Saga A Galaxy of Chaos

Sweet Story dude.
Love how Jorus got on the glamore.
Can't wait until tommorow.

 

I just read of little from your few posts above. I hope I'll catch up on the rest tonight. But so far.. great start I hope the rest is just as good as the first couple of paragraphs.

 

Thanks everyone, again.

Here's another part. I am SOOOOO sorry it has been such a long time.

Chapter 10

Ajin stood by the city gate as he and the So-Kovian soldiers waited for that door to blast open. Ajin didn?t feel right fighting along side a threatening species, the So-Kovians, who had invaded Endor. But now that they faced destruction by this unknown species, the Caviets, he needed to help them.
Ajin used the Force to help keep the city gate intact. But the superior forces of the Caviets were going to bring it down soon. Finally, a sonic explosion blasted the door open and the So-Kovians around the keep were thrown back by the propulsion of the blast. Ajin was also thrown back as he hit the ground hard.
He got up a little shaken as the Caviet soldiers flooded through the door. Ajin was quick to get up as he met the first Caviet soldiers. He stabbed the Caviet right through the heart region as it gurgled and fell down. Ajin lifted his hand and threw back a ton of Caviets with the Force. The gate was wide enough for Caviet armor to fit through. A Caviet tank aimed at the gate and fired. The explosion made the gate hole a lot bigger. Ajin was thrown backwards again but he landed on his left arm wrong and he broke it.
? Aghhh!? he cried as he landed on the arm in pain. But Ajin didn?t have time to treat his injury. He felt dizzy as he made himself get up again. Caviets rushed through the gate as they fired their heated sonic blasts at the So-Kovians. So-Kovian soldiers who were hit with the blast were vaporized at the complete instant. Ajin did his best to dodge the sonic shots but their were too many. Ajin quickly ran backwards as he used the Force to hurl a huge rock in the direction of the incoming Caviets. A few Caviets were crushed but they still kept on coming.
With the city being overrun by Caviets, So-Kovian woman and children ran to safety as every able bodied man that could use a weapon stood and fought the Caviets. But the Caviet horde was too many and they drove through the So-Kovians like bread.
Ajin was running through the city clutching his left arm. In his right hand he still held his ejected purple lightsaber. So-Kovian transport kept on taking off the ground but Caviet starfighters came out of nowhere and shot them down before they had time to reach the atmosphere. Ajin dropped to his knees; he felt light-headed. The Caviets slaughtered all So-Kovians that stood in their way. As Ajin was on the ground dazed he saw a little boy holding a blaster rifle and was firing it at a Caviet soldier. The blaster bolts reflected off its superior armor as the Caviet soldier walked over to the boy, no older than sixteen years of age, and grabbed his throat.
Ajin got to his feet as he tried to get the pain and light-headedness out of his mind as he rushed over to the Caviet soldier who was holding the boy. The boy struggled to get free as the Caviet snapped his neck. The Caviet didn?t have time to see Ajin coming. Ajin was a blur as he swung his lightsaber and decapitated the Caviet soldier.
The city was in rubble now, Caviet soldiers filled the city everywhere, Caviet tanks fired upon the city from outside, Caviet Glamore attack Beast circled atop the city waiting for someone to come in view, and now that Caviet star fighters were circling above them, Ajin wondered if they?d ever get out alive.
Ajin looked to his left and saw three Caviet soldiers looking at him. Ajin turned them bringing his lightsaber up in defense. The Caviets fired their sonic blasters at Ajin but Ajin dodged all of them ( Matrix style ). The Caviet were angry with this and charged forward drawing laser knives. Ajin excepted the charge as he also charged forward.
Ajin swung his lightsaber taking off a Caviet?s arm. He roared in anger and swung his knife at Ajin. Ajin ducked the blow and kicked the Caviet hard in the stomach. The Caviet fell backwards. The other two came forward like a great metal wall.
Ajin rolled to his right as the

 

That was a cool post

The Caviets fired their sonic blasters at Ajin but Ajin dodged all of them ( Matrix style )?.great sentence.

