Saga A Different Path (Darth Vader-AU)- Updated with Epilogue- 2/8

Wow!!!!!!

That was action packed and I love how you wove the future into Vader's decision making.

I can't wait 'til the epilogue. I, too, would love to see a sequel to this.

 

What an incredible ending to a truly solid story. It thoroughly enjoyed this, and I enjoy how open you left it to possible future story lines. Well done!

 

Great conclusion. I too like the ending.

 

Liked the ending sad that Leia was killed though.

 

Healer Leona: This is an amazing scene. love

Vader, Anakin finally redeemed himself in the end.

He thought about the many decisions he now faced. He gazed at the horizon and contemplated the possibilities.


Fantastic line.

While part of me wants a sequel, I just totally love this ending!! grin grin

I look forward to the epilogue.


Thanks, Leona! I'll get crackin' on the epilogue.

Amidala66: Wow!!!!!!

That was action packed and I love how you wove the future into Vader's decision making.

I can't wait 'til the epilogue. I, too, would love to see a sequel to this.

Thank you very much! As for a sequel? Well...I have another epic to finish before considering this, though I just might do it! You've inspired me!

Darth_Marrs: What an incredible ending to a truly solid story. It thoroughly enjoyed this, and I enjoy how open you left it to possible future story lines. Well done!

Thank you very much!

RebelMom: Great conclusion. I too like the ending.

Thanks, RebelMom!

Jeditheskyisblue: Liked the ending sad that Leia was killed though.

If you reread the first couple paragraphs you'll note that everyone aboard the Star Destroyer perished. The story never actually indicates that Leia died in the self destruction of the Tantive IV. The reader only knows for certain that R2-D2, C-3PO and Vader survived.

 

Truly excellent, SkalenFehl! That last chapter was so intense, you had me holding my breath. And I loved how you ended it, leaving the reader to decide for himself what Vader would do. However, I would love to see a sequel to this. Hint, hint.

Bravo!!!

 

OMG that was awesome, but that can't be it. I need more, what does he do, I need to know please, please, please write more.

 

I like it! Vader finally being portrayed as powerful in the armor rather than a cripple. VERY VERY interested in a sequel!!!

 

Whoa! That was an awesome ending Skalen!
The portrayal of Vader was outstanding, with such terrific use of words and his match up with Palpatine certainly was electrifying!!!
At last, Vader stands up to the man who claims to be his master weilding Obi-Wan's blade instead of his own Sith blade.
Only now, I hope Vader does not convert Luke at his side now that we see him in his master place ruling the galaxy as father and son.
Iv'e really enjoyed reading this update as well as the whole story, I can't wait to see the epilogue. It would be great to see a sequel also!

Incredibly well done!!

 

Great conclussion... What now for the Death Star? Will Vader resestablish the Senate? Sequeal or an Epilogue would be nice

 

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!

That was a very satisfying conclusion. Can't wait for the Epilogue myself.

 

Whoa! Perfect!

Now young Skywalker...you will die.

The outpouring of the blue lightning increased as snapping electric sounds echoed throughout the room. Luke continued to cry out in anguish while Palpatine reveled in the pain he inflicted.

The vision ended as suddenly as it began leaving Vader shuddering in a cold sweat. He braced himself against his bed as he blinked repeatedly. ?No,? Vader said softly, trying to control his emotions. He had failed to save his mother. He had failed to save Padme. Now it was happening again. He looked around to see the small droids were no longer working. They had finished their maintenance and repairs on the various components of his suit. He turned to look out the window once more. He knew that he would soon be arriving on Coruscant to report to the Emperor.

He grabbed a sterile towelette from a small stack on his bed and began cleaning himself. He stared blankly ahead as he ceremoniously wiped his body, what was still whole, clean. When he finished he sat down on his bed and as if on cue, the small droids began dressing him. When his utitlity belt had been replaced he stared at Obi-Wan's lightsaber.

I loved you like a brother!

Amazing!

 

Gina: Truly excellent, SkalenFehl! That last chapter was so intense, you had me holding my breath. And I loved how you ended it, leaving the reader to decide for himself what Vader would do. However, I would love to see a sequel to this. Hint, hint.

Thank you Gina, and for your encouragement and inspiration!

CodyMonKenobi: OMG that was awesome, but that can't be it. I need more, what does he do, I need to know please, please, please write more.

Well, there will be an epilogue containing a nice little twist. As for a sequel? It's very possible, though I have another story that really needs to be finished.

SHADOW_MASTER_W: I like it! Vader finally being portrayed as powerful in the armor rather than a cripple. VERY VERY interested in a sequel!!!

Thank you very much!

EmpressJade: Whoa! shock That was an awesome ending Skalen! applause
The portrayal of Vader was outstanding, with such terrific use of words and his match up with Palpatine certainly was electrifying!!!
At last, Vader stands up to the man who claims to be his master weilding Obi-Wan's blade instead of his own Sith blade. grin
Only now, I hope Vader does not convert Luke at his side now that we see him in his master place ruling the galaxy as father and son. worried
Iv'e really enjoyed reading this update as well as the whole story, I can't wait to see the epilogue. wink It would be great to see a sequel also!

Incredibly well done!!

