Before - Legends A Crown for a Sith Lord - AU, Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon- Darth_Pixel and VaderLVR, - updated 7/28

Van's worried about his skin? Great. That means he's both conceited and vain.

I like Master Kaden, but I don't think I agree with her about Van finding his own way out of his mess. He'll start to feel isolated (if he doesn't already) and that will only deepen his insecurities.

 

The kid is so...snotty. So, Qui-Gon promised to watch over him, but what could make him ditch Obi-Wan?

I have a feeling that he will do something very wrong on this mission. I can't wait to find out what...

 

Oh, dear me. Animosity between two padawans can't be good.

?I understand that there is no excuse for my behavior and I shall try very hard to do better in the future,? Obi-Wan continued. He felt Qui-Gon?s approval in the weight of the big hand on his shoulder.

That is all I can ask of you, Obi-Wan,? Qui-Gon said warmly. ?I know that Van is?difficult in many ways.?

?Many, many ways,? Obi-Wan answered with a slight smile.

Qui-Gon laughed softly and shook his head. ?Yes, perhaps so.? Then his expression became solemn. ?But this mission is vital, Obi-Wan. None of us must lose sight of that fact.?

Letting his expression match his Master?s Obi-Wan nodded. ?I understand, Master. I won?t let you down.?

Giving the young man a pat on the back, Qui-Gon smiled. ?You never have, Obi-Wan. You never have.?

It seems Obi-Wan will end up doing more than letting Qui-Gon down.
This is a story I am half afraid to read yet can't avoid. Obi's going down! Not good.

 

Sorry I missed the last post! They were both excellent! I love the banter and animosity between the two padawans - what I love especially is that Obi-Wan is acting his age. I hate reading fics with a young Obi who is completely in control of his temper and already the wise old Ben from ANH. Here, he's right where he should be when faced with someone he doesn't like.

I'm worried about Master Kaden, though. I want her to be fine so Van will be out of Qui-Gon's hands. And Qui-Gon! Brandies all around!

Excellent post, can't wait for more!

-Krystal

 

Yuck, I really don't like Van ...Lovely interaction between Qui and Obi...I'm worried about what you have instore for us though...

A bad feeling I have....

keep the pms coming!

 

I think Van's master was right to let Van learn to deal with his own messes. After all, he's training to be a Knight and he has to learn diplomacy.... sometime.

Obi-Wan better watch it, though. I think Qui-Gon's not too happy with him right now. He needs to keep in mind what is most important - the mission and his relationship with Qui-Gon, not some foolish boy that has his own problems.

Good job.