Beyond - Legends A Brand New Day (SJRS May/June Challenge)

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Love Luke's concerns and worries about reestablishing a New Jedi Order. Very much in character and understandable as well. Woot! I love the time-span you have here. Much, much easier to grapple with.

I'm putting this on my watch-list.

 

I am also in. Should be a less stressful week in the kindergarten than last week. No pyjama parties & zoo visits.

So, I would like to travel along to Coruscant with Luke.

 

Oooh I'm loving this beginning, gal!! I can't wait to see how you have Luke deal with all that's been placed on his shoulders.

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This is a promising start! It's got to be somewhat difficult for Luke, having everyone in constant celebration (probably alcohol-laden, considering it's full of X-wing pilots ) when he's worried about where to go next from here. Some foreshadowing of redheads on Coruscant... it will be interesting to see how that plays out.

Oh my. Luke hasn't read the Holonet very much, has he? At least, if it's anything like the real-world equivalent. I'm sure he can find any number of people who believe they have powers. And more who sign up thinking he's "too hot to be a hermit."

 

Great characterization for Luke in this timeframe. Great start (it is a start, right?).

 

I like how you describe the weight on Luke's shoulders and the many wonderings on in his mind. I too hope this is a start. Tag me, please if you continue.

 

Thanks ladies! I hope this is a start since I have an outline, but I still need to turn it into an actual plot or risk writing a dead, so I ask for a little patience from you.

 

Two busy RL weeks ahead with the kindergarten summer feast coming up & me doing the stage background painting on my own...

So yes, I will be patient! Your Luke is definitely worth it.