Beyond A Darkened Day (AU; J/TK, J/Z/C, K/L/J) Post - 3/18 - Rosie!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wails*

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  1. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    *laughs cruely*

    [face_devil]

    So General..... Do you like knowing what's going to happen??

    [face_devil]

    Edit: I'VE REACHED 4 PAGES!!! ALMOST 100!!! WAHOO!!!

    Edit2: Greg is going to hate me...... [face_devil]
  2. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    NO! Why did--ARGGGGG!!!!
  3. Master_Ponta Force Ghost

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    Okay... let me get this straight, you're sick Jaid... but cool, so I'm okay with it.
  4. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    So you guy's like my teaser's?

    [face_devil]

    This is too much fun.......

  5. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    What teasers? :confused: I want teasers!!!!! :p
  6. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Very well.....

    ****TEASERS FOR NEXT POST****

    Laedala pulled the golden band from her finger and dangled it in front of Han's face. "I don't need you."

    Want more? [face_devil]

    ?What I wouldn?t give to have a million of you to kill.? Laedala hissed.

    Enjoy............ [face_mischief] [face_devil]
  7. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Ohhh, That's incredible!!!
  8. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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  9. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    You like? [face_devil]

    Edit: GAH!!! Double posty!!! :( Sorry...... Post soon to follow........
  10. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    Me like! Me want mmmmmmooooooooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! :D :D :p
  11. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    You will!!

    I'm just waiting on my beta now!

    I sent it off almost half an hour ago.

    So.

    Depending on how much we all bug him....... Well, how much I bug him that is.....

    Maybe 1 more hour? ?[face_plain]

    Can you handle that?

    One quicky.

    Which teaser did you like better? ?[face_plain]
  12. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    Second. :D

    I feel that way about a bunch of people... My Neo-Nazi bio teacher included... :p

    I guess I can wait... If I have to... :p
  13. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    HE SAID HE'S ALMOST DONE!!!!

    YAY!!!!

    POST IS COMMING!!!!!!!

    :D :D :D :D :D

    *thinks about the list of post notifications she gets to do*

    Oh kill joy......... *grimace*

    p.s. I like the second also.... particularly in the full context.... it's somthing I've ALWAYS wanted to do........ [face_devil]
  14. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    Heehee... yessssssssss... [face_devil] [face_devil]

    POSTIE'S COMIN'!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

    Oh, btw, if you want to read a REALLY REALLY REALLY good Z/J go check out Kaoru's "Sypathy"... It's really angsty and reeeeeeeeeally good... [face_love] [face_love] :p

    WHERE IS TJF?!?!?! Goddess gave me a bunny too, and I have to talk to her about it...
  15. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Well 06, I don't know where the Supreme Goddess is but I do know have my posty with me.... :D

    Ready??

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Chapter 2

    Han and Winter raced into room 247-LX.

    "Glad you could make it, Husband." Laedala fairly purred.

    Han stopped dead in his tracks and Winter's eyes hardened.

    "Leia." Han breathed, his chest compressed as he looked into her eyes.... her blazing red eyes.... so unlike the gentle brown that he knew and loved that he felt like crying. "Leia..." His tone was beseeching.

    Laedala's voice was colder then Hoth and harder then durasteel. "I am Empress Laedala. Leia is no more."

    Han just stood there; un-moving, un-breathing, un-blinking, his eyes fastened on the figure of his wife.

    Winter looked from Han to Laedala, and back to Han. "Han,-"

    "And Winter," Laedala interrupted coldly. "I'm disappointed." She stood and sauntered over slowly. "Trying to steal my babies. Tisk-tisk." She turned to Han.

    "You don't trust me, my husband?" Her gaze slowly slid to her left hand where her slim wedding band rested. "Do you remember the day you gave this to me?"

    Han blinked and took a hasty step back. "Uh..."

    Laedala pulled the golden band from her finger and dangled it in front of Han's face. "I don't need you."

    The sound of the band dropping on the floor was startlingly loud in the stillness.

    ?Leave.? Laedala spat, looking levelly at her husband.

    ?Lei-? Winter started.

    Laedala spun to face the woman she had grown up with and pinned her against the wall with the Force.

    ?What I wouldn?t give to have a million of you to kill.? Laedala hissed.

    Winter flicked her eyes over to Jacen and Jaina, Laedala?s followed.

    Han had already gathered Jacen into his arms and was moving towards Jaina.

    ?Han! Run!? Winter cried as Laedala threw a sudden, brief flash of blue Force lightning at him.

    Laedala?s jaw dropped as the lightning disappeared when it got within a few centimeters of him.

    Winter took the opportunity to run for Jaina as Han headed for the door, Jacen wrapped securely in his arms.

    Jaina cried as Winter lifted her from where she lay and Laedala whipped back around as the door closed behind Han.

    Laedala?s lip curled. She?d deal with Han later.

    Winter swallowed and held Jaina close to her chest.

    ?Put my daughter down, scum.?

    Winter drew a deep breath. ?No, Leia. I won?t.?