Also??Ajin was very exhausted and in serious pain from the laser knife stab.

 

Wow awesome action and plot.... What made you think of the blocking laser bolt armor, but not the bullets....

Great man: The Caviet?s armor was meant to blocking laser fire. But the Endor soldiers fired metallic bolts. The metallic bolts easily penetrated the Caviet soldier?s armor as they roared and fell down.


ohh yeah, and you gave a pretty good description of the genocide going on... : The Caviets slaughtered all So-Kovians that stood in their way. As Ajin was on the ground dazed he saw a little boy holding a blaster rifle and was firing it at a Caviet soldier. The blaster bolts reflected off its superior armor as the Caviet soldier walked over to the boy, no older than sixteen years of age, and grabbed his throat.



Wedge
MORE!!!!

 

Thanks Wedge!

 

here's the ending for prat 1 of 3



Jorus grinned as he motioned for his Glamore to move left. Sonic fire could be heard from behind him as he tried to dodge the shots. Caviet soldiers on their Glamores closely pursued firing their sonic blasters at Jorus. Jorus?s Glamore had taken several shots with a Caviet blaster. Jorus?s Glamore was slowing down a little. The Caviet soldiers who pursued Jorus figured that since they couldn?t hit the dark robed Jedi on the Glamore they were going to take down the beast the Jedi rode on.
Jorus?s directed his Glamore to swoop down toward the massive Caviet army that still flooded into the So-Kovian city. Caviet tanks on the outside of the cities gates gave heavy fire upon the city. Jorus directed his Glamore to head for the tanks as he still tried to dodge the Glamores behind him.
The Caviet soldiers on their Glamores noticed that Jorus was heading for the Caviet tanks again. Jorus had swooped down and destroyed many of the Caviet tanks that it put a major dent in the Caviet?s fire power. Jorus would usually pick up a Caviet tank and then drop it in the most crowded Caviet spot in their army. It was cause a massive explosion and would kill lots of soldiers. Jorus could feel the hate from the Caviets because of this.
Four sonic blasts struck Jorus?s Glamore. The Glamore struggled for it?s life as it obeyed to its master atop of it. Jorus knew that he was losing control of the Glamore. The Caviets on their Glamores behind Jorus had shot his Glamore with dozens of Sonic blasts. Jorus looked below him at the height he was up. If his Glamore gave way below him, he would fall a few hundred feet to the ground. And he would land right in the middle of the Caviet army outside of the city.
Two more shots hit.
Jorus put his hand on the Glamore?s back and tried to communicate wish it through Jorus?s superior Force powers.
? Hang in their,? he urged.
It looked like the Caviet attack beast understood what Jorus had told it, because it sped up and went faster. The Caviet soldiers of their Glamores behind Jorus noticed this and tried to catch up to the dark robed Jedi Master. Jorus looked down at his black boot and pulled out a concealed thermal detonator. He usually kept this grenade for special reasons.
Jorus pulled the timer release on the grenade and tossed it behind him. The thermal struck a Glamore that closer followed Jorus. The thermal exploded on impact. The Caviet and his Glamore were both destroyed in the blast. Jorus could feel the heat from the explosion as he sped away toward another Caviet tank. The other Caviets atop their Glamores, who were behind the Glamore that was hit with the thermal, lost control of their attack beasts and were thrown off from the Glamores. The frightened Glamores flew off into the sky.
Jorus looked behind him and saw the all clear sign. Jorus then turned his attention to the tank he was headed for. Caviet soldiers that were around the tank saw their enemy atop a Glamore and fired their sonic shots at Jorus?s ride. The hundreds of the sonic shots struck the Glamore. The Glamore gave a terrible, ear-piercing scream as it gave up and fell to the ground.
The Glamore hit the ground hard and died. Since Jorus was atop the massive beast, it provided some padding. But the fall was from really high up and Jorus felt the pain in his body. Dozens of Caviet soldiers who were around the area ran other to see of the dark robed Jedi was still alive.
Jorus flinched and ejected his lightsaber. Jorus?s jumped off the Caviet attack beast and toward the Caviets that surrounded him. Jorus tried to strike down a Caviet soldier but the cortosis plated armor on its chest repelled the lightsaber attack. Jorus?s eyes opened as his lightsaber deactivated. Jorus grabbed the eight foot tall alien by the throat and tried to squeeze it. But the Caviet was too strong and grabbed Jorus?s hands, that were rapped around it?s neck, and twisted them. Jorus?s left hand cracked as he felt his l