Thank you for you compliments and kind words. I'm hoping to have the epilogue posted sometime this weekend.

Ocelotl_Nesto: Great conclussion... What now for the Death Star? Will Vader resestablish the Senate? Sequeal or an Epilogue would be nice

Thank you. Stay tuned for the epilogue.

BigE: Fantastic, absolutely fantastic! applause

That was a very satisfying conclusion. Can't wait for the Epilogue myself.

Thanks for the applause!

VaderLVR64: Whoa! shock Perfect!

Thank you for reading and replying.

Everyone's comments have been generous and it is very gratifying to know that I have managed to capture your attention and keep you riveted. I hope to be able to continue doing so in the future. Stay tuned for the epilogue!

 

I have to insert a shameless plug to the epic that I started writing two years ago. If you've enjoyed reading "A Different Path", please give my other story, "Of Loss and Love" a chance and let me know what you think. I look forward to finishing it now that this story is done...for now.

Of Loss and Love

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And now without further ado, I present to you the anticipated tangential inclusion to this story.


Epilogue

Biggs Darklighter stood on the ridge of a mesa just outside the Tosche Station at Anchorhead. He hadn't eaten breakfast yet and was especially craving Garqi caf. He licked his lips as he scanned the morning desert horizon through his electrobinoculars at the vast wreckage. I guess Luke was right. The endless dunes were sprinkled with chunks of wreckage and debris of all shapes and sizes, some still burning after two days, leaving clouds of black smoke lingering high in the air. Luke had insisted that a battle was going on in orbit. Whatever happened up there didn't seem to leave any survivors. He had planned to leave Tatooine the day before but decided to remain hidden until he felt sure he was out of any Imperial danger. The Empire did not deal kindly with defectors. Still, his curiosity had gotten the best of him and he knew that he couldn't remain hidden forever. A rebellion was rising and he wanted to be a part of it.

He continued scanning the desert, catching a glimpse of Jawas and other desert dwellers, no doubt scavenging for anything usable. Then something tiny, an almost imperceptible speck, gleamed on the distant horizon. He magnified his electrobinoculars five hundred times for a closer look. His eyes widened as a small pod came into view. Still too distant to discern clearly it seemed intact. He adjusted the focus and immediately saw a body just outside the pod, face down. His heart pounded as chills ran down his neck, adrenaline racing through his veins. He wasn't naïve enough to rule out an Imperial trap but considered the obvious possibility--a survivor. He noted the surrounding natural landmarks to triangulate the pod's position and walked back to his speeder, shaking his head. He knew he was risking his life to make sure, but he couldn't ignore someone in distress. He wished Luke was with him now. I'm sorry I doubted you, Luke.

As he sped along a rocky bank he wondered if the person was alive and if he was Imperial. He opened a small compartment and pulled out his sidearm, compliments of the Imperial Academy. He glanced ahead for any potential ambushes. At this point, the desert people posed as much of a threat as any Imperial presence. He kept a sharp eye out for any trouble. He pulled around a nearby rocky bluff to survey and secure the area. He climbed atop the bluff and scanned the area with his electrobinoculars. There was no sign of life other than the person laying prostrate in the sand. He climbed back down to his speeder and headed towards the crashed pod, no doubt an emergency personal escape craft from the battle that Luke had described. He approached the site and quickly scanned the area to make sure the area was clear. He shut down the speeder and with his blaster in hand he quickly jogged to the body and bent over, wide-eyed. He turned the person over to find a young woman unconscious and filthy from smoke, ash, and dirt. He checked her vitals. Her breaths were short and she had a weak pulse but she was alive.

He ran back to his speeder and grabbed a canteen of water and brought it to her. She groaned weakly as he tried to rouse her.

?Young lady,? she nudged gently but urgently. ?Wake up!?

She opened her eyes and tried to focus. She gasped faintly as she looked up at Biggs and stiffened with surprise. She was barely coherent but knew an Imperial issue blaster when she saw one.

He holstered his weapon. ?It's alright, your safe.? He held out his canteen in a friendly gesture.

She was too weak to respond intelligently so he held her head up gently as he

 

HMMM-- now I want a swquel-- I still want to know what happens next-- sould like a demanding little kid-- sorry. Thanks for the PM

 

Awesome story dude,

and quite a twist, I gotta admit I wasn't expecting that.

Nice one

EG

 

Must have sequel...........


MUST HAVE SEQUEL...........


PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Ha! Biggs and Leia? What a neat twist to a great story.

 

Dude, you just keep bringing up so many more questions. You have to do a sequel I am begging you.

 

Great ending.

If you do a sequel, please pm me with updates

Thanks

 

Yeah! Leia is alive. I'll chime in with the others for a sequel, but I understand if you don't. It was a wonderful little story.

 

I loved the twist that Leia was alive although I expected something was up while I was reading your replies.

I will definately go check out your other story. You are a gifted writer.

I do hope that you will consider a sequel to this.

Bravo

 

This is the most interesting turning of events. Biggs helping Leia...very creative and yes, it DEMANDS A SEQUEL!!! DO NOT STOP HERE, PLEASE (YES I AM SCREAMING)

I will be waiting.....

Excellent work!