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Before - Legends A Child's Savior: Epilogue FINALLY FINISHED 07/23/2005 !

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by masterobiwankenobi, Dec 12, 2003.

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  1. Aya-Na_Bashu

    Aya-Na_Bashu Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jul 14, 2005
    :_| That was so beautiful :_|
     
  2. KSkywalker

    KSkywalker Jedi Grand Master star 3

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    Wow, what a long wait! I'm so glad to see that you have finished this great story! Thanks! I love happy endings! :D
     
  3. maychorian

    maychorian Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aw, how beautiful. [face_love] I hoped that that was what the river stone had done to Obi-Wan. So happy to be proven right! The last scene was just perfect. I loved the image of Obi's friends wanting to play connect the dots! [face_laugh]

    Keep it up! Really enjoyed this story.
     
  4. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jul 29, 2004
    I thought you forgot about this story. That was a lovely ending. =D= [face_love]
     
  5. Kynstar

    Kynstar Jedi Knight star 5

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    Yay!! =D= Obi is fine and now can become Qui-Gon's apprentice!! I'm sure Obi's friends will be relieved and excited to know their Obi is back! [face_dancing]

    Excellent ending!!
     
  6. masterobiwankenobi

    masterobiwankenobi Jedi Master star 1

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    Aya-Na_Bashu Thanks, glad you liked it.

    KSkywalker i had a bit of writer's block with this chapter and my beta reader was feeling ill so it took longer for her to edit, but it's finally done. glad you liked it. i like happy endings too. ;)

    maychorianthanks. i also liked the connecting the dots part, i could see my son chasing my daughter around the house with a marker if she had chicken pox, so i thought it would work well. ;)

    LilQui-Gon nope didn't forget about it, it just took a lot longer than i planned. glad you liked the ending, i wasn't to sure about it.

    Kynstar thanks, obi's frineds will definately be happy.

    thanks for all the reviews, i've had a bad couple of days and it was good to get the reviews.

    Peggy 8-}
     
  7. anekasolo

    anekasolo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 16, 2001
    Thank you thank you thank you for finishing this story!

    The ending was sweet and perfect.
     
  8. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004


    I just knew the rock would save the day.
    Brilliant story Thanks :D
     
  9. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dec 30, 1999
    Okay, I just read this whole story, and let me just say that I loved it! [face_love] Poor Obi-Wan, but I'm glad he finally remembered who he was, and that Qui-Gon got a chance to fix his mistake. And I just have to say that I really loved Cyjeun, such a cute little slug-thing, and a great friend for Obi. Lovely story! :D
    I'll have to read your other stuff now, I look forward to it!
    [face_peace]
     
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