 

More fighting action from Jorus... they finally escape and go on a wild goose hunt... while the plot thickens... du du du dum........ Never take a direct course to Coruscant if the Universe is in trouble... excellent

 

thanks for all the responses Wedge!

 

No problem... I realy don't have alot of better things to do during the week.... Homerwork does not count as better things

 

Here is the next part of my book:



A Galaxy of Chaos, part two
The Coming Horde

Chapter 1
two week ago


Jedi Masters Jorus C?boath and Ajin Nolis limped out of the infirmary inside the Jedi Temple. They were both badly hurt during the battle of So-Kov. Jorus and Ajin figured that the planet was now officially captured by the Caviet army. The Jedi High Council was aware of the current situation and requested that Jorus and Ajin come to the High Council as soon as they were out of the Jedi Infirmary.
As the two Jedi limped to the direction of the Council chambers, Jorus?s thoughts traveled to Chargers, Bruce, and Iris. The three were in guest quarters at the Jedi Temple. They were greatly disturbed that the Caviets now had a foothold in their galaxy. They were also troubled that the Caviets may have already attacked Endor.
After checking in with security, Jorus and Ajin walked into the Jedi Council Chambers. Several of the members were not present. The Council had sent them off in missions to help stop the Caviets from conquering any other planets. Jorus looked over at Eeth Koth?s seat. The Jedi Master was still disturbed from his barely surviving the battle of Beroonda. A lot of people died and Master Koth blamed himself for it.
Jorus and Ajin stood in the middle of the Council room as Jedi Master Mace Windu started the meeting.
? We have some troubling news,? Mace Windu said. ? Almost all the Outer Rim world and colonies have fallen to the Caviets.?
? No where the aliens have come from,? Yoda said. ? We do not.?
? But we do know one thing from our intelligence,? Mace Windu
said. ? The Caviet army usually has the same amount of ships that attack planets. They travel in groups of eight ships. Five Caviet Assault Cruisers, one Caviet Carrior, and two Caviet Destroyers. So far, our Republic ships haven?t been a match for them. Their weaponry and shields are far beyond ours. We have been able to only destroy a few of these ships. The Outer Rim worlds have been urged to evacuate their home worlds and retreat to the Core Worlds.?
? We still don not know where the Caviets originated,? Ajin said.
? True, Master Nolis,? the Kel Dor Jedi Master Plo Koon said. ? Their species does not come up in our Archives. It is possible that they come from a part of the Galaxy not explored.?
? Impossible,? Jedi Master Ki-Adi-Mundi said. ? If there are other planets out there, then where do they come from? The Outer Rim worlds have been searched top to button and no sectors lead in our out of those Systems.?
? We also know more about these Caviets,? Mace Windu said. ? They attack in great numbers. They leave no prisoners and every time they finish destroying a planet, they will leave it and the Caviet Assault Cruisers will spray fire upon the planet, which will cause the atmosphere to literally start a fire making the planet inhabitable. They attack planets and sweep through it as though...?
? Looking for something they were?? Yoda finished.
? Yes,? Mace said.
? But what could they possibly look for?? Ajin asked. ? All they care about is attacking a planet and killing everyone it sees. They never take any prisoners.?
? Our peace ships haven?t been able to make contact with the Caviets,? Seasee Tiin said. ? As soon as they become visible in their sensors, the Caviets blow them out of the sky.?
? Wait,? Jorus said rudely. ? Back up to this searching thing. What are they looking for??
? So far we have no idea,? Mace Windu said. ? But we do know that the Outer Rim worlds and colonies have suffered trillions of casualties to this race. Inner Rim worlds and the Core worlds have sent battle ships to help stop the Caviets. But we haven?t been able to win any battles.?