    Laedala narrowed her eyes at the resolve in Winter?s voice. ?Ah, but you will.?

    Blue lightning streaked from Laedala?s raised hand to wrap itself around the white-haired woman.

    Winter dropped Jaina on the floor as she was thrown backwards by the force of Laedala?s anger.

    ?Leia!? Winter screamed. ?Leia, Please!!!?

    Laedala?s face was serene in the blue light that was crackling in the air.

    Memories swept by in Laedala?s mind.

    The death of her friends in the rebellion???. torture at the hands of Vader??? the realization that she was the daughter of Vader??. the moment that the Senate had announced Luke a traitor??? the awful moment that solidified her turning?? the death of her beloved brother???..

    Anger seethed in her as she sent wave after wave of Force Lightening.

    Finally, drained, she halted at looked at what had happened.

    Jaina lay on the floor, crying.

    A blackened?. something lay on the bed.

    It did not resemble any living thing. Let alone the beautiful woman Winter had been.

    Jaina cried as she felt her other half, her twin, leave the planet.

    Laedala walked over and picked her up and looked deep into her daughter?s honey brown eyes.

    ?Jaina Nyx, daughter of the Empire.?

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Nyx means Goddess of Night, I thought it was rather suited
  16. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    :eek: :_| :_| POOR WINTER!!!!!!

    I seriously had tears in my eyes... Great job! It takes a lot to make me cry... :p

    Jaid, I loved this. Poor everyone, but especially Winter... :( The flashbacks Leia/Laedala had were really poignant and touching. That was the part where I started to cry, btw... ;)

    Again, GREAT JOB. :)
  17. Soulwalker Jedi Master

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    Nicely done, Jaid. Although Winter's death was gruesome to say the least... [face_plain]
  18. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    So thats what got her stirred up. It wouldn't surprise me if the Bothan had anything to do with what was said about Luke.
  19. Master_Ponta Force Ghost

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    [GenOochy]


    *Hits Jaid with Force Lightning*

    THIS IS FOR WINTER!

    HOW DARE YOU!!!

    Ooooo!

    DIE!
  20. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    awesome post Jaid :D poor winter :( i haven't read much with her but still, force, that was a gruesome way to die... [face_plain]

    and *yowch* for han! the flashbacks (for leia) were a nice touch btw ;)

    ~TJF
  21. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    Yes, it was a grusome way to die...

    I would take anything over that....

    If you were not one of my dearest friends, Jaid, you would be blackened, too. [face_devil]

  22. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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    Wonderful post. Poor, Poor Winter. :(

    ~~Jilly
  23. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    Yeah, Winter was very brave . . . :_|

    I like this, Leidala still has enough Leia in her that you can feel sorry for her, and yet she's undeniably evil! :eek:

    Poor Han, all alone now. :(
  24. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    06: Jaid, I loved this.

    [face_blush]

    I added in the flashbacks at the last moment when I couldn't figure out a way to make her anger magnify..... So I thought re-hashing all {or most} of her painful memories would provide the added boost

    Again, GREAT JOB.

    Thanks!


    Greg: :( I tried to make Winter's death very mild!! I had a very graphic version then remembered that I said that the rateing was PG so I changed it.........


    Master: So thats what got her stirred up. It wouldn't surprise me if the Bothan had anything to do with what was said about Luke.

    Yup, last minute thingy....... And yes, Fey'la was the instigator in this......


    GenOochy: *Hits Jaid with Force Lightning*

    THIS IS FOR WINTER!

    HOW DARE YOU!!!

    Ooooo!

    DIE!


    o_O

    YIKES!!!


    Supreme Goddess: awesome post Jaid

    [face_blush]

    poor winter

    Does everyone feel sorry for Winter??


    General: Yes, it was a grusome way to die...

    I would take anything over that....


    *eyes glitter*

    You would?

    Hm..... [face_devil]

    If you were not one of my dearest friends, Jaid, you would be blackened, too.


    *gets down on her knees and thanks God that she is counted among his dearest friends*


    JainaDurron: Wonderful post. Poor, Poor Winter.

    Thanks.....


    TSM: I like this, Leidala still has enough Leia in her that you can feel sorry for her, and yet she's undeniably evil!

    Really?

    Cool!

    And is't Laedala, I thought about Leidala but liked the smoother look of Laedala [pronounced like Lei-dala] better

    Poor Han, all alone now.


    Ah yes.... Poor Han..... I liked the part where Laedala tells him that she doesn't need him..... [face_devil] Probably my favorite part of all........ [face_devil]

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    I.R.'s are DONE!!! :p

    Thanks everyone!!

    I'll be leaving for a week on Friday but I hope to have a post done before I leave that I will allow my beta to post........

    'Neways......

    Thank you all for feeling sorry for Winter!!

    You guy's were all either really liked her, think that no one should die that way, or I'm just good at killing people off.

    If it's the last one........

    Maybe I should do it a few more times............ [face_devil]

  25. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    And is't Laedala, I thought about Leidala but liked the smoother look of Laedala [pronounced like Lei-dala] better
    Yeah, I thought the way I had it looked funny. :p
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