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Saga A KALEIDOSCOPE OF ILLUSIONS - AU - Poss. EP III Spoiler- H/L Luke, etc. Complete 5/8/- answ. 5/10

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by GreatOne, Mar 26, 2004.

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  1. PeriwinklSummer

    PeriwinklSummer Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I love this story!!!!!!!! (Especially the fact that Han and Leia are together and engaged and all).
    More please!!!!!!!
    (Would write more but I'm in class) :)
     
  2. RogueSticks

    RogueSticks Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Oh yeah, WHAT NEXT?

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  3. starsailor721

    starsailor721 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Your story really came together nicely. You're certainly living up to your namesake GreatOne!
     
  4. HanSolo29

    HanSolo29 RPF/SWC/Fan Art Manager & Bill Pullman Connoisseur star 7 Staff Member Manager

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    Aww, nice happy post! I can't wait to see where this one ends!

    Great post! :)
     
  5. PrincessDaisy2

    PrincessDaisy2 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Great stuff! I'm glad that Han was actually able to propose to Leia this time around. Can't wait for more regarding the engagement. ;)
     
  6. QueenOfAces

    QueenOfAces Jedi Master star 2

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    GreatOne: I knew you were too much of a softie not to have a reunion scene! Now I'm curious to find out about these illusions of yours...who is really pulling the strings here? :)
     
  7. StarForce

    StarForce Jedi Youngling star 1

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    That was such a great chapter GreatOne! :) I'm so glad that Han and Leia are back together! [face_love] Let's hope they stay that way. Like everyone else, I'm also wondering how you're going to finish this. Your stories are so unpredictable! I can't wait until tomorrow!
     
  8. Laura_Anu

    Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm so sad this is almost over...*sobs*

    I love the way Luke and Mara like each other...it's so sweet!
     
  9. Kazzy

    Kazzy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    In one of my classes my lecturer quoted someone who said something along the lines of "the more the complete the ending, the more questions asked". That wasn't the ending was it? Han's still in the wrong timeline.

    So what is going to happen next? You're planning something aren't you? Well, I demand to know what is! Tell me! Tell me, now!

    I have mental images of Exar Kun and Palpatine locked in a mental battle for all eternity, or worse yet joining forces and figuring out a way out. Is Palpy really dead? (I have a suspicious mind)

    "Go, and rebuild with your sister and your wife."

    "Wife?"

    Yoda was silent. "About this ask your friend, Solo," he finally said as he hobbled off.


    [face_laugh] watch out Han!!


     
  10. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sologirl - only one more 'fix' left! :D So, when does Han wake up? Or does he ever wake up? And, is history changed now when he wakes up? - Hopefully, all those questions are answered in the next post!

    Sock_of_Darth_Vader - I can just see Luke going 'Wife?' - he probably thinks the little green guy has been sipping some fermented berry juice! [face_laugh]

    kayladie97 - But what's this? You gave Michele such a hard time about Han having to ask Luke's permission for Leia's hand in marriage in HER story and now you've done the same thing! - LOL! I have a real strange streak in me!!!! [face_laugh] (you just have to think about "Ceremony" to know that! )

    RebelMom - Last chapter...coming right up!! :)

    PeriwinklSummer - Wow! A new reader right at the end! Welcome!!! I'm glad to have you reading, and I'm glad you like this! :)

    RogueSticks - LOL! Did you bug your parents on long car trips? "Are we there yet?" :D ;) - I hope you like this ending, and won't destructo-bomb me if you read my latest weirdness. :eek:

    starsailor721 - Thank you!! [face_blush]

    HanSolo29 - See? I didn't even let the old evil Kun escape! ;)

    PrincessDaisy2- I'm glad that Han was actually able to propose to Leia this time around - This author is not completely evil! (just a little...) :D

    QueenOfAces - ...who is really pulling the strings here? - hehe.

    StarForce - Your stories are so unpredictable! - I think, mostly, I end my stories on a happy note! *thinks back* Yup.... mostly happy! ;)

    Laura_Anu - Don't cry!! :_| - Then I will start! :_| - I love the way Luke and Mara like each other - Yes... unlike certain other authors, I'm NOT mean to Luke! *glares at Jedi-2B* *mumbles something about "where is that woman... I haven't seen her since I took a shot at her in her story..."*

    Kazzy - "the more the complete the ending, the more questions asked". - I agree! A good story always leaves you thinking about the possibilities, and doesn't answer ALL the questions! :D - Han's still in the wrong timeline - You think? ;)
     
  11. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Chapter 38
     
  12. GreatOne

    GreatOne Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Whew! [face_laugh] This has been a long story ( for me anyway. :p ) Thank YOU so much for reading :D :D

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    THANK YOU!!!! :D :D
     
  13. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A celebration of life and victory, Leia had called him. Han had thought a little differently. Apparently, the Force doesn't need my help in making certain things happened the second time around. It's a good thing, too. I'm not about to tell Luke and Mara when to make a baby!