 

I just checked and I saw this come up.... I should get something back to you by like 1.30..... At least where I live it being 1.30.

Edit: YEAH I'm back..... I read this during History class and I remember it being itense.... :"Let's hit the old poker table again, shall we" kind of idea - (sarcastic exactly the oppisite of intense.... a more relaxed atmosphere) and now we have a near impossible goal for our dear jedi friends. YEAH!!! Let's now see them blast away Caviet soldiers and get killed!!!!!!

 

Great posts. Well paced dialogue.

 

Thanks KOS

 

MORE!!!! UP!!!!!!!!

 

Here is a really long next part!

Location: Bakura System
5 hours before the Caviet distress call

Fifteen Republic Battle Cruisers exited Hyperspace in front of the large brown planet of Bakura. The Republic had strong information that a small recon group of Caviet ships were going to prepare for an attack on Bakura. Once the Republic came out of Hyperspace in front of Bakura, no Caviet ships were present.
Jedi Master Kit Fisto looked out of the command bridge from the leading Republic Battle Ship. Kit Fisto?s unclosing eyes spotted the brown planet immediately after dropping out of Hyperspace. But no Caviet ships were there. Kit Fist turned around and his green tendrils swayed as he moved. He over looked the command bridge?s crew as they checked the long-range radar to detect any ships were near the system.
Beside Kit Fisto was his apprentice, Noch Crawfarr, a human Jedi no later than twenty years of age. He was slightly smaller than his Notaulian Jedi Master.
? I thought we had strong intelligence that Caviet ships were going to be in this system?? Kit asked the crew. ? Having a large number of ships like this isn?t necessary when there is no one to battle.? One of the ships naval officers walked up to Kit.
? We do have information that the Caviets will be coming,? the naval officer responded.? Three blips have been spotted on the radar, Master Jedi.? The naval officer pointed to the radar screen. Kit walked up to it and looked at the charted graph.
? The ships are coming from an unknown Hyperspace route,? Kit Fisto said. He turned back to the crew. ? It might be worth checking out. If we survive the battle.?
? Master!? Noch Crawfarr called to his Master. Kit turned back to Noch he was still standing at the command bridge?s view port. Kit walked up to the view port and saw three Caviet Destroyers exit Hyperspace on the other side of the planet.
? Battle stations!? the naval officer cried to his crew on the bridge. Republic soldiers and pilots scattered to their positions on the bridge as the fifteen Republic cruisers readied to engage the three Caviet Destroyers.
Caviet Destroyers weren?t as long and bulky as Caviet Assault Cruisers. But they still had the same shield and weaponry as an Assault Cruiser. They were half the size of a Republic Battle ship.
? Status?? Kit asked the naval officer.
? The Caviets are showing no sign of readying for battle,? the naval officer reported. ? They seem more interested in Bakura than us at the moment.?
? Try and communicate with them,? Kit told the officer.
? They have already blocked our communications,? the naval officer replied. Kit glared out of the view screen at the three small Caviet Destroyers. What is with these Caviets? They systematically destroy planet and planet but before every battle, they scan the planet. But what are they scanning for?
Kit pondered this as the naval officer asked, ? Master Jedi. Orders??
? Power up the weapons,? Kit said. ? And sent a Shiva tactical plasma Nuke. Let?s see how their shields hold up against one of those.?
? But such a powerful nuke like that, at this close range, could be dangerous for our ships,? the naval officer reported.
? We are thousands of meters away from their destination,? Noch protested. Kit motioned for his apprentice to be quiet.
? Then alert the fleet to approach the Caviet Destroyers,? Kit Fisto ordered. ? And send out the fighters.?
? Yes, Master Jedi,? the naval officer replied. The first wave of republic star fighter left their battle cruisers and headed toward the Caviet Destroyers. Since Caviet Destroyers didn?t house any star fighters, they had a hard time shooting down any Republic ships.
Noch looked on at the space battle as he wanted action. Kit Fisto had been training him as a Jedi pilot for star fighters. That was one of Noch?s specialties. Kit noticed this as the two looked out of the

 

The next part!

