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The Life of Dooku,or Origin. PT Pre TPM

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Drac39, Oct 10, 2002.

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  1. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    The Young children were waiting to be tested,to see if those who were brought were worthy for a life,that would help millions,and drive a few mad. This was the life of a Jedi.
    For the tale about to be told is that of a man,a Jedi,who would be tempted by the Darkside,of the force,and would eventually join the ancient religion of the evil Sith.This Man was named Dooku.
     
  2. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    The Young Children were brought into a building of great magnificence.It was worthy of The God`s.That young Dooku had held dear on his home planet of Serenno.It was a temple,A Jedi Temple.He was brought in by a creature,a funny looking one named Sai Namo.This creature was one the child couldn`t remember.His Family,He would always miss them,but they promised him Great Things would happen to him,if he was to become a Jedi.He rememberd his Mother last words to him.
    "My Son each day you are growing,and now an opportunity has risen up. You must do it,make us proud."
    He loved his Mother,Brother,Sister,and Father. Yet he would always do what they wanted.They were very good to him.Now he was on his way inside.He was a little excited,about his new life,what was to come.Now the Children were getting interviewed by a Council.Dooku knew they had to be very important.They seemed to call the Children Younglings.Dooku didn`t like this.He wanted to be thought of as a big important person,even though he was so small.Now it was his turn...
     
  3. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Please Check out my story.Who evers out there.
     
  4. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Chapter I
    Dooku walked into a room,a circular room,that featured many Jedi.This was the Room of The Council.There was a funny looking creature.He was very friendly.His name was Yoda.
    "Search your feelings you must"
    "I don`t think I can" was the child`s response.
    Yoda laughed.
    "Everyone can my young friend"
    He took out a ball.
    "Think you can do I"
    "Alright" he said
    He searched through his feelings,and began to feel something incredable.He could do as Yoda asked. He discovered he could use The Force.Dooku knew what he could do.That day was the beginning.
    Flash Forward 5 years later.
    Dooku was now 11 years old.He had been Yoda`s Padawan for the last 5 years.He discovered he had great power.He was particullaly good with a lightsaber.He could duel,with other Padawans,and always come out the victor.He was also good,at constructing sabers as well.He had an idea,for a curved saber,but Master Yoda would never allow it.Sometimes he didn`t like Master Yoda.He always had good ideas that he would never allow.He was also good in Force Power.He combined his two skills.Master Yoda wasn`t found of this either.He enjoyed his skills.He had also made many friends.Life was good,except for Master Yoda.
     
  5. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    Holy! I can't believe you write this well! you are a great writer Drac!

    uppers!
     
  6. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Thanks.
     
  7. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    10 years later
    Yoda goes up to his padawan,and says
    "Dooku a very good friend you,have been.Even though you were sometimes a little arrogant.I think it`s time for the end of you being my apperntice."
    "You really mean it" was the excited response.
    "Yes do I"
    Dooku was so excited. He was named a Jedi Knight. Now he rushed up,and cut off his Padawan braids.
    "Ready in a couple of days will you be,for first assigment"
    Dooku was at a ceremony.For the new Jedi Knights.Yoda would give them each a sismoa hologram.(or in laymen terms,a diploma) He was ready for this.Now all he could think about.Was having a padawan,of his own.Someone to bow down to him,and call him Master.He really wanted this badly.Now he was ready,and it was his turn to be named a Master.He could hardy wait.Now he remembered his Mothers last words to him.
    "Son each day you are growing,and now an opportunity has risen up,you must do it,and make us proud."
    He couldn`t help it.The tough Jedi Knight,got on his knees,and cried. He now got up,and said.
    "I will I will"
     
  8. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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  9. SilentSith

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    Wow! Very good!

    UP!

    (<SilentSith
     
  10. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Dooku began to look,for a padawan.He was really looking forward to this.For he really wanted to be a master.He went to Yoda,and said.
    "Alas the headstrong Padawan returns."
    "And The Master ready is to greet him."
    The two shared a few good laughs,but Dooku needed to get down to the point.
    "I need a padawan."
    "I knew this day would come"
    "I happen to ready have one for you"
    "Really?"
    "His name is Qui-Gon Jinn"
     
  11. PadmeJainasolo

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  12. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Chapter II
    Dooku,and Yoda leave Cantina.
    "When will I get to meet Qui-Gon?"
    "Soon"
    The Next Moring.Dooku walks into Jedi Temple.
    "Like you to meet someone I would"
    "Hello"
    "My name is Dooku,and I`m going to spend some time,teaching you"
    "Does this mean I`m going to be a Jedi"
    "No does mean not"
    Dooku,and young Qui-Gon leave the Jedi Temple.
    "Master Dooku,Master Yoda,is he always that mean sir?"
    "Sometimes my Young Padawan,but I try not to listen to him"
    "Why?"
    "Well,If your heart tells you something is right.You must always listen to it"
    "That is a lesson,I learned from my mother"
    "I miss mine,badly"
    Flashback...
    "Remember make us proud"
    Flashforward...
    "We all do,but we must,Make them proud."
    "Master Dooku,will I be as powerful as you someday?"
    Dooku liked that statment a lot.
    "Someday my Padawan"
     
