Beyond A Darkened Day (AU; J/TK, J/Z/C, K/L/J) Post - 3/18 - Rosie!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wails*

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  1. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Ohhh, I almost started to cry when she thought about poor Luke. :_| This is sooo cool!

    Never did like that Winter. [face_devil] Sadly, I was rooting for Leia at that part.


    ?Jaina Nyx, daughter of the Empire.?

    Ohhh, that was awesome! Jacen and Jaina seperated? [face_shocked] :( Can't wait to see what happens to them. It's cooler that way.
  2. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    YOU TOOK 100!!!!

    THAT WAS RESERVED FOR SUPREME GODDESS!!!!

    :mad:

    J/K :p
  3. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    Jaid: You know what's funny? Your story and mine so closely resemble one another, and I haven't even posted that part yet! [face_laugh] I guess great minds think alike. :p
  4. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Never did like that Bothan.
  5. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    100 was reserved for me? i was waiting for YOU to take it! :p

    ~TJF
  6. Jaina_Fel_06 Jedi Master

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    Actually, if great minds thought alike, we'd all be running around naked hooting like monkeys. [face_plain]

    jk! I'm a tad inem... ined... drunk on vanilla Coke... you never shmoulda give me shome, TJF!! :p

    Congrats on 100, Jaid!!!!!!! :D :D :D
  7. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    EJM: Ohhh, I almost started to cry when she thought about poor Luke. This is sooo cool!

    EJ, your the only one who thinks that about this post!!! YAY!!!

    Sadly, I was rooting for Leia at that part.

    Why sadly? Leia was pretty cool I though.........

    Jaina Nyx, daughter of the Empire.

    Ohhh, that was awesome! Jacen and Jaina seperated? Can't wait to see what happens to them. It's cooler that way.


    So you liked that part 'eh? :p

    I like the name Jaina Nyx.

    Now time to get back to Mara and the sweetest little boy in SW.... [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    TSM: Mine is like yours? Yours is like mine? :eek: I didn't copy it! I swear it!

    Master: That's why I killed him off!!

    Supreme Goddess: But-but..... It should have been YOURS!!! YOU were the one who gave me the plot bunnie!! If it wasn't for you, this fic wouldn't be here!! 100 should have been yours!!!

    Fine.

    You get the next big number.

    And 1000, if we ever get there.........

    *rolles eyes*

    Which probably won't happen.........

    06: *laughs*

    'Kay guy's!

    Have fun!

    I'm heading off to bed!!

    See you all tomorrow!!!

    :)

    *heads off to bed*
  8. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    TSM: Mine is like yours? Yours is like mine? I didn't copy it! I swear it!
    That's what's so funny: the part of mine that's like yours hasn't been posted yet. :p I don't think you copied, just thought it was funny that we were both thinking the same thing. :p
  9. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    It should have been YOURS!!! YOU were the one who gave me the plot bunnie!! If it wasn't for you, this fic wouldn't be here!!

    you're the one that's writing it! :p i gave up the PB (well, for a few years, at least) to you, it's not mine anymore! :p and besides, "A Darkened Day" is a way off from what i originall thought :p

    ~TJF
  10. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    *sigh*
    SOOOO sorry I took 100. 8-} How clumsy of me. [face_devil] [face_devil]
    How was I supposed to know who you were saving it for?
  11. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    TSM: Oh, you havn't posted it yet?? Why not??

    Supreme Goddess: Fine, I know that ADD is way off but if you hadn't inspired me then this fic STILL wouldn't be here!! You get 1000 [if we get there] and 200!!! 500 is Kyp's!!!

    EJM: How was I supposed to know who you were saving it for?

    'Cause on page 2 I told Kyp that 100 was reserved for the Supreme Goddess? At least..... I thought I had...... *checks* Yes, I did
  12. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Ohhh, I'm sorry. :(
    Guess I should have remembered that.
    I'll try to pay better attention next time. :D

    *slinks off*
  13. Yoda_The_Great_Jedi Jedi Padawan

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    Good story Jaid keep the posts comming!
  14. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    Yoda=Luky

    I know all.

  15. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    EJ: :( Don't feel sad.... Want a postie?

    Yoda-Luky: *is amused* Have enough socks little brother? Thanks for the encouragment. :D

    General: Hey, at least it's not another variation of GenOochy.........


    ****ANNOUNCEMENT: POST AT BETA'S*****

    ****TEASER [face_devil]******


    With a scream he thudded to the ground before Mara where he lay still.

  16. GenOochy Force Ghost

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  17. GenOochy Force Ghost

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  18. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    [This is Ponta]

    I know, next time I'll post under my Icon, but my brother is going to appear in the door of this room any minute and demand I get off, so, I thought this would have to do.
    First of all, Jaid, you! AHHHHH! You've killed nearly everyone! AHHHH! I'll try to post more often.
    :eek:
  19. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    Jaid, about sending you the next post for RotJ...you might have to content yourself with the un-edited, original version till you get back cuz sanar isn't being written quickly, and if she starts writing herself (like she usually does :p) it might turn into a complete post so... :p

    ~TJF

    EDIT: oh man is Sanar writing herself! jeesh, the girl certainly knows what she wants written :eek: :p
  20. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Oh, that was an EVIL teaser!!

