Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose, Mar 1, 2004.
*pokes Dev and Cat* no one pokes me and gets away with it! *laughs evily*
*pokes Firey back* Yeah! Trio fun! And I had my first official fencing lesson yesterday. MUCH FUN! En garde!
Ambyr, you're already in school? Ours doesn't start until after Labor Day.
Rise, my thread.
*pokes Cat again* are we seriously going to get into a poking fight?? Oh btw I'm in college now! hehehe, it's kewl, but also means that i probably won't be able to spend as much time around the boards as i'd like to. Ambyr are you gonna update this soon? *shrugs and pokes cat again for the heck of it* talk to you later.
*continually pokes FF* Yes, it appears we have begun a poking war.
Caught up again, Ambyr. Aha! I thought Milo was the son.
Don't give me that look. Men scream. Sometimes. I can admit that.
I loved that admission of vulnerability - what a guy!
Tahiri's eyes widened in horror, and I undid my restraints frantically. The thing shrieked and moaned with souless eyes as I began hitting it with all my might. I was losing, however, because the creature was climbing up her back to get to me. Removing the canister from my pocket, as it was harder than my fists, I accidentally pressed the button.
I heard a distinct snap-hiss, and then a buzzing noise as a violet beam of light came forth from the cylinder. (See, I knew it would come in handy.) A lightsaber! I knew what these did.
Like it was second nature, I stabbed the creature with the blade violently and rapidly. It released Tahiri with a moan. I deactivated the lightsaber as Tahiri fell into my arms. Jaina, already in the pilot's chair, was ready to go. I felt the craft rise and tightened my grasp on Tahiri. She pulled herself away for a second to look into my eyes.
"My son." she whispered. "My darling son."
Absolutely wonderful passage. His dad would be proud of him. I especially like the little asides you pop in. Milo is a very likable character. I like the idea of him being drawn to write about Anakin - makes me think the Force was guiding him.
Great drama, too.
Good luck with school. And don't worry about the lack of posts - at least you're doing better than me. LOL
New reader checking in. I have enjoyed this very much and am looking forward to more.
I'm starting to not believe this will be updated...
Now, now, Ambyr, all that partying is really interrupting your duties here!