Beyond A Darkened Day (AU; J/TK, J/Z/C, K/L/J) Post - 3/18 - Rosie!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wails*

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  1. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    *looks around for Jaid.* hmmm, not here yet.
  2. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    **Teasers**

    A gigantic bright explosion of light, more brilliant then a white-blue giant going supernova, rent the area and brought her to her knees.

    ?WE ARE GOING TO BE KILLED!!?

    The tall pirate?s dark blue eyes flashed open as he leapt to his feet.

    **End of Teasers**

    *sees all of her readers brandishing large guns*

    O.O

    DON'T KILL ME!!!!!!!

    *hides in obscure thread*

    Edit: Just needed to clarify a few things... *waves hand dismissivly*


  3. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  4. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    I.r.'s are here!

    Enjoy!! It took me almost 1 and 1/2 hours!!

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    General: [face_devil]

    Ponta: I have NOT killed off everybody!!!

    EJM: Evil huh?.....

    06: Jaid, you have a knack of picking out the cliffiest lines from your posts and making them into the cliffiest teasers!!!

    *blushes*

    THANK YOU!!!!!!


    Supreme Goddess: I can?t tell you that and no Greg did not put me up to it? He didn?t have a clue until he read the post like everyone else.

    I edited it out before I sent it to him. [face_mischief]


    TSM: Controlling Zekk? *whistles*

    And to be honest I?m not sure how Kyp?ll get out of this??

    Greg: Yes, I did edit that out didn?t I???.

    06: Thanks!! And yes, Soulwalker is Zekk?s last name. I?m rather proud of my choice.

    EJM: Um?. MY Kyp is 15. Not sure how correct that is though??. And you KNOW I can?t tell you that??.


    Ponta: *looks at her funny* I wish you?d tell me what the answer is?. I?m not sure myself what?s going to happen to him. [face_blush]

    Kyp: *seals lips*

    YOU CAN'T HURT THEM BOTH!!!!!!! NOT IN THE SAME POSTS!!!!!!!!!!!!

    In the first place, it?s ?post?, no s. and second. Who says I can?t? [face_devil]

    Um? You?re a friend and a have a REALLY good fic so there for you get 500? :D? That?s probably the only reason??

    Tyler: You can?t huh? Come to think of it?.. that?s a GOOD thing!

    *zips lips at his question*

    Kyp: So?. You only want Zekk and Kyp to be alive?

    And I was gone for a week. :_|

    Supreme Goddess: Yes, one week? The WRONG post?? *goes in search of Kyp to tell her everything*

    Kyp: *reads Kyp?s mind and advises her to skip the stalking and has decided to ?tell all?*

    Greg: No I did not flip out. Well?. Not a lot any ways???.

    06: *laughs* Let the beta?s finish!!

    Master: Oooo?.. New story??.


    Supreme Goddess: Eep!! :eek: *hides*

    Kyp: *hands her hankie*

    Supreme Goddess: I agree! Don?t stalk Jaid??

    Ponta: [face_devil]

    Tyler: [face_love] My hero?????.

    Master: *cocks head* What did you say?!?

    Master: *sees the cake, ice cream, lemonade, and soda and begins celebration dance*

    YUMMY!!!!!! :D

    General: WHAT?! AGAIN?! *groans*

    *grabs lightsabers and heads out to find Dag*

    Ponta: Hmm? You?d probably like having his room wouldn?t you? :p I was waiting for you to say that after he got killed the last time.

    Miss Allergy Medication

    LOL [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Actually, Elora?s quite nice. I?m the reason she?s on the boards actually. I?ve gotten?. *counts on fingers* 4 people on the boards actually.

    Master: I?m here!!! *waves hand*

    06: *laughs*

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    YES!!!!

    I.R.?s are DONE!!!!


    And my posty will be up as soon as my beta?s finished!! :D

    Thanks for helping me win 25c everyone!!!!!!


    -+- Jaid

  5. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    *tackles Jaid in a hug* i missed you! it was too quiet :( KS has been so busy lately too...

    The WRONG post?? *goes in search of Kyp to tell her everything*

    [Supreme_Goddess'_chastising_voice] Jaid, don't you dare :mad: [/voice]

    :p

    anyway....would you mind telling me (via PM, of course) what you thought of the post i *did* send you? i haven't heard from JM in close to two months and i'd like an outside opinion...

