Saga A cry in the Night...Anakin/Obi-Wan/Shmi...AU/Drama...Updated 3/3/06

Good old Schmi, how I pine for her Scandanavian accent!

Anakin has got a bit of a temper hasn't he.

 

Another great update!

 

Shmi is going to make it - what a relief!

But, she has to wake up to a deceased husband and feuding sons - not good.

Hopefully she will help Anakin and Owen make peace with each other.

Nice update

 

Great update! I'm glad Shmi is surviving!

This is getting more interesting, I can't wait to see what happens!

 

?I want her with me.? Anakin replied firmly. ?Owen Lars obviously can?t protect her and she doesn?t have anywhere else to go. I won?t abandon her again.? He declared.

Obi-Wan sighed deeply. ?You didn?t abandon her in the first place.?

Ahh...

I just adore how you've written Obi-Wan in this piece. His calm, serene presence is a rememdy to sore wounds for Anakin, and you've got his gentle teaching methods down to a tee. Anakin is good too: the way he blames everyone for Shmi's injuries except the people who did it because he needs to feel in control.

Brilliant. I look forward to more.