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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Raphire, Feb 14, 2010.

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  1. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    A Date to Remember

    This will be a three post

    Luke slowly turned over in bed. He had been on a mission for the past week and a half, so this chance to sleep in felt like

    heaven. He glanced at the clock. Quarter after six. He?d gotten home at four last night and barely made it to bed before he

    collapsed. He tried to collapse quietly so not to wake his sleeping wife. And luckily he?d succeeded. The snoring tigress

    had stayed dead to the world. But now he missed her at his side. She had probably been aroused by Ben hours ago. Luke

    sighed. After a week away, he longed to pull her into his embrace. And now he wouldn?t see her until tonight. He sluggishly

    climbed from bed and stretched. That mission had been a tough one. He felt sore all over. He slowly made his way to the

    bathroom and staggered towards the shower. As he passed the mirror he happened to glance at himself. What stared back at

    him was appalling. A haggard face gawked back in greeting. Huge bags hung under his eyes, accented by dark circles, and his

    hair was thick with grease. His beard was patchy and thin and he had dried blood covering half his face. And to make

    matters worse the blood wasn?t even his! ?Why did Mara marry me?? He wondered aloud. ?What did she ever see in me?? He

    hopped into the shower. I don?t deserve a woman like her. He thought to himself. He sighed and let the hot water

    soothe his skin. As it poured over him he let his mind wander. They had been married so long and somehow, even with Mara?s

    strong will, they?d managed not to have more then a couple fights. Their marriage had been perfect! Mostly he thought

    because of his attention to the little details. He knew all the little things that made his wife?s heart jump. And when he

    did these things his did too. He knew how much she loved it when he gave her a small peck on the back of her neck as he

    walked past. Also, he loved the way she gave a little shiver of pleasure when he made the bed while she was in the shower.

    Her attention to the significant dates in their life was also something he loved about her. She knew everything he?d ever

    done for her and that made him want to do more. By the time he left the shower a dumb grin had spread across his face.

    Man! He loved that woman! He would do anything for her. As he pulled on his bathrobe his stomach growled. The only problem

    was right now he wasn?t hungry for food. The hunger that grew inside him no mere morsel could fill. However he had to eat

    to keep up his strength so he trotted off to the kitchen. But as he walked past the table he saw something out of the

    corner of his eye, something pink. He looked closer. It was a small card. He slowly opened it and froze at what he saw. As

    he read the words time stopped.

    Happy Valentine?s Day! I hope you two can find time in your busy schedule to have some fun!
    Han and Leia


    Both hungers left him as one thought struck him. I?ve forgotten Valentine?s Day!

    Tbc
     
  2. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    I would like to dedicate this story to GlindaForJediCouncil

    Sorry I forgot and I hope this will make up for it.
     
  3. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Happy Valentine?s Day! I hope you two can find time in your busy schedule to have some fun!
    Han and Leia

    Both hungers left him as one thought struck him. I?ve forgotten Valentine?s Day!


    For shame, Luke, for shame!


    Nice story, Raphire. :)
     
  4. GlindaForJediCouncil

    GlindaForJediCouncil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Nov 21, 2009
    I forgive you, and your little clues-ending-with-a-story game was perfect :) =D=
    Happy Valentines day my dear, loves you ;)
     
  5. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Sep 5, 2004
    Luke needs a calender. :p

    Very cute.
     
  6. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    Dec 19, 2008
    Thanks Daena!

    GlindaForJediCouncil
    Awwwww. Love you too!

    FelsGoddess Yeah he kind of does
     
  7. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nov 12, 2009
    Uh-oh. He's in trouble now!
     
  8. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004
    Luke! how could you forget valentines day. Shame on you.

    I bet he remembers next time.[face_laugh]

    nice one.=D=
     
  9. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    HelloKelly Lol. Yes he is!

    Gkilkenny Thank you! I bet he does indeed.
     
  10. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    Here's Post Two! I hope you enjoy!

