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Saga A Knight on the Town--Completed 12/13

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthIshtar, Sep 24, 2004.

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  1. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Yup. I wanted that hidden conspiracy.
     
  2. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Up. FInal post tomorrow evening.
     
  3. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    2359

    "Well," Obi-Wan mused, "I think that was a success."

    There was an ecstatic groan from the couch that might have been assent, but it was difficult to tell. Anakin, for once, was too tired to twitch.

    Maybe we should do this more often.

    "I heard that," Anakin grunted.

    "Then, put in your mental earplugs," Obi-Wan suggested. "What say you if we clean this up tomorrow?"

    Anakin stretched expansively. "Master Kenobi being lazy," he grinned. "And they say that this is not a day of miracles."

    Obi-Wan checked his chrono, then ducked to look under the sink. "Ah, it's tomorrow already."

    "Well," Anakin yawned. "Thanks for a wonderful birthday and a few laughs. I think I'll do what I should have done last night and..."

    "Cleaned up this mess."

    Anakin was suddenly immobile as he stared at the bucket of cleaning supplies.

    "As we agreed," Obi-Wan prompted.

    Those blue eyes were still locked on the bucket.

    "I hope those are for my next public cleansing ritual."

    "No, I think you've had enough baths for one day," Obi-Wan smirked, "with all those drinks poured down your tunic. These are for the drinks that missed."

    0300

    "Have you gotten to the..."

    For a moment, it appeared that he would need to administer another Cruder treatment a few hours hence, but then he realized that his Padawan was slumped over the toilet for a different reason than intoxication.

    Exhaustion had taken over.

    Turning, he crossed to the storage cubicle and retrieved a spare blanket. Anakin didn't even twitch when he draped it over his slack form.

    Poor little guy.

    Control, Kenobi. A Padawan shall not know his Master's soft spot for him.


    Backing away, he shut off the light. "Sweet dreams, troublemaker."
     
  4. Kynstar

    Kynstar Jedi Knight star 5

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    Ohhh loved the ending! hehehe Poor Anakin indeed! Passing out at the toilet, poor guy. Hehehe great job!
     
  5. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    But it's a happy ending! It worked! WOOHOO!
     
  6. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    And thanks for reading. I finished this and all of a sudden, Fate comes online!
     
  7. Ana_Labris

    Ana_Labris Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aww that was soooo cute!! :D :D :D Poor Anakin *fond grin*
    But um.. Kenobi put a blankie over him when he was asleep over the toilet? That's a bit... odd. Why not move him to the bed?
     
  8. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Thanks to everyone who nommed this. Love ya lots!
     
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