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Saga A Father's Heart - the diary of Bail Organa - updated 9/28

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Jan 2, 2009.

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  1. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Title: A Father?s Heart
    Author: VaderLVR64
    Characters: Bail, Breha, Leia



    Entry #1


    Today, I became a father. Usually, it?s the woman who knows first, or suspects. But in our case, I asked Breha if she would like to have a daughter with me. She didn?t ask any questions, she just said yes. ?Bring our daughter home.?

    And I did.

    Leia.

    Leia Organa.

    She?s perfect. She?s beautiful.

    She?s loud.

    We love her.

    Tonight was the first night that Leia slept in her new home. I could not sleep for many reasons. Mostly joy, but sadness too. Grief for Padmé, for the galaxy. But not for Anakin.

    So I went to peek in on Leia and Breha followed me. She could not sleep either.

    We just watched her sleep. Our daughter. Our home.

    So there is sadness yes, but that is not all we feel. We feel like a family.
     
  2. RX_Sith

    RX_Sith Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Excellent start. Please add me to the PM list.
     
  3. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awww, this is so sweet!! I love it :) Please add me to the PM list!
     
  4. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Great start and PM list please:)
     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Lovely start. :D

    If you're keeping a list, could I have PMs?

    Hugs!
     
  6. LASOS

    LASOS Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I love this! If you're keeping a PM list, could I be on it, please?

    Happy New Year!
     
  7. CPL_Macja

    CPL_Macja Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Being a father of a little girl myself I identify and love your idea. Please add me to your PM list.
     
  8. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awwww...that was just beautiful

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    She?s perfect. She?s beautiful.

    She?s loud


    A Skywalker loud? :eek: :eek:

    :p

    Wonderful start - I look forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  9. dancing_star

    dancing_star Jedi Master star 4

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    Leia Organa.

    She?s perfect. She?s beautiful.

    She?s loud.

    [face_laugh]

    We love her.

    Awwwwwww. [face_love] Such a lovely start! @};- Please add me to the pm list! [face_batting] [:D]
    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  10. mavjade

    mavjade Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Beautiful first entry! @};-=D=
    Very sweet!

    Usually, it?s the woman who knows first, or suspects.
    [face_laugh] Loved this! Usually being the optimum word! :p

    I look forward to more!
    If you have a PM list would you add me to it please! :)

     
  11. Seremela

    Seremela Jedi Youngling star 3

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    This is so sweet - with that touch of humor of yours I love. Says a lot in those few sentences =D=

    Can I be put on the pm list as well if you do one?


     
  12. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    I love Bail's thoughts in the first days with Leia. :p =D= That was wonderful. =D=
     
  13. Force_Chick

    Force_Chick Jedi Youngling star 1

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    :D Sweet! I love Beru's diary and this one looks to be just as good. Please add me to the PM list, as well.
     
  14. Corellian_Ale

    Corellian_Ale Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very touching. [face_love]

    Please add me if your PMing updates!
     
  15. MeleanaKenobi

    MeleanaKenobi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Awww this is sweet. Great job getting the happy moment with the sadness mixed in.
     
  16. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    RX_Sith Thanks for reading!

    NYCitygurl Will do. :D

    earlybird-obi-wan Glad you liked it.

    Jade_eyes Of course, and thank you. :)

    LASOS Be happy to, and thanks!

    CPL_Macja Glad you liked it! :D

    KELIA I know! How surprising! :eek:

    dancing_star Of course, and thank you!

    mavjade Thank you! :D

    Seremela I'd be honored.

    Sara_Kenobi Thank you!

    Force_Chick Will do! :D

    Corellian_Ale You've got it! :p

    MeleanaKenobi Thank you!






    [b]Entry #2[/b]

    I thought that the difficult part of becoming a family would be getting used to taking care of a baby. I was wrong.

    The difficult part of becoming a family is?well, [i]family[/i]! By the expression on my aunts? faces, you would have thought Breha and I had told them we were adopting a baby Hutt. That lasted until the nurse brought in Leia and handed her to Breha.

    My wife, bless her wisdom, immediately put Leia into my oldest aunt?s arms.

    That was all it took. And baby Hutt or not, Leia was one of the family. I hope to the gods that all of Alderaan will love her as much as we do.

    Breha and I decided that no one must know of Leia?s true parentage, no one except us, no matter how trusted. So we?ve come up with a story that is acceptable and believable. Hopefully, in time, no one will remember how Leia arrived, simply that she?s ours and we love her.

    Observation: babies do not, in fact, sleep like babies. They sleep like restless, itchy idimiian puppies, which means with a lot of noise and movement. This is going to take some getting used to.






     
  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Lovely becoming a family and babies they are just that.;)
     
  18. dancing_star

    dancing_star Jedi Master star 4

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    Beautiful![face_love] That last part's so true too. :p Lovely update! [:D]@};-
    =D= =D==D==D=
     
  19. RX_Sith

    RX_Sith Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Awwwww! Cute introduction of Leia to the family. And yes, babies definitely do not sleep like... well... babies.
     
  20. LASOS

    LASOS Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I love this update! How sweet! Bail is one of my favorite characters from the PT, and I think that you are writing his transition to fatherhood beautifully in character.
     
  21. Corellian_Ale

    Corellian_Ale Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    They sleep like restless, itchy idimiian puppies, which means with a lot of noise and movement.

    How very true!

    =D=
     
  22. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Observation: babies do not, in fact, sleep like babies

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    So sweet!! I love that his aunts took a liking to Leia so easily :) I wonder what the story they put out is.
     
  23. mavjade

    mavjade Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wonderful entry! =D=

    The difficult part of becoming a family is?well, family!
    Isn't that the truth!! 8-} :p

    Observation: babies do not, in fact, sleep like babies. They sleep like restless, itchy idimiian puppies, which means with a lot of noise and movement.
    [face_laugh] Love it!

    I'm excited to read more! :)
     
  24. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Great strategy there with the aunts LOL

    Yuppers, where did that expression come from?? [face_laugh] o_O I've always said I sleep like a rock ;) which makes sense because rocks are hard--but sleeping like a baby--this means you wake up often hungry or having to go potty [face_laugh] :p
     
  25. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    My wife, bless her wisdom, immediately put Leia into my oldest aunt?s arms.

    That was all it took.


    That's usually all it ever takes. After all, who can resist falling in love with a newborn?

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    babies do not, in fact, sleep like babies

    Indeed not, which makes me wonder how the phrase "sleeping like a baby" means sleeping soundly....:confused::confused:

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
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