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Saga A Light in the Darkness...A/P, Obi-Wan, Palpaptine...Updated 04/11/11

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Kelia-Lily, Mar 3, 2008.

  1. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Jun 14, 2005
    So thinking around Palpatine is NOT allowed...

    =D=

    Jolly good up-date!
     
  2. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    May 15, 2008
    Looks like the galaxy is in for a rough ride...over the long haul too. Very nicely done.
     
  3. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2004
    Palpatine is one devious sadistic monster.
    I for one will be so happy when some Jedi runs him through.


    Great update.=D=
     
  4. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Apr 24, 2000
    ewwww, Mara is Palpatine's daughter?!?!?!? [face_sick]

    I didn't think she would be that much older than Luke and Leia, though.
     
  5. bkwrm752003

    bkwrm752003 Jedi Master star 1

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    Oct 26, 2006
    Yay! An update.

    I was hoping Mara was going to be the daughter of Obi-Wan and Siri eventually. The though of Mara being Palpatine's child actually makes my head hurt.

    Update soon! I want to see the big escape!
     
  6. nada_smith

    nada_smith Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jul 8, 2006
    Ah, I've missed several updates. I especially enjoyed everyone ignoring poor, babbling, Obi-Wan's wishes as they carted him about last time. This time I feel so sorry for Mara being Palp's daughter and having to start training with him. Oh, and I feel for the Admiral, too. Demanding bosses are always a drag, but when that boss is a Sith Lord...Whew!

    Excellent job, ladies!
     
  7. GeneralKenobi7

    GeneralKenobi7 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Jan 18, 2009
    I can't help feeling sorry for Culpi... at least a bit...
    Mara - I hope they'll meet her[face_whistling]
    Really good update!=D=
     
  8. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 21, 2001
    So Mara is Palpatine's daughter? I wonder who her mother is/was? :confused:

    Obi and company better find a way off Bespin fast! That Palps is evilly cunning, but team Kenobi/Skywalker are pretty sneaky too when the moment calls for it. Creative thinking under pressure must be a prerequisite for being a successful Jedi. Unfortunately, it also seems to be a requirement for successful Sith Lords.

    Great chapter! =D= Can't wait for more.
     
  9. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 21, 2007
    Palpatine's on to them.

    My bet's on that our heros are goin' to escape ahead of the Storm troopers.

    So Mara's Palpatine's daughter????

    LOL!!!
     
  10. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    ?Really?? Palpatine frowned. ?Perhaps I misjudged you.? He paused, studying the trembling man before him silently. ?Continue.?

    Culpi balked. What did Palpatine want him to say? He had a hard time trying to speak as it was, but he was even more clueless when it came to saying the right thing to please someone like the Emperor.


    Uh-huh... That's the impression he gave off during ROTJ, too. Like one really needed to tread softly around him. As in: Over ten miles of glass while carrying nitro. (And the man portrayed here? Scary. Awesome, but scary.)

    And... about Mara? Wow...


    Good, good post. :)
     
  11. Ocelotl_Nesto

    Ocelotl_Nesto Jedi Master star 4

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    Oct 29, 2004
    Poor Mara... Palpy is going to start sooner now.

    Culpi is a walking corpse, he wont seal off the landing bays on time.

     
  12. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    I got to read TWO updates at once. Lucky me. :D

    This story just gets better and better, and it set the bar pretty high to begin with. I'll just say =D=
     
  13. ratna

    ratna Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mar 1, 2007
    Well I certainly like my Palpatine off guard and off balance. Too bad it won't last long.

    I wonder who he's planning to recruit for his inquisition team...? Bounty hunters? Hutt? Hmmmm[face_thinking]
     
  14. canadianjedimama

    canadianjedimama Jedi Knight star 4

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    Jan 28, 2008
    Mara is Palpatines? [face_sick]

    Poor girl.

    But I have every confidence that Obi, Anakin and the gang will get off Bespin.[face_mischief]

    [face_worried] Right?

    CJM
     
  15. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 5, 2006
    AzureAngel2: So thinking around Palpatine is NOT allowed...

    Not at all.

    Jolly good up-date!

    Thanks!

    MiralukaJedi: Looks like the galaxy is in for a rough ride...over the long haul too. Very nicely done.

    Yes it does, thank you!

    Gkilkenny: Palpatine is one devious sadistice monster.
    I for one will be so happy when some Jedi runs him through.


    That's for sure!

    Great update.

    Thanks!

    Jedi_Liz: ewwww, Mara is Palpatine's daughter?!?!?!?

    Yup!

    I didn't think she would be that much older than Luke and Leia, though.

    Good point.

    bkwrm752003: Yay! An update.

