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Saga A chick on every planet, 2008 diary completed 28-12 going with an explosion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 4, 2008.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    A chick on every planet
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA - ROTS
    Characters: my OC Tige Moranis.
    Genre: diary
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    Summary: Tige Moranis makes notes in his diary
    Disclaimer: Lucas = Star Wars


    Entry 1

    Hey good to see you.
    Who am I?
    Oh, let me introduce myself
    I am Tige Moranis and have the most beautiful pale grey eyes you have seen in this galaxy. And my hair shines, white like the sun of Corellia.
    I am on an errand for my boss.
    I have come back from a small arms factory and access the holocam through my PDA.
    Explosives: check
    Timer: check
    Counting down: 3 , 2 , 1
    Blackness
    I have another job for Iwana Needa done.
     
  2. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    I like the name of his boss. Tige sounds rather full of himself. [face_laugh] Great start, I'd like to see where you go with this. :)
     
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great beginning

    Love Tige's description of himself. Modest, isn't he? :p

    Looking forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  4. KrystalBlaze

    KrystalBlaze Jedi Master star 5

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    This made me chuckle! Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)

    -Krystal
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia posted: Great beginning

    Love Tige's description of himself. Modest, isn't he?

    Looking forward to more

    KrystalBlaze posted: This made me chuckle! Can't wait to see where you go with this.

    -Krystal

    Thanks for reading and yes he is a real scoundrel in many guises

    Entry 2

    That was a lovely girl in my room last night.

    I had diner with her and she was looking gorgeous. A red dress with those lace gloves up to her elbows. And those matching high heeled boots.

    Of cource I invited her for the night and she happyly agreed. An offer of 100 credits would entice any back water planet girl in a bar.

    I am leaving this morning and she asked if I would return.

    Seeing the morning news on the holotube and the newscatcher telling of the Chenni small arms factory fire I don?t think I am coming back to this planet but not wanting to have a crying chick in my hotelroom, I told her I would be back.

    I packed my belongings (not very much because I use my credits to buy the local stuff if I am on an errand) and went to the hotel-cashier to check out.

    Bye mister Sinola and see you again was his reply.

    I boarded a public transport headed for the spaceport.

    At the spaceport I contacted my boss and she told me to go to Greamaga.

    tbc-
     
  6. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    A promesing beginning indeed...

    *listens to Herman Van Veen singing "Adieu café"!*

     
  7. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice of him to spare the "chick's" feelings. :p
     
  8. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    not wanting to have a crying chick in my hotelroom, I told her I would be back

    [face_shame_on_you][face_shame_on_you][face_shame_on_you][face_shame_on_you]

    Honesty is always the best policy.

    But then again, one should never say never so perhaps he will be back.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  9. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    AzureAngel2 posted: A promesing beginning indeed...

    *listens to Herman Van Veen singing "Adieu café"!*

    A perfect song for this diary

    Alexis_Wingstar posted: Nice of him to spare the "chick's" feelings.

    He will have many more chicks

    He is changing identities on almost every planet but that's his job.

    Thanks all readers and here is the next update with the Storm challenge in it.

    Entry 3

    Far out in the uncharted backwaters of the unfashionable end of the Western Spiral arm of the Galaxy lies a small unregarded yellow sun. One inhabited planet orbits it and the dustball is known as Greamaga.

    I am heading towards it and the spaceport of Grema is my destiny.

    Strap in for landing the signal was blaring a short time ago and I have done just that.

    What a sorry excuse for a planet.

    I checked in giving them my name as Tipp Taredon and that port-authority man said ?watch out for your health?

    With that he must be refering to my belching belly (courtesy of my shopping for a disguise and finding one for the Taredon persona) That belly was very convenient for transporting some stuff I am needing on my next assignment. Taredon will dissappear in the next hour.

    I exited the spaceport and was almost bowled over by the gusting wind. A real storm had broken loose and the locals muttered just a bit. Happens every day here and is good for the dust.

    Dust, they would need a hurricane to get rid of it. I entered a public fresher and changed my clothes. Taredon?s ID was destroyed and the belly became a handy pouch and I went to a motel and checked in as Mats Morgan.

    Tomorrow I have a job.

    tbc-
     
  10. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Gee, I wish I had a removable belly! :D

    Nice update. =D=
     
  11. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wow that portable belly sounds like it comes in handy! :p

    Tomorrow I have a job

    Ooohhh, I sense the adventure is about to begin :D

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Alexis_Wingstar: Gee, I wish I had a removable belly!

    Nice update.

    Thanks for reading [:D] He needed that for transporting nasty things.

    Entry 4

    Another storm is transporting the dust in the streets as I am walking towards a dealer in spacetransports.

    Iwana Needa has given me permission to get one of those unmarked transports that are quite handy for my job and what better place to get them than this back water dustball. No questions asked and if you?re showing credits they do anything for you.

    Ah that?s nice I said when the dealer showed me one of those Sienar-build yachts. It was reasonably priced and had a large hold for a speeder or other stuff. It was droid operated and easy to fly.(not that I have any trouble flying spacecraft or anything with engines. My former boss did give me an education and before him my dad but that?s a long time ago. I am 37 and left my home when I was 18)

    And it had a nice navcomp and was very fast. The dealer said that it could travel the distance from Anaxes to Coruscant in just under five hours.

