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Saga A breath in Death Padme vig.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Genimay, Jun 26, 2005.

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  1. Genimay

    Genimay Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Diaclamer:I don't own Padme or Star Wars


    How could you?
    You promissed you would always be there for me yet those eyes aren't your's.

    Why do I weap for someone I don't know?
    My tears are for Ani,not you.

    Where are you,Anakin Skywalker?
    That's your body but not your soul.

    When did you leave,my love?
    I know you are not here with me.

    What did they ever do to you?
    The younglings looked up to Anakin,he was thier hero.

    Who is looking back at me?
    I don't know. You are breathing in death Anakin,please come home.

     
  2. Genimay

    Genimay Jedi Padawan star 4

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  3. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    Very nicely done. :D I really like the insight to her thoughts. It almost seems real.:D
     
  4. Genimay

    Genimay Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thank you!!!
     
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