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Beyond - Legends A Christmas Carol ? Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - completed)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Maggy, Dec 10, 2004.

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  1. Darth_Elu

    Darth_Elu Chosen One star 7

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    :eek: :eek: :eek: :_|


    ....I love you two, you're so evil. [face_love]

    :p
     
  2. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    we know that *lol*
     
  3. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    it's up to you, but torture is always good ;)

    Edit: We try sweetie, :* We really do :p
     
  4. Darth_Elu

    Darth_Elu Chosen One star 7

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    You succeed, you mean. ;) :p
     
  5. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    that too, :p

    and Mag, I'll start it, and If I take a while to reply to stuff, that's why
     
  6. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    take your time hon, take your time
     
  7. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    it shouldn't take long, but I have to do the dishes in a min,
     
  8. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey, has anyone checked out this story?

    Death's realease

    It totally rocks, but no one's there, so please have a look
     
  9. LadyAngelic

    LadyAngelic Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm gonna say Aww again..


    AAaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

    Love it..Keep it up.
     
  10. Kazzy

    Kazzy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I like this!

    It's a great twist on both Star Wars and on the original A Christmas Carol, with Kyp at its centre. It certainly helps put things in perspective.

    Great fic, hope to see more soon! :)
     
  11. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Elu

    because I want to *hugs*

    Great job
    Thanks :D

    *huddles on sofa with Elu* ;)


    Smuggler_Shidakis

    Whoa!
    *lol*

    Kyppie's family!
    yub Kyppie?s family :)

    Kyppie not a bitter idiot anymore!
    *grin* wait it comes more! :p }:)

    (Good postie, Mag)
    *laugh* thanks :)


    Sarah

    *dances* Good boy, Kyppie!!
    you sure about it? [face_devil]


    Red

    Hey Maggy, I'm hiding from flowerbee in here so don't tell her I'm here okay!
    I will not :D *grin* you two are crazy :p

    EDIT: AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! flowerbee!! *runs away, but first reviews*
    thanks that you take time for it :D

    >Unbelievable comes closer! Not that Exar Kun had shown up in his room, that was plausible, but that he really believed Jaina loves him, that and she was his happiest memory. <
    Poor deluded Kyp...
    He really needs to get a girl...
    Oh wait, he can, he's just too...too...KYP!!

    yub he needs a girl! Will he get one in the end? ;) :p [face_devil]

    >He swirled around and saw three illuminated figures standing side by side. An older man and woman who had a young man standing between them, looking much like his older version. <
    Awww...his family came to help him. So sweet. I'm going to go cry now.
    Oh wait, gotta finish reading first!

    *reaches handkerchief*
    cry girl, cry ;)

    >?Why does she still care? I have nothing done to deserve her love!?
    ?We know that. Boy do we know that. <
    Awful harsh. I LOVE IT!

    how else get through is stubborn head?

    >We are always watching over you. Don?t screw up again. <
    Parents, they never change, even after they're dead. Go figure?

    *lol* no they don?t *grin*

    Another great one Maggy!!!
    thanks red :D *hugs*

    *dances around*
    *joins red*

    I want another!!
    someone else too but now you have to wait :D

    *huddles on sofa again*


    Jes
    hello hon :D

    >*huddles with Elu on the sofa and watches her readers* <
    Aren't they cute?

    *grin* yes we are! :D :D :D

    >but perhaps that is the trick, toying with my mind and driving me insane and she could laugh about my madness.´ <
    Do you honestly think so ill of her, Kyp?
    *hits Kyp over the head*

    he thinks lot more! [face_devil]

    Looks like he's finally come to his senses...maybe.
    maybe not :p


    Sam

    >?The way you walk around, shutting everybody out, pretending to have no heart. The way you hide yourself in the fear of getting hurt again, you treat all around you like poodoo, snap at everyone and anyone who tries to befriend you, breaking through your barriers. You shut her out. I don?t understand why she still cares but she does. Don?t lose her, you silly boy!? <
    And I thought the lectures I get were bad, jeez

    *lol* you rewrote it ;) *laugh*

    Nice post, *pats Kyp's head* good boy, now go kiss Jaina
    good boy? Kyp? Really? ;)
    will he get one? Me think ...


    LadyAngelic

    Thank you :D


    Kazzy

    I like this!

    It's a great twist on both Star Wars and on the original A Christmas Carol, with Kyp at its centre. It certainly helps put things in perspective.

    Great fic, hope to see more soon! :)


    Thank you :D
    there are three post left :)


    Mag
     
  12. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Elu: Like your new icon :D
    Indy yay!


    oOoOoOo


    Christmas Reborn ? A New Chance

    First part

    Kyp rushed through the corridors holding the bottle of Whyrens and two glasses in his hands. He felt so stupid. He was so glad that the corridors were deserted; now no one could see him. It was five o?clock in the morning and he was on his way to bring Jaina out of her bed, asking her if she wanted a drink. Stupid.

    Before he knew it he found himself in front of her door. He pressed the door bell, silently hoping she wasn?t home to see him like this. After what seemed to be an eternity the door opened and a sleepy Jaina greeted him.
    Nonetheless she looked breathtaking. Her hair was ruffled from sleep, reaching down her back and shoulders, her eyes were a little swollen too. She had been dragging a cape around her shoulders.

    ?Force ... Kyp! What are you doing here?? she said with a raspy voice.

    ?Good Morning to you too, Goddess,? Kyp answered cheerily.

    `Now he has gone mad!´, was Jaina's thought.

    The older Jedi smiled at her and pulled the bottle from behind his back. ?I know it is rather late or rather early, depending on how you look at it, but would you mind sharing this lovely gift with me??