    I got the keys to the transport and went back to the motel.

    In the bar I met a nice blonde haired girl and invited her to diner.
    With her with that green lace dress and me in my white tuxedo and black trousers we were quite stunning on that dancefloor.
     
  13. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Great update. =D= I wonder what he'll be up to next.
     
  14. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    With her with that green lace dress and me in my white tuxedo and black trousers we were quite stunning on that dancefloor

    Nice to see him having some fun before starting work.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  15. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    I wonder where he ends up next!
     
  16. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia Nice to see him having some fun before starting work.

    Great update

    AzureAngel2 I wonder where he ends up next!

    You will see and he is up to nothing good.

    All thanks for reading

    Entry 5

    She stayed with me during the night and after a promise to come to the same bar this evening I left to get my stuff.

    Grema small starfighters factory was my destiny and I introduced myself as Trig Manning, merchant for the wealthy Dronga who needed a couple of fighters. I was shown the factory and thought ?easy job.?

    The chick was there that evening and I pretended to have a headace when she wanted to join me in my motelroom. Wishing me a speedy recovery she left and one hour later I dressed in a black jumpsuit, got the ?belly?bag and sneaked into the deserted factory.

    Planting my explosives and devices I patched the timer into the security system. It wouldn?t be detected and the place would go ?boom? after I entered hyperspace tomorrow in the afternoon.

    When I returned to my room I found a message waiting for me. It was a ?love-letter? from Iwana Needa giving me my next assignment.

    Geez that?s big.
     
  17. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    I get a chuckle every time I read his boss's name.

    Great update =D=
     
  18. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Well at least he's going to be long gone before the factory blows.

    my next assignment.

    Geez that?s big


    Oooohhhh....I can't wait to see what it is!!

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  19. SUGARBANTJINN

    SUGARBANTJINN Jedi Padawan star 4

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    most intersting! lol. where can i get one of those removable bellies? :p
     
  20. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    A removable belly?

    *looks at her own!*

    Hm...

     
  21. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Alexis_Wingstar: I get a chuckle every time I read his boss's name.
    Great update

    Kelia: Well at least he's going to be long gone before the factory blows.
    my next assignment.
    Geez that?s big

    Oooohhhh....I can't wait to see what it is!!
    Great update

    SUGARBANTJINN: most intersting! lol. where can i get one of those removable bellies?

    AzureAngel2
    : A removable belly?
    *looks at her own!*
    Hm...

    Thanks all for reading and yes he is planning something big and you have to be a criminal in many disguises to have that belly.:D

    Entry 6
    I was piloting a speeder through the dusty streets of Grema towards the spaceport. I stowed it away in my unmarked transport and plotted a course for Coruscant.

    My next assignment is the small weapons merchant Waldan and Co with a large shop at the senate district shopping mall. ?Make it spectacular? she had ordered. ?Easy with weapons and ammo in that shop?

    When that shop goes boom I want to be as far away as possible.

    Iwana contacted me before I left and she said that I could go to Anaxes and take some R. and R.
    Anaxes has a lot of beautiful girls and I am sure one of them will be to my liking.

     
  22. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Scoundrel! [face_laugh]
    Great update :D
     
  23. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Well I hope all that R N' R doesn't leave him too tired or distracted to make that blast as spectacular as it could be.

    This may turn into his favorite assignment of all :p

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D=
     
  24. AzureAngel2

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    *sings a certainMOULLIN ROUGE song now!*

    Something with ?Spectacular,spectacular?...
     
  25. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Alexis_Wingstar Scoundrel! [face_laugh]
    Great update :D


    AzureAngel2 *sings a certainMOULLIN ROUGE song now!*

    Something with ?Spectacular,spectacular?...

    Yes all thanks for reading and the blast will be spectacular.

    Entry 7


    It was dark and only the pinpricks of light from my transport illuminated the sky. I was headed to a rural district of the cityplanet of Coruscant. I landed and guided the speeder out of the hold. I finished the inputs in the navcomp and the timed bomb and pressed the activate button.

    In seven hours the speeder would be on its way and I would be off planet by that time and would have landed on Anaxes to wait for my next job. Iwana told me to go to Anaxeri and the nice resort hotel.

    Taking off I flew over the Senate district and saw the shopping mall with all its activity. In the distance I could see the Jeditemple.

    Jedi, those beings with their hockey religion and always interfering in things.

    Jediscum.

    I don?t like them.

    Dad has dealt with them and they are the reason I left my home when I was 18. Dad was in some illegal (to those Jedi) business and they interfered, leaving my dad a poor man and on bad terms with me too.

    He was accusing me that I had led those Jedi to our house. I was leading them away but those itty nitty all knowing sleazy beings (one was a Nautolan with the name of Kit Fisto with those wriggling tentacles) just entered my mind and made me do things.

    Horrible mindhunters, that?s what they are.

    I had to give up my family.

    Thanks to the credits this transport is very fast and with its newest nav-comp and droid I got to Anaxes very fast.
     
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