Beyond ~A Graying Rose~ *The Tale of Two Lovers* AUTHOR ANNOUNCEMENT 8/1 Vacation till Sunday!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose, Mar 1, 2004.

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  1. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    *pokes Dev and Cat* no one pokes me and gets away with it! *laughs evily*

    Fireyforce
  2. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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  3. Handmaiden_Rabe Force Ghost

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    *pokes Firey back* Yeah! Trio fun! And I had my first official fencing lesson yesterday. MUCH FUN! En garde!
  4. Whitey Force Ghost

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    Ambyr, you're already in school? Ours doesn't start until after Labor Day. :eek:
  5. Whitey Force Ghost

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  6. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    *pokes Cat again* are we seriously going to get into a poking fight?? Oh btw I'm in college now! hehehe, it's kewl, but also means that i probably won't be able to spend as much time around the boards as i'd like to. Ambyr are you gonna update this soon? *shrugs and pokes cat again for the heck of it* talk to you later.
  7. Handmaiden_Rabe Force Ghost

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    *continually pokes FF* :p Yes, it appears we have begun a poking war. :D
  8. Tahi Jedi Grand Master

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    Caught up again, Ambyr. :) Aha! I thought Milo was the son.

    Don't give me that look. Men scream. Sometimes. I can admit that.
    I loved that admission of vulnerability - what a guy!

    Tahiri's eyes widened in horror, and I undid my restraints frantically. The thing shrieked and moaned with souless eyes as I began hitting it with all my might. I was losing, however, because the creature was climbing up her back to get to me. Removing the canister from my pocket, as it was harder than my fists, I accidentally pressed the button.

    I heard a distinct snap-hiss, and then a buzzing noise as a violet beam of light came forth from the cylinder. (See, I knew it would come in handy.) A lightsaber! I knew what these did.

    Like it was second nature, I stabbed the creature with the blade violently and rapidly. It released Tahiri with a moan. I deactivated the lightsaber as Tahiri fell into my arms. Jaina, already in the pilot's chair, was ready to go. I felt the craft rise and tightened my grasp on Tahiri. She pulled herself away for a second to look into my eyes.

    "My son." she whispered. "My darling son."

    Absolutely wonderful passage. :) His dad would be proud of him. I especially like the little asides you pop in. Milo is a very likable character. I like the idea of him being drawn to write about Anakin - makes me think the Force was guiding him.

    Great drama, too.

    Good luck with school. And don't worry about the lack of posts - at least you're doing better than me. LOL

  9. Handmaiden_Rabe Force Ghost

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  10. skywalker64089 Jedi Knight

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    New reader checking in. I have enjoyed this very much and am looking forward to more.

    S.
  11. Handmaiden_Rabe Force Ghost

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  12. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    I'm starting to not believe this will be updated...
  13. Whitey Force Ghost

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    Now, now, Ambyr, all that partying is really interrupting your duties here! ;) :p
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