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Saga 10 Simple Haiku

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Bruce_the_Bith, May 4, 2005.

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  1. Bruce_the_Bith

    Bruce_the_Bith Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yoda's in the Force
    A warrior he is not
    For wars make none great

    Yoda? Dagobah?
    I need you Ben. Help me please!
    What am I to do?

    Chewie and Artoo:
    Simple heroes, faithful friends,
    That grow-el and beep

    Boba Fett is here?
    After all this time he's back?
    Where have I been? Hell?

    Ani and Padme.
    A playful two fated to
    just die. Tragically.

    General Obi:
    Clone Wars hero and Empire's
    bane. Can't destroy him.

    How tragic is he
    who fell to a Sith's weapon?
    How special he'll be.

    My Death Star, Lord Sith
    is a magnificant toy!
    They shall worship me!

    A lone snubfighter
    Like a gnat to an elk's eye
    Can quite irritate.

    Did Greedo shoot me?
    After all these years I've thought
    'Twas I who shot first.


    I sincerely hoped you've enjoyed these.
     
  2. Knight_Aragorn

    Knight_Aragorn Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 15, 2003
    Wow! Excellent job with these, Bruce! They're all very cleverly worded. It's good to see something a little different, especially done so well. Great work! :D
     
  3. VoijaRisa

    VoijaRisa Jedi Master star 5

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    Oct 12, 2002
    Very cool. It's nice to see a change of pace around here. I hope this encourages other people to try different things.
     
  4. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Very amusing. Inventive.
     
  5. AvenKiel

    AvenKiel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 18, 2003
    "Ani and Padme.
    A playful two fated to
    just die. Tragically. "

    Darkly comical in a way. I don't know if I interpreted that differently from everyone else, could be a morbid sense of humor on my part.

    "A lone snubfighter
    Like a gnat to an elk's eye
    Can quite irritate."

    Absolutely beautiful! Hilarious, I love it!
     
  6. Jedi-Tiger-Lilly

    Jedi-Tiger-Lilly Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Mar 24, 2005
    Those were great! I love poetry, even though I can't write it at all. Very simple and eloquent.
     
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