-gon Jinn?" the medic asked.
"I am he." Qui-gon said standing up.
"I just want to say that they are both out of surgery right now. We have taken care of most of their injuries and you can see them in room 44." the medic said.
Qui-gon was flooded with relief but he senced something was wrong.
"Thank you, but is there something else?" he asked.
"We do not know yet." the medic said then quickly walked off.

 

poor qui...

 

up!

 

Eeep! I hope they're both okay!
I really like this story so far! I'm looking forward to more!

 

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