"A Jedi's Redemption" - PLEASE critique my fanfic!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by jedi_master_gimpy, Mar 14, 2000.

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  1. Maelisaandii Jedi Knight

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    Feb 3, 2000
    star 2
    Aaaah. That's much better!
    <hides her cattle prod and grins in a most innocent fashion>
    What cattle prod? I don't have a cattle prod!
    Boxers! <giggles> Oh, what a great ending!!
  2. Luke_and_Mara_4ever Jedi Master

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    Aug 8, 2000
    star 4
    This is like at the bottom of the bottom of the bottom, so I'll be nice and push it up to the top of the top of the top
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