Beyond - Legends A heart's shadow - collected SW poems - Chain of Love NEW POEM 3/27

I have so many threads with poems that it seemed like a good idea to make just one thread where I post all the poems. It's easier to read and for others to find

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* [b] 8/29/03 [/b] - Heart's Breakdown: A Jaina poem, post SBS

* [b] 9/1/03 [/b] - Just sometimes - A Tahiri poem, post Remnant

* [b] 9/10/03 [/b] - Kyp's Blues - Kyp Poem... can't you tell? - Post Rebel Dream

* [b]9/13/03 [/b] - Some Living - Jaina poem, post SBS

* [b]10/09/03 [/b] - Love, love where are you - all character poem set in NJO

* [b]11/13/03 [/b] - Faith - all character poems set in the NJO

* [b] 03/23/04 [/b] - Chain of love - a brief Tahiri to Anakin poem

* [b] 03/27/04 [/b] - Lost - Another short poem about Jaina's thoughts of love

 

Heart?s breakdown


I don?t want to cry
Anymore
I no longer want to feel the pain
And the hurt inside


It kills me to see
It pains me to hear
Fall Fall Fall
I no longer want to


It?s the danger in loving someone
You no longer see it coming
You deny it
Until you can?t anymore


It?s sad to know
You just can?t
Anymore
Any longer


Sometimes love is not supposed
To be
Sometimes the danger is
Right were it?s not to be


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Really good. Can't wait to see more.

Fireyforce

 

Thanks Fireyforce

 

Great stuff. You really have an awful lot of talent. You captured very well the helplessness Jaina could feel in loving someone. Kudos.

--Den

 

Thanks Den! Yeah sometimes I can really key in to what she's feeling. But it are moments, luckily

 

Just sometimes


There?s a wind blowing
Change is calling
It?s hard to know
That there?s nothing you can do


When you know the truth
Pain is stabbing
You want so stay close
Yet run so far away


Sometimes it?s all too much
Release is wanting
Then thoughts find their way in
You find there?s still hope


Because it?s all you got


Hope

 

that's really great elfsheen! There is always hope

 

yeah only the "there's always hope" isn't entirely mine Ever since I heard Aragorn say that I keep remembering it at the strangest times.

 

Ah LotR. It's true though there is always hope. Great job Elfsheen.

Fireyforce

 

That's exactly what I thought of when I read the last line, only the very end of TTT trailer when Arwen says it.

Wonderful job, Elfsheen! Very expressive.

 

I love it when people read poems! Many thanks to you both

 

Been listening to the Bluess... can't you tell
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Kyp?s Blues


Here?s another lonely night
In one more empty bed
On some Force forsaken planet
Far away from where I want to be


My heart broken once more
The day as long as the night
Dark Side?s lurking
It?s a one-way ticket to the?


Empty side of life


Yeah, that?s right
The empty side of life
That?s where I?m gonna be


The Empty side of life


One of these days
One of these days
I?m gonna change these empty days
Yeah I?m gonna change my ways?


Can?t I stop lying to myself?
There?s no turning back
Move along, walk on,
Go on, don?t stop
It?s a one-way, no turning back


Empty side of life

 

I like that one even more. I like how you focused on Kyp's motivation to change.

 

Yet again another excellent poem. Great job!!!

Fireyforce

 

I offer my humble thanks to both of you for reading that wacky poem!

 

UP!

 

bump!

 

Up, another poem soon?

Fireyforce

 

I wasn't going to post this at first. Because some poems just can't be posted And this is the best poem I've written so far, actually it's the only poem i can say I'm proud of. So here it is:


Some living


You ought to do some living
It isn?t that hard to do
Water through your hands
I?ll stay with you forever more


Can you decide?
To walk the line without looking back
Listen to your heart
The future is near


You can?t cry anymore
It is so hard to do
Child in time, Child of mine
You know I can?t let you go


Can you choose?
To linger or to leave
You will have your freedom
Find your faith

 

UP! Nobody like?

 

its good

You ought to do some living

reminds me of a line from that rolling stones song "wild horses"

I also really liked this line:

Can you choose?
To linger or to leave

 

Lovely poems, Elfsheen. I especially like the Kyp one as I think it captures his "voice" really well. Good for you.

 

That was really good Elfsheen! [face_smile] Very good.

Fireyforce

 

YodaKenobi - wow a Stones fan! yeah the first line is of Wild Horses. I heard the song and this popped in my head.

Tahi - Thanks. Yeah the Kyp one... effects of blues I guess

Fireyforce - thanks. I actually like this one too. It's not that I don't like any of my poems, but most are usually written on an act of madness