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Beyond - Legends A Daydream of 10,000 Words [UDC3 Response] Updated 9/18/08

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Myriad_Daydreams, Sep 4, 2008.

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  1. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Great set, Myriad. I liked how you concentrated on Mara's affliction at the beginning of the NJO.

    ?You know, Mrs. Skywalker, this is quite peculiar.? Tell me something I don?t already know.

    ?I can?t even begin to think of a cure for this.? That helps me so much.


    Alderaan was darkly humorous, but also sad.

    Eyeing his next move, Mara began to twist and parry, when a searing pain bolted up her spine like liquid fire. She let out a loud cry, falling quickly to the soft earth.

    Luke?s cry went unheard as she faded into unconsciousness.


    Yavin IV was intense and tragically emotional at the end.

    Again, very well done.
     
  2. amidalachick

    amidalachick Force Ghost star 5

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    Mara turned away to stare blankly into space, and Luke had the feeling more had transpired between them than just baby names.

    Mara wanted children.


    Awwww. :(

    Very touching set. =D=
     
  3. Myriad_Daydreams

    Myriad_Daydreams Jedi Master star 4

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    Jade_eyes: Why thank you :)

    dancing_star: Thanks, bittersweet was what I was going for with these ;)

    Mira_Jade: Angst + mush = :D Thanks for your kind words, Mira [:D]

    jaded_jewel: Thanks, I liked 'Yavin' too :)

    path-seeker: Hey, long time no see! Thanks for reading

    ginchy: Tragic, isn't it? Thank you :)

    divapilot: Thanks for your kind words diva, they are much appreciated [:D]@};-

    brodiew: Thanks for reading :)

    amidalachick: Thank you





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  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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