The cockpit was in pieces as Ajin Nolis grabbed his lightsaber and cut himself out of his seat strap. He was dazed and blooding. Jorus was next to him already up with his lightsaber in his hand. Vaxon and T?noob were both a little shaken but they were all right.
The four quickly made their way out of the cockpit toward the landing ramp. Jorus accessed it and slowly peaked out. He pulled his head back as he saw dozens of Caviet guards surrounding the ship. The Caviet soldiers spoke in their alien tongue to each other as they gave orders.
? If they weren?t Caviets we would be able to take them,? Jorus
said. ? There are too many of them.? Ajin looked out and pulled his head so he couldn?t be seen.
? Vaxon and T?noob,? Jorus told them. ? You will stay here and provide cover-fire while me and Ajin fight them up close. Okay?? The two bounty hunters shook their alien heads. Jorus continued, ? Remember, guys. Their armor is more advanced than anything in the Galaxy. It?ll take more than a dozen shots to get through their armor. So make your shots count.?
? You got it,? Vaxon said as he readied his two blasters. Jorus motioned for Vaxon and T?noob to take action. The two bounty hunters stood out in the open landing ramp and unloaded with their blasters while Jorus and Ajin ran out with their lightsabers drawn. With the spray of laser fire from Vaxon and T?noob, they were able to bring one Caviet guard down.
Jorus and Ajin were a blur as they ran out into the Caviet lanind bay and swung their lightsabers around and dodging the sonic shots. The Caviets had more advantage against the Jedi. They were way more advanced and had weapons that could shoot right through a lightsaber. The lightsaber could not block a sonic shot.
Ajin went up to a Caviet guard and gave the Caviet a heavy kick in the mid-section. The Caviet toppled backwards to the ground. Ajin jumped forward, twirled his lightsaber in the air, and berried the lightsaber in the Caviet?s armored chest. The Caviet gave a painful cry and died. Two more sonic shots whizzed by Ajin and he turned and looked at who shooting at him. Two Caviet soldiers, down some way by the edge of the landing bay walls, took positions behind a few crates and contined to fire a Ajin.
Ajin swung his lightsaber around as he slowly made his way over to the crates. The Caviets, as expected, didn?t move when they saw the Jedi coming. Caviets were very brave. They would throw their lives away at all costs. Some were known to charge into battle even when they were outnumbered a hundred to one. They would die fighting in the honor of serving the Caviet Empire.
Ajin force-flipped over to the crates and he landed on the ground. Ajin lifted his hand and slammed the Force hard at one Caviet soldier. He was thrown into one of the hangar walls and was knocked out cold. The other one charged forward as he took out his laser knife. Ajin hesitated when he saw the weapon. The last time he had fought a Caviet soldier, he was wounded by the same type of weapon. Ajin put away his fears and he jumped into battle to fight the Caviet soldier.
The Caviet guard charged forward as he held the laser knife. He took a swing at Ajin, but Ajin was a lot quicker as he rolled on the ground and cut off both of the Caviet soldier?s legs. The Caviet collapsed to the ground as he roared in anger. Even with both leg?s decapitated, the Caviet soldier struggled to keep on fighting. Ajin kicked him in the face to try and push him back. The Caviet excepted the kick but kept moving toward Ajin. Ajin raised his lightsaber and swung his purple blade. The blade cut right through the Caviet?s neck. The remains of the lifeless body toppled to the ground.
Jorus raised his green blade as he defended himself from four incoming Caviet soldiers. The Caviet hangar was a odd design. The inside was dimly-lit. Alien writings were written on the walls of the hangar. Above, Jorus and Ajin were several other various levels where Caviet soldiers shot

 

Dude, I caught your two last posts, printed them out and I'll read them over my long long 5 day weekened


YEAH VACATIION is sooo amazing..... *Runs around in joy*

 

Good work. I liked Kit's part mostly.

 

Hey Come On UPPPPPP

It's been like 3 months man!!