  13. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    "Later that day"
    "Qui-Gon,before I teach you anything,you must construct a lightsaber."
    "A what?"
    "Master Yoda,never told you about a lightsaber?"
    "No"
    "Well he`s as stupid,as he is old"
    "Let me show you how to build one"
    Qui-Gon quickly finished his Jedi Weapon. He took it out,and turned it on.
    "Wow,how do I use this"
    "With the Force.my young padawan"
    "Do Jedi use The Force,for everything?"
    "You are young,my friend. Soon you will learn"
    "Here,put this on"
    Dooku hands Qui-Gon,a helemet.
    "Try to deflect,the blaster with your lightsaber"
    "But that`s impossible"
    "No not impossible,everyone can do it"
    "Are you sure?"
    "Everyone,can use The Force,you are just a slow learner,as was I"
    Qui-Gon,and Dooku begin their trainning.
    "You are going to become a great Jedi Qui-Gon,eventually you will know this"
     
  14. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    great job! claps hands
     
  15. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    The Next Day
    Dooku had just got up. Yoda was waiting for him.
    "Disturbing news I have"
    "What?"
    "What is it?" asked Qui-Gon
    "A War Lord has taken over your home planet"
    "What?"
    "Worry you must not"
    "The Senate have a meeting tommorrow they will"
    "I can`t wait that long"
    "Saying what are you?"
    "Qui-Gon come,were going"
    "Why?"
    "Sometimes You have to do things yourself."
    "Dooku you can`t!"
    "Must you not!"
    I will fight for my planet. Dooku,and Jinn walked to the hangar. A cloaked figure was waiting for them.
    "Who are you???"
    "I`m your Death!"
    The Figure removed a Saber.
    "You are a Dark Jedi are you not?"
    "Dooku removed his Saber.
    The two Force users dueled.
    "You will not stop us. I enjoyed killing your family."
    "NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!"
    He stroke him down.
    "You will not stop us. The Master is at hand!"
    "I will kill you!"
    "Master Dooku calm down!"
    "The Boy is right"
    "Come we must go."
     
  16. PadmeJainasolo

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    :D

    cool!

    *waves hand* "you will update this my young friend"
     
  17. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Dooku,and Qui-Gon landed on Serenno.
    "What is that?" asked Qui-Gon.
    Swoop Bike`s where flying in the air.
    An Old Man appeared.
    "Come! I have no time to explain!"
    They ran into a secret temple. Inside this place where people. Scared People. Their faces looked as if they had met the ultimate terror.
    "What do you want?" asked the old man.
    "I want answers!" was Dooku`s response.
    "You will get them in time"
    "Who are you?"
    "I used to be a monk."
    "Before that mad man came"
    "I`d like to know what happend"
    "Slayno came,and.."
    "Who???"
    "Slayno? You know him?"
    "He was my best friend. He wasn`t excepted by the Jedi. He was sent home."
    "Well he, is a Master of the Force."
    "How?"
    Dooku remebred the Dark Jedi.
    "He taught him. Didn`t he?"
    "He has actually has the ability to control minds."
    "That is not the will of the force it`s Black Magic!"
    "I`m going to stop him."
    "NO You Moesn`t!"
    "I will fight for what I stand for!"
    " Very well I will acompany you on your quest."
    "Let us go."
     
  18. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Dooku,and Qui-Gon ran into a hovel.
    "What is this Master?"
    "My Home."
    "We are going to stop Slayno."
    "I must contact the senate."
    Dooku contacted Senator Finis Valorum.

    "What trouble`s you Dooku?"
    "A warlord has taken over my home planet.
    "You must bring it up in the senate"
    "I`m sorry my friend,but their is little we can do,to help."
    "Then tell Master Yoda,I will handle this by myself!"

    The Senate Meeting.
    "Senator Valorum would like to speak."
    "My fellow Senate member`s."
    "Sernno has been taken over by a mad man."
    "Due to the urgency of this problem,we must send,help."
    "Alas it is a small planet,we should let them have their wicked ways."
    "Permission denied."

    "Master Dooku"
    "Yes?"
    "They have denied permission to send help."
    "Damn!"
    "What about my trainning Master Dooku?"
    "It`ll...
    Just then a Rodian shot at them.
    Dooku removed his saber.
    "Find a place to hide Now!"

     
  19. Drac39

    Drac39 Force Ghost star 6

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    Dooku,and Qui-Gon ran into a hovel.
    "What is this Master?"
    "My Home."
    "We are going to stop Slayno."
    "I must contact the senate."
    Dooku contacted Senator Finis Valorum.

    "What trouble`s you Dooku?"
    "A warlord has taken over my home planet.
    "You must bring it up in the senate"
    "I`m sorry my friend,but their is little we can do,to help."
    "Then tell Master Yoda,I will handle this by myself!"

    The Senate Meeting.
    "Senator Valorum would like to speak."
    "My fellow Senate member`s."
    "Sernno has been taken over by a mad man."
    "Due to the urgency of this problem,we must send,help."
    "Alas it is a small planet,we should let them have their wicked ways."
    "Permission denied."

    "Master Dooku"
    "Yes?"
    "They have denied permission to send help."
    "Damn!"
    "What about my trainning Master Dooku?"
    "It`ll...
    Just then a Rodian shot at them.
    Dooku removed his saber.
    "Find a place to hide Now!"

     
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