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Saga A Gift of Warmth - (Winter FanFic Challenge) Obi-Wan, Anakin Complete

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by red rose knight, Dec 19, 2003.

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  1. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Dec 31, 2001
    Applause Applause
     
  2. red rose knight

    red rose knight Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Lady Kenobi?BRAVA! That was a fine piece of storytelling, ?? Thank you! [face_blush]

    obi ew?Beautiful. ?? Thanks! [face_blush]

    jedi nayru?Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! I loved it! ?? Thanks! [face_blush] I was a little worried about the ending, it didn?t want to wrap up very easily. Glad it seems to have gone over well. :D

    PadawanKitara?Applause Applause ?? [face_blush] Thank you very much!

    Whew! I am glad this is done! Thank you so much everyone for all the kind words and I am happy that you enjoyed it. :)

    Now off to reevaluate my other stories and get back to writing. I made it one of my New Year?s resolutions to get all the stories I have started finished.
     
  3. Flashbacca

    Flashbacca Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 11, 2002
    Bravo! Applause! Loved it!
     
  4. _Derisa_Ollamhin_

    _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Jedi Master star 4

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    Lovely, lyrical work, Rose, and with your usual deeply satsifying savour of tragedy. Well done.
    This phrase: "kneeling in his master?s shadow"... breathtakingly evocative, and not the only one that knocks at my heart begging me to write companion pieces.

    Characterisation of Obi-Wan was spot-on, and utterly fascinating. I love your depth of detail, and the rich mythos you weave into all aspects of your story.

    I wish I had more time to read... I may have to ookmark this one and come back to re-read it in the near future. :)


    *Derisa*
     
  5. Mistress_Renata

    Mistress_Renata Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Sep 9, 2000
    Wow. This one really rang true to me. Characterizations were perfect! I particularly loved the discussion of the origins of the holiday and its meaning to the Jedi.
     
  6. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Holy bananas, this was good. Ben'al Houk's story is going to self-combust from intrigue! Not that we'd mind, since we'd get to pick up all the pieces :D

    Hey, look at Red and her evil red VIP colors! :p
     
  7. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Well-written and inventive.
     
  8. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    Apr 14, 2002
    Congrats Red! The win was very well deserved, this story was beautifully written. :)
     
  9. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow Red..What a wonderful story here..I am sorry it has taken me so long to get here to read it..I am just now finding time to do things that I love to do..but I wanted to comment on this..

    WONDERFUL STORY!!! I loved the way you brought out everyone emotions and how you made me feel like I was right there in the middle of the story. glad you won an award for this and look forward to reading more..

    -PT
     
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