    Panic seized him. What could he do? His wife was due home in three hours! He rushed over to the comlink and called any and

    all councilors he had ever done favors for. With luck they would pull some strings and get him something that would really

    impress his wife! But after each phone call he became more and more dejected. All tickets to any vacation planets had

    already been bought. The cruises were booked, the lodges filled and he was out of ideas. It was Valentine?s evening and

    everything that could be bought had been purchased. Luke sighed and leaned against the counter. Nothing said self absorbed

    and insensitive better then a husband who forgot Valentine?s Day. As he bashed himself and wallowed in self pity; he failed

    to notice the doorknob turning behind him. ?Stupid, Stupid, Stupid!? He growled to himself. ?Out of all the holiday?s to

    forget this one just had to be the one!? He continued to berate himself and completely ignored the figure creeping up

    behind him. Two arms encircled him and he let out a scream that would put a teenage male to shame. ?Missed me that much

    farm boy?? Mara said with a chuckle. Luke squiggled out of the embrace and faced his wife. His face was white as a

    sheet. ?Scared you did I?? Mara said with a chuckle. She gently gave him a peck on the cheek. ?I?m going to go change; ok

    dear?? Mara might as well have been talking to a statue. As soon as Mara left the room Luke sat down, hard. He placed his

    head in his hands and let out a small groan. He was doomed.


    Mara stood up in the bedroom and stared into the mirror. She couldn?t wait to see Luke?s face when she came down the

    stairs. She had spent all morning looking for this dress and just as she was about to give up she found it. In one of the

    most obvious places ever too! Mara couldn?t believe she hadn?t thought of it before. And now, as she tried it on, she knew

    she?d made the right choice.


    Luke paced back and forth in the kitchen, trying to think of something, anything to do for his wife. But he was getting

    nowhere. He fought to keep his emotions under wraps but he couldn?t help feeling a little frustrated. He just hoped that

    Mara couldn?t feel his turmoil through the force. He was pretty sure he had shielded as soon as he saw the note but he did

    so again just in case. He heard footsteps on the stairs and turned around a weary smile on his face. As he turned around

    and set his eyes on his wife however, all attempts to shield his emotions left him.


    His wife stared down at him from halfway up the stairs with a bemused look on her face. ?Honey, if your jaw dropped any

    lower I could use it to sweep the kitchen.? She said with a giggle that she never would use in public. Luke couldn?t help

    but staring; besides when a guys wife looked this good, it was only natural to ogle at her. ?So darling, are we leaving or

    what?? She tossed her hair over her shoulder and grinned saucily at him. Luke slowly nodded and then went to get the door

    for her. ?Ummm, dear?? Luke looked up as he held open the door. ?Yes?? Mara looked him over and chuckled. ?Aren?t you

    forgetting something?? Luke looked down and blushed. He was still in his bathrobe.

    Tbc

     
  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Fun fun couple of posts. Whee! the next one will be mushy [face_dancing] [face_dancing]

    ;)

     
  12. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice! [face_mischief]

    ?Honey, if your jaw dropped any lower I could use it to sweep the kitchen.?
    [face_laugh] It's good to still have that affect on your husband!

    Love it, please give me a head's up when Part 3 arrives. :)
     
  13. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yum! Mush! A teenage girl should always get between three and four servings of mush a day! [face_laugh]

    Very good! I can't wait for the next post! Please add me to the Pm list
     
  14. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Hey, mush isn't only for teenagers...

    Poor Luke, though. Somehow, I think he'll come up with something even without trying to.
     
  15. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    Jade_Eyes Lol. Of course it will!

    Sith_Mayo Thanks! And of course I'll let you know.

    HelloKelly Lol. Did you get all your servings?

    dm1Maaaybe.
     
  16. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    Luke had tried to come up with something all while he had dressed and now as they hopped into their vehicle he was still at

    a loss. For awhile he just drove around; claiming that he was giving them a chance to enjoy each other?s presence before

    going into a crowded restaurant. ?So we?re going to a restaurant?? Luke would have slapped his forehead if he could.

