Saga A Boy's Dream: With the Queen (Anakin/Padmé, Obi Wan) COMPLETED - Cover Art Added

Yep, I already have the beginning planned out in my head.

 

A sequel?!............

Ani and Padme's goodbye was sweet, but still a little awkward. And the creepiness added by Palpy's last words were brilliant.

 

I loved this story. It was absolutely amazing. Anyways, the end with the conversation with Palptine was creepy, I suppose it is a foreshadowing of what is to come. I really hope there will be a sequel to this. Great Job.

 

Yay a sequel!!!!

 

That was a perfect ending. Padme and Ani took a step back from the edge, but are still peering over it.

Now I have another reason to look forward to Christmas...sequel!

Thank you for sharing your time and talent.

It is greatly appreciated!

Lori

 

*kicks self in head for missing all these chapters*

I'm so sorry! I LOVED every last one! I loved this most:

?You have no fear, young one.? Vitreous complimented.

?You have no brains.

lol!!! I just wish I had gotten here sooner!

*kicks self in head again*


Jasmine

 

Wonderful ending!!!!

You did an outstanding job.

This so deserves a sequel!!!!!!!


Can't wait.

 

?Wait for me, Padmé. When I return things will be different. I promise.?


this so reminds me of ROTS when he says almost the same but things were not set right at all

 

Whoa! What a bittersweet ending! Loved it though - it was a fitting end to a great story! You had just the right amount of romance and intrigue!

Great, great job! I'll miss this story, but hope to see a sequel some day!!

 

That was awesome and I'm so glad to hear there is a sequel! I just loved it! You are a gifted writer!

 

Thanks for the update!

This was a great ending! And a bit ominous too but that's to be expected anyway. I liked how Padme finally admitted, especially to herself, that Anakin will be in her life. And it was just so heartbreaking to see Anakin beg Padme to wait for him.

I very much liked your story!

 

Here is a small snippet from Chapter 1 of the Sequel.

There is no title to the story yet, but the first two chapters are complete unless i go back and add more to them. First post will be 12-25-05, I will PM everyone who was a loyal reader of this story and advise you of the update.



She hoisted the foot of her sky-blue dress up as she began to run across the stage, causing a scene. Before she could get to Anakin two storm troopers turned their blasters on her stopping her in her tracks.

?You?ve gone far enough, Milady.? The husky voice boomed underneath the mask.

?Stand down, commander.? Vader ordered.

They did not hesitate to listen to his order and backed away. Vader stepped between them and looked at Padmé for a long moment.






there that's all you get.

 

Any chance of Christmas coming early this year?

Wow, just that lil' snippet was enough to ignite my curiousity to the extremes!!

Can't wait for the first post darkside!!!

 

a sequel ??

ani is still gonna turn

still cant wait for it.

 

Vadakin.

At least he is old enough for her now.

 

Yay, a sequel!! Merry Christmas to us!

 

Christmas has never seemed so far away.

Anyone who was a loyal reader? I was a loyal reader...for the last two chapters.

 

don't worry, I'll be sure to PM you.

 

ahhh...i just read this...don't know how i managed to miss it but anyways, i really liked it, even if they weren't exactly together in the end. the angsty stuff was well written...and the ending definitely leaves a lot of possibilities for the sequel.

we have to wait until christmas for the sequel??? don't you like that's a little evil to make us wait that long??

 

Thanks, darkside! I honestly really enjoyed this story, I just didn't see it soon enough.

 

Sequel?????!!!!

You MUST Pm me when you start!...if you don't Pm me...Bad things will happen!

Loved every sentence!

Cheers_Cazza

 

Santa Darksideyesplease, If were all very good little Siths can we have our present early?

 

Finally able to catch up with this story!

Amazing ending! Padme and Anakin's goodbye was so bittersweet, but you definitely ended things on a wicked cliffie, with Palpy preparing to sink his claws into Anakin.

Excellent job, darksideyesplease.

And now I get to catch up on the sequel.

 

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I'm making these myself, hopefully they don't suck too bad.

 

I liked this story. Consider me a loyal reader. *runs off to find sequel*