    Uh yeah, I wouldn't want to tell Mara when to procreate either! A great story, but it CAN'T be over. Now I'll just have to print it up so I can sit in my favorite chair and read it from beginning to end without interruption. Perhaps I better do so in a room I can lock so the kids can't disturb me. Although they've been known to slip notes under the door when I ignore their knocks, LOL!
    A WONDERFUL story, I can't wait to see what your next project is...hint, hint.

     
  14. Kazzy

    Kazzy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I just figured Han is really old. He's added something like 30 years to his life!! That's a long time.

    So you left him where he was, I guess that makes it right. I wasn't thinking before.

    No one was surprised when Rouge fainted.

    Lol. All those shocks.

    Han did not want to change the future in any shape or form when it came to his kids,

    That's nice, I liked that :D

    Oh and I really liked Anakin still being alive! That was really cool.

    Loved this fic from beginning to end, it has been such a pleasure to read. Thank you :)
     
  15. Jedi-2B

    Jedi-2B Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm back from being AWOL. Darn internet problems! And then the Boards didn't want to cooperate when I tried to post my reply, either. :(

    Yes, I had no trouble catching Han having to ask for Leia's hand. Let's see, you've also had Han witness Leia being shot and being blown up. And then you make them be engaged for TWO years before marrying. I don't want to hear any more about kayladie or me being mean to Han.

    This is 30 years later, and Ben is only two years old? Is this how you're mean to the Skywalkers? Give 50-yr-old parents a two-year-old to take care of? Apparently everyone had to be born still at the same time, hmmm? :D Liked them squeezing in a daughter, tho, even if you did have them wait almost three years to get married.

    They had made a deal - if Han went anywhere besides Naboo, he would first pick up Chewie before heading out.

    Was this supposed to be Alderaan? :p

    Great story, O GreatOne! I really liked having it to look forward to every morning.
     
  16. Laura_Anu

    Laura_Anu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    A happy ending!!! Yay! Thank you so much for writing this! I was so scared that something bad would happen in the end....but everything was great!
     
  17. kayladie97

    kayladie97 Jedi Master star 4

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    Aw, that was just a perfect ending! I loved the whole thing from beginning to end...well, except for the part where Luke got killed :mad: , but since you let him marry Mara a LOT quicker than the pros did, I'll forgive you. :p And you gave him a daughter, too!

    I'm also glad that Anakin gets to live as well, although I don't know about Jaina/Jag...yuck! Guess I can't have everything, huh? [face_laugh]

    Perhaps the first time around had been the real illusion all along.

    That was the perfect ending line...truly inspired, I think. :)

    Now, let's see, that makes about FOUR stories you've started and finished while I'm STILL working on Sleight of Hand! Lord, I wish I could write as fast as you do! ;)

    Can't wait for whatever you have for us next!
     
  18. darkladyhannasolo

    darkladyhannasolo Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Very well done. I can't wait until you start your next one. :D
     
  19. QueenOfAces

    QueenOfAces Jedi Master star 2

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    GreatOne: Good work! :) I never followed the NJO stories, so I'm not really familiar with some of the characters. I still want to know who is pulling the strings, but I definitely enjoyed the ride! Thanks for a happy reunion and a good ending for all concerned (well, maybe not for Vader). I look forward to your next story!
     
  20. DarthMasan

    DarthMasan Jedi Master star 3

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    ahh sorry I didnt respond this whole week, i was busy planning my b-day party.. it was worth it :d

    great posts! thank God that I read the last posts all together, I would of died if I had to wait for you to post!
    Congrats! its a great fic!
    DM
     
  21. RogueSticks

    RogueSticks Jedi Youngling star 3

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    WELL DONE

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  22. Kab730

    Kab730 Jedi Master star 3

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    Another Wonderful Story!
     
  23. TiaRaye

    TiaRaye Jedi Master star 1

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    STANDING OVATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Wonderful job, yet again!!!! And you have single-handedly fixed the EU! I forgive you for not writing out the entire thirty years, although if you did, I would read every word! And Han got to live through them, instead of waking up in the future. :)

    O, benevolent Great One, I bow down before you once again!!!
     
  24. StarForce

    StarForce Jedi Youngling star 1

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    WOW!!!! :) That was such an amazing ending to such an amazing story! I loved it! [face_love] [face_love] This worked out a lot better than the EU version! :) And Han got to live extra long! :cool:

    I love that you end your stories on a happy note GreatOne! I did think you would give this a happy ending, although it didn't always seem like it, and I'm really glad you did!

    I can't wait for your next story GreatOne!
     
  25. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Yeah, that first time was the illusion.

    Loved the happy ending. I think it be neat to see the 30 years but that would make this a huge novel. Not that there's anything wrong with huge novels. But what am I going to read every single morning now? huh? ;)
     
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