Before - Legends A Hero Revealed-----UPDATED 8/11/05! (connects the events of KotOR 1 with KotOR 2---AU)

Again well done this is very good.

 

Ooh, can't wait what happens next!

 

OOOO OOO MORE MORE!!! is it really gonna be a short story though?? this is really good.

 

I don't know how long it will be. It will end when I see fit, but not soon.


Thanks for reading, guys!

 

your a really good writer,your style is really good.I hope to see more soon im now hooked on it.

 

Thanks masterjedi343! I'll be sure to update more tomorrow. This story is going to tie in the stories from KotOR 1 and KotOR 2.

 

SMALL UPDATE!!!



The two Sith Lords climbed out of their transport. Revan was licking his lips because he was anxious to use this army once again. The lost map of the Star Forge was finally found. At the control center of the space station, Revan created a new warship, The Ravager.

?Take this ship, Lord Nihilus, to the small colony on Telos. All these years we were secretly gaining power in the galaxy!? yelled Revan with ferocity.

?Yes, my Lord? replied Nihilus.




As Nihilus boarded his ship, Revan used the space station to create an infinite amount of Sith fighters. These were to escort Nihilus and serve as his army. ?At last we will expose ourselves to the Exile.?

The infinite fleet went into hyperspace towards the planet of Telos. There it was, unprotected and unguarded. They had been completely unaware of the Sith invasion.

?Begin landing your troops, commander? yelled Nihilus in his snake like voice. Instantly, thousands of Sith assassins were invading Citadel Station on Telos. The Ithorians controlling the restoration efforts had fled to the surface of the planet. ?The Exile is here. Bring him to me,? he yelled once again.

Screams from the workers and residents on Citadel Station could be heard. The Sith invasion fleet was crushing its Republic counterparts in the battle above. The Republic was retreating. At that instant, the Exile boarded The Ravager with party members consisting of Mandalore, and Visas Marr. ?My old apprentice is here,? he yelled with rage. ?I can sense her. At last she, and the Exile, will die!?

Nihilus stood on the bridge of the ship watching the space battle around him. The Sith fleet seamed invincible. Thousands of Republic gun ships were being destroyed. ?Wait?What is that?!? The Ebon Hawk flew in from the distance. Bastila Shan, Darth Revan?s wife, was aboard. She was using her battle meditation against the Sith.

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[color=red]More soon... :D[/color]

 

You're a good writer this is getting better and better keep it up.

 

WOOOOO GREAT UPDATE If bastila keeps up the battle meditation revan will be in trouble(because as i saw as she used it to destory the republic completly on darkside anyway ),but reven does have a infinite fleet,does that mean he has a advantage?

 

Well what happens when an unstoppable force meets and immovable wall?





Thanks for reading guys!




[I need to get some more people to read this. ]


I've updated the first post with the whole story up to date.

 

maybe by asking people over PM to read it,youll get more readers?

 

I don't want to be a PM Spammer.

 

thats true. hmmm maybe people from the trials will read this? then youll have more people?

 

UPDATE!!!!



One by one the Sith fighters were being destroyed. The major space battle was in a stalemate. As the fighters on both sides were being destroyed, the Exile walked onto the bridge. There he stood, his white skin, baldhead and blonde goatee. His Jedi Robes were as dark as the bark of a tree. The Exile had brought his company, Mandalore and Visas Marr, and the three of them walked up to Nihilus on the bridge.


Nihilus screamed with his snake like voice and Visas Marr dropped to her knees. Within moments, Nihilus drew his blood red blade out from his Sith robes below. The Exile ignited his silver staff saber that was as bright as the sun on Coruscant. The Exile closed in and attacked Nihilus with his staff saber.


Nihilus blocked the fury of attacks. Mandalore moved in to attack but was suddenly immobilized when the Sith Lord choked him. The Exiled Jedi was attacking Nihilus from all sides and was overpowering the weaker Sith Lord. Nihilus, fueled by the dark side of the force, unleashed an attack with ferocity and stunned the Exile.

?I have you now, Exile,? yelled Nihilus in his scratchy voice.

?No, that is where you are wrong.? The Exile leaped up off the ground and swung towards the left side of the Sith Lord?s body. Effortlessly, Nihilus blocked all of his attacks and used the force to throw the Jedi to the wall. A large red beam then shot out of the hand of the Dark Lord and it drained the Exile?s health.

Revan, sensing his apprentice in danger, left the Star Forge to go help with the fight against the Exile. Once he arrived, he saw The Ravager badly scarred with laser bullets from the attacking Republic fleet. The duel inside could be seen from Revan?s star destroyer.

?I sense my master, Exile. When he arrives you will surely die.? Nihilus claimed.

?No, you will both die. I?ve already killed your assassin, both Sion and Kreia. You were a fool for thinking that you could spy on me with them.?

Nihilus roared with laughter. ?No, fool. They have simply brought me to you. And now, Jedi, you will die!?

Another red beam of light shot out of Nihilus? hands. The Exile was dying. There was no way he could survive.

Revan ordered his star destroyer to attack The Ravager. ?But?sir, your apprentice is on that ship. He will surely di-?

?Do not question my orders, Commander. The Exile is more powerful than that fool I first met in the cave back on Telos. If we can get the Exile to side with us, then the Sith will rule the galaxy!?

The commander did as Revan asked and fired on his ally?s ship. Inside, Nihilus was taunting the Exile. ?My master, Darth Reva-? And the ship was hit. Nihilus died and a loud scream was heard from the ship. Somehow, the Exile survived. He was too weak to get off the ship, but his strength and determination allowed him to escape. He began to think on who Nihilus? master could have been. ?It can?t be!? the Exile yelled aloud. ?No! It is. That Sith was trained by Revan!

It was evident that a climatic duel needed to take place. If the Exile would win, the Republic would be saved but if Revan won, the Sith would take over once again.

 

AWESOME TWIST!!! more more more

 

Keep up the awesome work, Agent!.
Great story.

 

Best section yet!

 

I don't think I'll get an update today. I'll be sure to do so soon though.




Thanks for the compliments!

 

your welcome A_S

 

I eagerly await the next update. That was great.

 

it was really good agent!

 

Sorry guys, I haven't been able to get an update out. It has been a busy week.