Amazing work so far. I would never have thought it possible to convey so much through Soontir's third-person-limited perspective, and yet you not only manage to showcase Jaina and Jag's relationship in all its tenderness and heartbreak, but Soontir's little mental asides at Han/Wedge/etc.'s expense are literally to die for. Profic is so caught up in action sequences that we tend to forget that these characters are incredibly admirable people, each and every one of them, so I'm glad you took your time developing them. In fact, long blocks of narration usually throw me off - I swear I have an attention span of about five seconds and I need dialogue to break the text into digestible chunks - but here, I didn't mind at all. It's already been mentioned upthread but thank you for explaining that whole post-Unifying-Force-I'm-not-ready-to-go-to-Csilla-with-you klusterkriffer in a plausible and satisfactory manner. Seriously. Jaina and Jag made a mistake, the same one lots of young couples make; and the fact that the two of them define themselves so much in terms of duty and family was certainly a contributing factor. But you showed us how they ultimately recognized and resolved that mistake, and forged a stronger bond in virtue of it. Great, great job. Yay for Corran and Kyp sticking up for Jaina in front of the Council. But Luke? And omg the wedding dress? I *sniffled* for Mara. Good luck with your move, and I'd love to get on the PM list for future updates.