    ~TJF

    EDIT: GenOochy's dead again? who killed him *this* time? ?[face_plain] :p
  6. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    General: WHAT?! AGAIN?! *groans*

    *grabs lightsabers and heads out to find Dag*


    Nope, it was Zam... Dag left the boards...

    Tyler: [face_love] My hero?????.



    LOL!!!

    Thanks.

    [face_mischief]


    Post is coming soon!!!

    Yea!
  7. Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Master

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    IMP'S BACK!!!!!!!!!!! WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    No one will hurt you as long as you don't hurt a certain 2 black-haired green-eyed young people... I will make sure no one will hurt you... as long as they live... [face_devil] :p
  8. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    TJF: *lands on floor* i missed you too!

    You may say good bye to peace and quiet!!!!

    For 3 weeks anyways.

    *cowers on floor*

    Um... I never got to finish it.... We left after the first 3 paragraphs.... PU's have terrible timeing.....

    And Zam killed him.

    Tyler: I know it was Zam. But I'm NOT going to try to kill Zam. No, I'm going after Dag.

    [mutter]He laughed,[/mutter]


    Kyp: I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

    Hurt Zekk???? :eek: I wouldn't DREAM of it.... Kyp on the other hand..............
  9. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    Um... I never got to finish it.... We left after the first 3 paragraphs

    ok; it that case -- don't read the rest :p ;)

    ~TJF
  10. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Okay fine.

    I've been debating this for almost 3 hours [yes I have been coharent(sp?) and awake for this period of time] and have now decided to post.

    *puffs chest out with pride*

    *remember's KS and then runns off to hide*

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    Chapter 4

    Mara?s throat felt tight and a prickly sort of burning sensation left her with the general feeling of helplessness. Even though her breathing was shallow, it felt as if flaming vibro-knives were being driven down her trachea and into her lungs.

    She drew another ragged breath.

    Suddenly, a high scream split the thick, smoky air as a small, dark haired form thudded to the ground before her.

    Mara blinked.

    A gigantic explosion of bright light, more brilliant than a white-blue giant going supernova, rent the area and brought her to her knees.

    The light pressed sharply against her eyes.

    She shielded her face.

    The unnatural brightness was painful.

    The pain in her throat was forgotten in the face of the new danger.

    The light began dimming ever so faintly.

    Mara blacked out.

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    Zekk groaned as he rolled over. The fall had only made him? ?lose focus?.

    It just made me lose my focus. Zekk pursed his lips. Yes, that was the way to put it.

    He rose up on his knees, then thumped back down to the ground.

    The beautiful, red-haired lady crouched down next to him; her back to him,

    **Umm?. Djai? What did you just do?**

    **I sent out an explosion of Force light!**
    Djai?s tone was a queer combination of hyper, delight, and strangely enough, smugness. **I think I made an impression on her too!**

    **No, no. That was a blaster bolt.**

    **Huh?**

    **Ne?re mind.**


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    Mara Jade?s eyes were tightly shut as the conversation took place in her head.

    Terrific. Now I?m hearing voices. Wouldn?t Skywalker just love this.

    She raised her head warily and cracked open one eye. Discovering that the bright light had disappeared completely, she fully opened both of her jade colored eyes.

    No one was shooting.

    She twisted and grabbed all three of her blasters, then expertly swapped out their power packs.

    Placing one in its thigh holster, she placed another in her arm holster and held the last one loosely in her right hand.

    ?Are you alright?? a small, soft voice asked from behind her.

    It will be soft and cuddly. Do I shoot first or do I find out who it is? Shoot.

    Mara hefted her blaster once then spun around to bring her blaster to bear on a? small humanoid child?

    She dropped the blaster as though it were made from molten metal.

    Mara felt as though she were drowning, suffocating, lost as she looked into his small face.

    The green eyes were so like her own and yet, so different.

    The face was so familiar, but ? she knew she?d never seen it before.

    ?Who are you?? Mara whispered.

    Zekk?s eyebrows hit the edge of his bangs. Figuratively speaking of course.

    ?Zekk Soulwalker?? He gave a nervous, cheesy grin. ?Are? You all right ma?am??