    If he had surprised her, her face didn?t betray it. ?Come on in then.? She stepped aside so he could enter, still curious as to why he was really here. Her room was dimly lit by a lamp on the bedside table.

    Jaina closed the door and sat in a comfy armchair, slipping one leg beneath her. She gestured for him to sit down. He sat the bottle at the table, the glasses along side it and sat down opposite her.

    ?Could you please explain how you knew the bottle was from me?? she said.

    Instead of an answer he poured two glasses of the whiskey. He lifted a glass to her. She stared at him for a moment, waiting to see if he would snap at her or do something snaky like always, but he did nothing. She took the glass from his hand.

    When she took it, Jaina accidentally brushed his fingers with hers, causing shivers to run down his spine. He looked up and green eyes met brown. The contact was short as an embarrassed Jaina looked into her glass and took a gulp.

    Before the silence became uncomfortable, Jaina looked up again and asked, ?What are you doing here??

    ?As I said before I would be honored if you would share your gift with me,? Kyp said, avoiding her eyes.


    Jaina sensing that something wasn?t right here, said, ?Noted. Try again.?

    The man blinked unbelievably at the woman opposite him, `how the heck did she know??

    A smile appeared on the brown haired woman?s lips, as she saw that he was surprised. ?Do you don?t think it is a bit unusual for you to show up in my room just to share a drink. So let me repeat it again. What are you doing here??

    Kyp looked at the floor for a very long time, unsure what he should tell her. Jaina watched him quietly but was getting impatient with the stubborn Jedi Master. ?Are you going to tell me or have you just come to look at the carpet and tell me how nice it is??

    His green eyes locked with hers for a short time. ?I am sorry,? he mumbled pushing himself out of the sofa. ?I should never have come here.? He walked toward the door but before he could open it he felt a small hand on his shoulders, trying to turn him around.

    ?Oh no, Kyp Durron. You?re not leaving that easily. You came here for a reason, so sit down and tell me. I have had enough of your games, your withdrawal from everyone and your remarks.? Jaina?s eyes sparkled with anger which over powered his stubbornness.

    ?Durron you have two options: number one, you leave through that door. I will tell you now; if you do that you will regret the day you were born. Option number 2 is to sit down again and tell me what you really want. That would be my preferred choice as it will make us friends again.?

    The rogue Jedi eyes opened in surprise. He had thought she meant to kick him out.
    `... friends again. Boy give it a try, it will be worth your while´ he encourag
     
  13. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    He really likes that whiskey, huh? :p
     
  14. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    He didn't leave. Good Sithie. Now tell Jaina that you love her.

    Loverly post, Mag!
     
  15. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sarah: he does!
    but he will not drink again promise
    thanks for reading

    Mag
     
  16. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Smuggler_Shidakis: [face_devil]
    he will i think [face_thinking] [face_devil]


    Thanks for reading :D

    Mag
     
  17. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    GReat post!!!!!
     
  18. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank you Kat :D
     
  19. RedGold

    RedGold Jedi Master star 4

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    It was five o?clock in the morning and he was on his way to bring Jaina out of her bed, asking her if she wanted a drink. Stupid.

    Romantic?

    She stared at him for a moment, waiting to see if he would snap at her or do something snaky like always, but he did nothing.

    Yeah, like be the normal Kyp you fell in love with! :D

    Do you don?t think it is a bit unusual for you to show up in my room just to share a drink.

    Thank goodness this is PG...heheheheh

    She took his hand into her smaller one and squeezed it lightly, as encouragement you might say. ?Why do you loathe Christmas so much Kyp? You snap at everyone, withdraw into yourself and scare the kids. Why is it Kyp, something must have happened.

    She's so nice to him! So sweet.

    I'm gonna cry...almost over!!
     
  20. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Red:
    >It was five o?clock in the morning and he was on his way to bring Jaina out of her bed, asking her if she wanted a drink. Stupid. <

    Romantic?

    *lol* so you could see it too :D

    >She stared at him for a moment, waiting to see if he would snap at her or do something snaky like always, but he did nothing. <

    Yeah, like be the normal Kyp you fell in love with!

    *grin* for now ;)

    >Do you don?t think it is a bit unusual for you to show up in my room just to share a drink. <

    Thank goodness this is PG...heheheheh

    *laugh* mhh... yub

    >She took his hand into her smaller one and squeezed it lightly, as encouragement you might say. ?Why do you loathe Christmas so much Kyp? You snap at everyone, withdraw into yourself and scare the kids. Why is it Kyp, something must have happened. <

    She's so nice to him! So sweet.

    she is!

    I'm gonna cry...almost over!!
    me too after the fun :_|

    and no chocolate left :_| :_| :_|

    Mag
     
  21. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Don't worry about the chocolate, I've got plenty.

    Mag, are you planning on writing anything else?
     
  22. RedGold

    RedGold Jedi Master star 4

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    so you could see it too

    But of course! It was so cute of him. I'm liking Kyp more and more...still think Jania is a whiny brat though...

    *hides from angry Jaina fans*

    and no chocolate left

    THE HUMANITY!!!!

    I don't think I can go on....
     
  23. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sarah:
    cool you share the chocolate? [face_batting]

    i have started a sequel to Breakfast Conversation and i have sometime ago started to write a J/J story.
    Besides that i have nothing planed.

    you like my writing? :D


    Red:
    >so you could see it too <

    But of course! It was so cute of him. I'm liking Kyp more and more...still think Jania is a whiny brat though...

    *lol*

    >and no chocolate left

    THE HUMANITY!!!! <
    Sarah shares hers :D

    Thank you Sarah *hugs*

    Mag
     
  24. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    *hands out chocolate* Yes, very much. :D
     
  25. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank you
    Thank you
    me likes yours too :D
     
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