    Stupid! Why don?t I just go right out and tell her that they would be going out to eat?
    He had unwittingly narrowed his

    already slim options. ?Which restaurant?? Mara asked breathlessly. Luke didn?t answer. Suddenly she gasped. ?You got us

    reservations to The Interceptor!???? Luke smiled and shook his head. She?d been dropping hints since it had opened

    that she wanted him to take her sometime. Mara stared at him with a confused look. ?Honey? Come on tell me! Where are we

    going?? The car suddenly felt stuffy and dank. He needed air! ?Just wait dear; we?re at the first stop.? He pulled off to

    the side of the road. He?d lucked out. He had somehow managed to end up at the park. A perfect first stop for their ?date?

    They got out of the car and looked around. The park was lit up with various lights and it looked positively breathtaking.

    The fountains were all on and the light glistened through their flowing waters. Luke gently took Mara?s hand and they

    walked around the park. As they drunk in the beauty that surrounded them Luke felt restless. He had no idea what they were

    going to do next and in all honesty he felt drained already. Finally they came to a park bench and they sat down. In front

    of them was a gorgeous fountain. It was shaped like a mountain and at its peak was a small village. And in the village

    center was a tiny fountain. The water poured out of the fountain and streamed down the hill until it came to the cliffs.

    Small streams joined it until it pooled over the edge and poured down the side of the cliff in a waterfall.

    Mara sighed and leaned up against Luke?s shoulder. ?Oh Luke, this is perfect. You are the most caring and creative person

    I?ve ever met.? Luke?s stomach started to feel queasy. ?I?m serious, this park is so beautiful! How did you come up with

    such a good idea?? Luke felt positively nauseous. ?You?re amazing and I want to let you know I think you?re the best

    husband ever.? She gently stroked his face and then leaned in to kiss him.

    ?Wait, Mara.? Mara paused and looked at him a puzzled expression on her face. ?I didn?t plan all this.? Luke let out a sigh

    and then continued. ?In all honesty I have nothing planned for tonight; in fact I completely forgot about Valentine?s Day

    until about an hour ago.? Mara looked at him and grinned. ?Yup, you?re definitely my farmboy.? Luke stared at her

    blankly ?Come on Luke! Do you honestly think I didn?t know that you?d forgotten? I sensed your panic the moment I walked in

    from shopping.? She chuckled and stretched out on the bench, her head resting on Luke?s lap. ?And for the record I find it

    adorable that you would go through all of this for me.? Luke looked chagrined and then grinned. ?So I?m off the hook then??

    Mara looked up at him and laughed evilly. ?Not at all, I think you still owe me dinner.? Luke tucked a hair behind one of

    her ears. ?How does cereal and toast sound?? Mara leaned up and kissed him. ?Perfect.?

    The End

     
  17. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    ?So I?m off the hook then??
    Mara looked up at him and laughed evilly. ?Not at all, I think you still owe me dinner.?


    Haha! :D Luke should know he wouldn't be let off lightly.

    Lovely story. =D=
     
  18. GlindaForJediCouncil

    GlindaForJediCouncil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aaawww, an adorable ending <3

    Good job, I really liked the story, and for you not usually writing this kind of thing, you did very well =D=

    *hugs*
    [:D]
     
  19. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Squee! Yum! Thank you for that sweet ending! [face_dancing]

    [:D]

     
  20. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    SITH_MAYO Thanks. And he really should.

    GalindaForJediCouncil Awww. Thanks. But yeah it was kind of weird for me to write mush.

    Jade_Eyes Your very welcome and thanks for reading!
     
  21. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Num. Good mush. I loved the ending! Is this really the end tho? You could do more if you wanted to!

    Sigh. No I am ashamed to say I did not get all of my servings that day.
     
  22. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    HelloKelly Thanks! But no the story is finished.

    Tssk. You are a horrible person now.
     
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