Beyond - Legends A heart's shadow - collected SW poems - Chain of Love NEW POEM 3/27

LOL your welcome. It's not that I speak from experience, but I just watch too many movies.

 

Here's another one, blame it on the blues. Jaina's thoughts of love, for some reason closely resembling mine...how weird...

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[b]Lost[/b]


I once had it all
Before I lost it all
Before I came and went again
As love comes and walks away again


A road without a finish till it all ends
Burned desire turned on till hearts ends
Burned without a love eternally unknown
I can?t walk away when I walk into the unknown


~FIN~


See? I told you it would be weird ;)

 

btw, ignore the SoloDurron part, that would be a sock of mine.

 

I was wondering who SoloDurron was. Kewl name by the way. Anywho, yet again a great poem. You're right a little weird. But often times what the writer is feeling at the time will be apparent in his or her writing.

Fireyforce

 

LOL thanks. Yeah I was feeling weird at the time. SoloDurron is a sock of mine as both an experiment and because I was a little tired of this name

 

that was strange, but a good kind of strange You can definitely see how it relates to Jaina, as she was quite confused.

A road without a finish till it all ends
Burned desire turned on till hearts ends
Burned without a love eternally unknown
I can?t walk away when I walk into the unknown

I really like the parallels of the first and last lines. Well done!