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Saga A Fighter's Stance V/L one-post

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by jedifighter, Mar 26, 2003.

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  1. jedifighter

    jedifighter Jedi Youngling star 3

    Mar 19, 2002
    Okay, I'm seriously hoping people will read this.

    Summary: Luke is 13 yrs. old and gets into a fight. Of course, Vader is watching it.

    Disclaimer: I don't own anything!


    Luke Skywalker wiped the sweat off his forehead. Biggs turns around and yells, "Come on! Fixer is going to think you're chicken!" "Coming!" Luke yells back.

    I got to see that jerk again? This is the worst points in my life.

    Luke raced off into the desert.


    Vader looks around, and frowns in disgust. Tattotine. I remember why I was happy to leave. This hasn't changed since I was a boy.

    In fact, he remembered wanting to destroy it.

    The Emperor sent him here to look for any Jedi. Vader thought it was patheic, because this was a planet from hell.

    He sighed. No use agruing, he had to do it. Vader walked off.


    "Well, looks like Orphan here did show up." Fixer snickered. Luke frowned and coldly, "Are we going to race or not? Cause I didn't sneak out here for......"

    Fixer lauhged, "Oh look. Orphan went against his parnets...oh wait, YOU don't have any!" All his friends laughed.

    Luke's face turned red. "Shut up!" "Make me!" Fixer snapped.


    Vader stopped. His senses told him that something was wrong. He hurried up to a rock.....


    "Just because I have no parnets, that doesn't mean that you can make fun of me!" Luke said angerliy, with tears swelling up.

    "Ohhhhhh, looky how brave a baby is." One of Fixer's friends said. "Ouit that! Luke meant no harm!" Biggs said.

    "Yeah right. Like I'm going to listen to you, BigFoot." Fixer sneered, even though he knew Biggs was stronger than he was.

    "At least I never keep being beaten in a race by a 13 yr. old!" Luke snapped.

    He instantly regreted it.

    The entire group hushed, and Fixer stood there beet red.

    "Say that again, Skywalker."


    Vader was shocked. Not because the boys were fighting, but that name.....


    Vader never would have guessed that a boy was HIS child.

    Kenobi! I'm going to kill you!

    But first, he was going to watch this.....


    "I said, I least I wasn't never...." Luke never finshed because Fixer thew sand at his eyes.

    Half blind, he lunged at him. They began to wrestle. Luke kicked him, and then felt a sharp pain in his right leg.

    Fixer bit him, sinking his teeth into his leg. Luke punched him in the nose, only to provoked him.

    Fixer punched him in the eye, making him see stars.

    Luke socked him in the stomache. Before he thew another punch, and hand stopped him.


    Vader knew this had was going to end. He wasn't going to let his son get beaten up, but he put up a good fight.

    "That's enough. I advise you to stop." He theaten. The oldest boy had a scared look on his face. His friends huddled behind him, whimpering.

    "You all, get." He told them, and they scuttled off like rats.

    "Come here, boy." Vader told Luke. Luke, slightly trembling, walked over to him.

    "What is your name?" Vader demanded. "Luke, Luke Skywalker." Luke said, as bravely as his could.

    "Luke, you put up a good fight. Though you shouldn't fight. Yet, only intil you're old enough. You'll fight with me.

    "Yes sir." "Good, now go. I have busniess to do. Like kill Kenobi for what he's done.

    "Yes sir. I won't." Luke hurried off to his house.

    Vader watched him go.

    I'll be seeing you, my son. I'll come back.


    Please give me replies!
  2. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

    Feb 11, 2003
    This is amazing!
    You should go on to

    Its were we post ffics like this

  3. Ghitsa

    Ghitsa Jedi Youngling

    Jun 22, 2000
    Just a one poster????

    This could evolve into a great story.

    Great Post
  4. Sophita

    Sophita Jedi Master star 4

    May 24, 2002
    Oh come on, continue! Continue! :)
  5. SJade

    SJade Jedi Padawan star 4

    Sep 15, 2000
    I agree about the idea :) It's 'got' to keep going :)

  6. jedifighter

    jedifighter Jedi Youngling star 3

    Mar 19, 2002
    Darla- Thank you! Perhaps I'll go there. Thank you very much!

    To Sophita, Ghistsa, and SJade- Thank you all. I practially honored. I think you conviced me. Just let me find time, and perhaps I'll contiune. *bows*

    [face_blush] Thank you all!
  7. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

    Feb 11, 2003
    Oh do!
    And on the L/V group, both me and SJade poist there and its really good.
  8. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Master star 5

    Feb 21, 2003
    I LIKE!!!!!


    A 1 poster?????


    MAKE FULL LENGTH FIC!!!!!!!!!!!


    Kenobi shall die.........



    Sorry. [face_blush]
  9. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Master star 5

    Jan 8, 2003

    An AU...

    Obi dies...

    Luke becomes a sith...

    They destory the Emperor and rule the galaxy as father and son...

    I personaly think Vader and Luke would be great as an evil father and son...


    Kenobi must die...

    Sorry all you Obi lovers out there, but he must.



    I'll read every post!!!
  10. Jez_3-14159265358979

    Jez_3-14159265358979 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Aug 13, 2001
    that was awsome! can we have some more please?

  11. Trickster_Jaina_Fel

    Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Master star 5

    Oct 3, 2002
    ooh...i loved it :D i agree that this should be a full-length fic ;)

  12. jedifighter

    jedifighter Jedi Youngling star 3

    Mar 19, 2002
    Jez- Perhaps, maybe. I'm not making any promises though.

    Darla- I checked it out. It looks nice!

    Trickster- Thank you! As I said, I'm not making any promises.

    Gen- Yes, Kenobi MUST die! We're on the same page here.

    Thank you all!!!!!!
  13. jedifighter

    jedifighter Jedi Youngling star 3

    Mar 19, 2002
    LISTEN UP!!!!!!

    I was unable to contiune this one, BUT I made another one after this one! Read it!!!!!

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