    *is about to panic, but then notices the heading*

    Posty soon? YES!!!
  21. Jaina_Fel_06 Jedi Master

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    EEEEEEEEEEP!!!!!!

    :eek: :eek:

    Jaid, you have a knack of picking out the cliffiest lines from your posts and making them into the cliffiest teasers!!! Objectively I suppose I can appreciate it, but as a reader... ARRRRRRGH!!!!! :p

    Postiesoonpostiesoonpostiesoon!!!!!!!
  22. jacesolo1138 Force Ghost

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    Jaid has gone out of town and she asked me to put up her next post for her. Enjoy!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    Chapter 3


    Mara stared deeply into dark blue eyes.....

    "Come.....," a soft voice whispered.

    "I can't." Her own voice was hushed.

    "Please......"

    The dark blue eyes began to fade into a gentle, paler blue............


    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

    Laedala seethed as she watched her minions scuttle about the palace.

    "For fools, they show remarkable intelligence," she muttered softly. "But they still don't understand the power I wield."

    Laedala stretched luxuriously.

    It had been four days since she had cleaned out the Senate.

    A sudden appearance of a Force sensitive near Coruscant startled her.

    The signature was vaguely familiar?

    Leia?s heart leapt. Luke? Could the Force have been wrong?

    Leia flung her senses out wildly.

    Her heart fell.

    Laedala closed over Leia.

    ?The woman who was with him at his death.? She hissed, her hands curving into claws.

    ?You there!? she snapped. A startled guard jumped to attention. ?Round up 50 or so men. I have something I need you to do?..?

    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~~-~-~~-~-~~-~

    Mara walked in the underbowels of Coruscant, wondering what the Force was doing.
    She knew it wanted her to do something?. She just wasn?t sure what.

    Her danger sense suddenly flared up and she dropped to the ground, reaching out with the Force.

    She stilled as she realized that over forty men were after her. She swore under her breath as she searched the area for a place to defend herself.

    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

    The small, dark haired boy lay on a small platform about 3 meters above, oblivious to what was going on below him.

    **We have to wake him up.** a soft sibilant voice whispered. **She is part of his destiny**

    **I say we let Djai decide** another voice said, **Last time we did what you wanted, the guy was killed.**

    **That was ?cause you distracted him!** another, more frustrated voice cried. The boy smiled in his sleep as the two voices began debating whose fault it was that the Jedi knight had been killed.

    **CUT IT OUT!!!** a voice ?yelled?. **We will wake up the bo-**

    **I?ll do it.** the second voice said with a grin, **Don?t worry, I?ll take care of everything!**

    ~-~-~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-~~-

    Kyp sat in the small cell.

    One mistake. Just one lousy mistake.

    The door slid open and a large guard stood there.

    Kyp cowered against the wall. ?Please, please don?t hurt me?? he whispered

    The man grinned sadistically and tossed him a thermal detonator.

    Kyp caught it instinctively.

    As soon as it thwhapped into his hand, a rapid beeping filled the cell.

    Terror filled his eyes and he tried to throw it back? The man was gone and the door, closed.

    The detonator fell to the floor and Kyp scuttled away from it.

    The ticking continued.

    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

    Mara swore as the blasts rained down on her.

    A shield! If I could just block their shots for just one minute?.

    A bolt grazed her neck, and she almost fell.

    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

    Zekk watched with wide eyes.

    The lady was?. wow?..

    One blaster lay at her feet and she held two in her hands.

    Forty-seven men had come to collect her.

    Twenty- one were left.

    Soft voices were whispering at the back of his head.

    As he watched a bolt of red energy creased the side of her neck.

    She stumbled back and leaned heavily against a pole; one of her blasters falling to the ground as she pressed her hand to the open wound.

    **Help her?** one of the voices cried

    **I?m only five!!** Zekk replied worriedly, **I don?t know how to do anything!!**

    **You know how to be compassionate..** another one of the voices said. **That is enough?**

    Zekk gritted his teeth
  23. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    cool post Jaid! :D and zekk's in now...hm...wonder who those voices are? or have you been reading DAD too many times and want to confuse everyone? :p

    **You know, for a Soulwalker, you sure can be timid.**

    [face_laugh] did greg put you up to that? [face_laugh] [face_mischief] at first i thought it was an author's note :p

    ~TJF
  24. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    Hmm, who are these people controlling Zekk?

    :eek: Poor Kyp! What's he going to do?

    and :_| ! Poor Leia! That was sad.
  25. Soulwalker Jedi Master

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    **You know, for a Soulwalker, you sure can be timid.**

    did greg put you up to that? at first i thought it was an author's note


    O_O;;

    So that's what she was hiding from me!!! :eek:

    She had that part edited out in the post that she sent me!
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