18 Apr 2006 -=- The Return of A Hero -- After 3 YEARS THE CONCLUSION

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    So either you guys need a new hobby, or the author needs to finish this story... :p
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    Happy Birthday to ME! :D
    18!! W00T!
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    Wow - 18? congrats!!!!! Hope you had a great birthday!
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    [face_flag]


    Why is it an American flag? This sitehas posters from aroungd the world, so why is it an american flag? Just wondering.
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    Who knows? May be its an American who opened the site. I guess they can't have flags from all over the world. Too many, I guess. Happy Belated Birthday, by the way.

    Now, an up for this thread and story.[face_peace]
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    Wow, I didn't expect an answer. :p
  23. JM-Anakin-Solo Jedi Master

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    Chapter 31 -- The Confrontation and Resolution
    "Begin your descent," Jacen spoke over the comm., "and maintain radio silence from now on."

    The x-wings began their descent onto Dantooine. It was not the same planet Anakin remembered. The asteroids had been weird enough, but the surface was completely transformed. Everywhere he looked, Anakin could see the living rock that created all Yuuzhan Vong technology. The entire planet had been transformed into a production plant.

    With all this development, it would not be long until the Vong had regrouped and were once again equipped to destroy the Republic. This had to work.

    They set down their x-wings in a remote looking field of rock. It looked like the rock here had died. Maybe it had produced all it could. Or maybe the transformation of Dantooine wasn't complete. Anakin didn't know. And it didn't matter.

    "Now we hump it out," Jacen said, pulling on his pack. He checked his direction and headed out. The Jedi team followed.

    It wasn't long before they started to see more city-like structures. They were getting close, and Jacen was getting jumpy. Anakin noticed him looking left and right and all around, like he was frightened.

    "Calm," Anakin whispered to him. Anakin himself was anything but calm inside. Tahiri was in there and she was about to be sacrificed. They had very little time, but he kept his exterior smooth. Losing his cool would do no one any good. Least of all Tahiri. He put a hand on Jacen's shoulder, "It will all be okay."

    Jacen smiled back at him and seemed to calm down exponentially. "You're right. Today it ends. Today it is over."

    Anakin remembered the prophecy Ben had delivered. It scared him. Scared him right down to the bone. He didn't want to die. He wanted to rescue Tahiri. He wanted to grow up with her by his side. He wouldn't fail. He would trade his life for hers if he needed to.

    "What is this?" Corran asked.

    They had reached a door. There were no controls, because it was Vong technology. But the device they had brought with them to open the door wasn't working. "If this doesn't work? we're all hosed," Corran kept pressing the button on the device but it still wouldn't work.

    "Let me try," Jacen said. He palmed the device and pressed it to the door. Instantly it opened. "Just took the right touch, I guess."

    Anakin eyed him warily. Something was itching at the back of his mind. Something too absurd to be true, but he decided to see how things went before dismissing it.

    Beyond the door was darkness. They entered. The Force was of no use here. Anakin embraced the Vigor and created a small ball of light in front of him. Now that he was accustomed to the Vigor it was much like using the Force. It took minimal effort to grasp it now.

    The tunnel went on for a very long way. Anakin and Jacen led the way now. Jacen kept glancing at the map on his datapad. But something about it didn't convince Anakin. It was almost as if Jacen knew where he was going. The thought popped back into Anakin's head. He was terrified to admit it? but it was seeming more likely with every step.

    There was nothing that could be done now. Anakin had been lured into a trap. But he knew it now, and maybe he could turn it towards his favor. The enemy had lost the element of surprise. The enemy? his brother.

    The came upon another door and Jacen once again pressed the device to it and it opened immediately.

    Anakin was in for a shock when the door opened. Beyond the door was a huge room, utterly black. He couldn't see the walls, but there was a light. In the middle of the room, on a pedestal with her arms outstretched and held by chains stood Tahiri. She was limp and bloodied. Anakin stifled a yelp. Now was the time to focus. He kept his senses focused on Jacen, who was now moving into the middle of the room.

    The rest of the team was curious. "Wait Jacen!" Corran yelled as softly as he could. "It's a trap!"

    Anakin turned to Jacen with tears in his eyes. Then looked
  24. JM-Anakin-Solo Jedi Master

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    QFT

    Status: Complete
  25. G__Anakin Jedi Master

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    Yess!! Thankyou

    Good update!!

    Happy Finish
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