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    Tanyr Kas shuddered as the tentative bond was suddenly broken.

    He fell backwards on his bed.

    Force, why?d this have to be so difficult? Get through to the stubborn lady; show her the truth, and then your job's done! That?s it!


    Tanyr groaned and covered his face with his hands.

    Why can?t I convince myself??

    Someone pounded on his door.

    ?Kcas! Kcas!?

    Tanyr waved a hand as he manipulated the door pad using the Force.

    ?Come in.? he called loudly, and then sighed. What was it this time?

    ?Kcas!? a short Rodian came running in. ?Kcas! What?da we do? WHAT DO WE DO?!?

    He looked at Tanyr wildly.

    ?KCAS!!? he shook him. ?KCAS!!! WE ARE GOING TO BE KILLED!!?

    The tall pirate?s dark blue eyes flashed open as he leapt to his feet.

    ?Calm down will you?!?

    Tanyr grabbed his lightsaber and Force pinned his s
  11. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  12. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    YES!!!! You're BACK!!!! :D :D And there's a new posty!!!

    Aww, five year old Zekk is sooo cute!

    The green eyes were so like her own and yet, so different.

    The face was so familiar, but ? she knew she?d never seen it before.


    Hmmm, relation of Mara's perhaps? ;)


    Keep it up Jaid! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. [face_shocked] 8-}
  13. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Master: Yes, I liked that post also!


    EJM: EJM!!!!! :D I was wondering if I should wait for you to check in before I posted but..... I wanted to get rid of it.......

    I think I'll enjoy writing a five year old......


  14. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    WOW!!!


    Who are these voices????

    And who is Tanyr???

    Whats going to HAPPEN!!!!

    Sorry. *Sheepish grin* [face_mischief]

    Great post...

    But, these voices are making me nervous! :eek: [face_mischief]


    General ;)
  15. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Now why would they be making you nervous? its just a ***** ***** ***** ***** ******.
  16. TahiriVeilaSolo69 Force Ghost

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    I was just poking around and I just found this and let me tell you one thing: YOU GOT YOURSELF ANOTHER READER!!!!! This is such a goood story. Keeep up the good work!!! :D


    *SOLO*
  17. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Padawan you have another reader. Good job. :)
  18. Master_Ponta Jedi Master

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    I like your post, and *hugs* I'm so glad your back Jaid! :D
  19. Soulwalker Jedi Master

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    Nice update, Jaid. :)

    I'd laugh if Mara feels responsible for taking care of ickle Zekky. :p
  20. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Tyler: My Master will tell you who the voices are and I will answer the rest of your questions............ later. [face_devil]

    I'm making you jumpy 'eh? [face_devil]


    Master[: *laughs* I like your explination!!!


    The Voices = ***** ***** ***** ***** ******.




    TahiriVeilaSolo69: First off, may I call you Solo69? Pretty Please?

    I was just poking around and I just found this and let me tell you one thing: YOU GOT YOURSELF ANOTHER READER!!!!! This is such a goood story. Keeep up the good work!!!

    [face_blush] Thanks! Another reader to boost my ego!! *


    Master: Thank you! I think I'll have another one soon..... She told me to give her the link...... Think I'm doing well considering that I'll be a newbie for another month still?

    Ponta : *hugs her back* I'm glad I'm back too. And your just saying that because I didn't kill anyone. Admit it! Your disapointed! :p


    Greg: *realizes she is in very real danger of being laughed at*
  21. Siri_Ruane Jedi Master

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    Beautiful!

    Depressing, thrilling, and very mysterious. [face_devil]

    Keep up the good work... I'll be keeping an eye on this. ;)
  22. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Beautiful, Siri?

    *arches eyebrow*

    If you say so.......
  23. The_Standmaiden Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh] I liked the hyper voice, and the hysterical Rodian. :p

    Hmm, Zekk looks familiar to Mara?
  24. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    TSM: Djai is hyper because that's his character and I added in the Rodian as an after thought.... I had too many humans as it was.... Plus I alway's thought they looked rediculous.....

    *spooky music plays in the back ground*

    I am not going to tell you anymore.

    [face_mischief]
  25. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    That was great!!! Please pretty please though get rid of the cliffie and tell us what he saw!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! :p

    And I'll laugh too if Mara feels responsible for Zekk... :p
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