    I was hoping Mara was going to be the daughter of Obi-Wan and Siri eventually. The though of Mara being Palpatine's child actually makes my head hurt.


    Sorry about that.

    Update soon! I want to see the big escape!

    Thank you, more is coming soon!

    nada_smith: Ah, I've missed several updates. I especially enjoyed everyone ignoring poor, babbling, Obi-Wan's wishes as they carted him about last time. This time I feel so sorry for Mara being Palp's daughter and having to start training with him. Oh, and I feel for the Admiral, too. Demanding bosses are always a drag, but when that boss is a Sith Lord...Whew!

    We're so glad you're continuing to enjoy this story.

    Excellent job, ladies!

    Thank you!

    GeneralKenobi7: I can't help feeling sorry for Culpi... at least a bit...
    Mara - I hope they'll meet her
    Really good update!


    We'll just have to see, thank you!

    p_stotts: So Mara is Palpatine's daughter? I wonder who her mother is/was?

    [face_whistling]

    Obi and company better find a way off Bespin fast! That Palps is evilly cunning, but team Kenobi/Skywalker are pretty sneaky too when the moment calls for it. Creative thinking under pressure must be a prerequisite for being a successful Jedi. Unfortunately, it also seems to be a requirement for successful Sith Lords.

    Yes it definitely seems like it.

    Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

    Thank you!

    Lady_Misty: Palpatine's on to them.

    Yeah [face_worried]

    My bet's on that our heros are goin' to escape ahead of the Storm troopers.

    We'll just have to see.

    So Mara's Palpatine's daughter????

    LOL!!!


    :D

    DaenaBenjen42: Uh-huh... That's the impression he gave off during ROTJ, too. Like one really needed to tread softly around him. As in: Over ten miles of glass while carrying nitro. (And the man portrayed here? Scary. Awesome, but scary.)

    That's for sure.

    And... about Mara? Wow...

    Good, good post.


    Thank you!

    Ocelotl_Nesto: Poor Mara... Palpy is going to start sooner now.

    Yeah...[face_worried]

    Culpi is a walking corpse, he wont seal off the landing bays on time.

    We'll just have to see.

    VaderLVR64: I got to read TWO updates at once. Lucky me.

    This story just gets better and better, and it set the bar pretty high to begin with. I'll just say


    Thank you so much!

    ratna: Well I certainly like my Palpatine off guard and off balance. Too bad it won't last long.

    That's for sire.

    I wonder who he's planning to recruit for his inquisition team...? Bounty hunters? Hutt? Hmmmm

    [face_whistling]

    canadianjedimama: Mara is Palpatines?

    Poor girl.

    But I have every confidence that Obi, Anakin and the gang will get off Bespin.

    Right?


    You'll just have to wait and see, thank you!
     
  16. siri_sparrow

    siri_sparrow Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 23, 2009
    .... Delurking in process......

    here I am I wanted to say that this is one if my fave fics, you two are really good writers!!!!!! I love your dialoge and the scenes with obi and siri are soooooooooooooooooooooooo perfect!!! please please pm me ok?!!???!!!
    I bet palpy is gonna pay soon... anikin needs to go kick his ass I mean c'mon!!!!!!!
    you guys rock!!! pm pm pm me!!!!
     
  17. siri_sparrow

    siri_sparrow Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 23, 2009
    aww u was hoping you would make Mara siri and obi's daughter..... ?anyway you can't kill siri she's my absolute favorite carachter!!!!!!!!!!
     
  18. Lady_Skywalker87

    Lady_Skywalker87 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 4, 2008
    I finally cought up! I'm really sorry guys, real life stinks right now & I can't loggin as often as I would like...plz keep me on the PM list...


    ?No you aren?t.? Anakin took Obi-Wan?s arm, gazing directly into his eyes. ?You?re weak. What happened??

    ?Nothing -,?

    ?He got an electrical shock when he tried to rewire a control panel,? Siri explained. ?And he hasn?t been able to get any rest since.?

    ??Siri, I?m perfectly capable -,?

    ?I agree, Master Tachi and Ferus can carry Whie,? Anakin said, ignoring Obi-Wan. ?And I?ll help you.?

    ?I don?t need any -,?

    ?Actually, I can carry Whie,? Ferus interrupted, kneeling down and hoisting him over one shoulder. ?Master,? he turned to Siri, ?You can help Anakin and Obi-Wan.?

    ?I?m telling you I don?t need -,?

    ?Sounds good.? Anakin grabbed one of Obi-Wan?s arms while Siri took the other.

    ?Is anybody listening to me?? Obi-Wan cried as they moved towards the door.

    ?Shhhh, Master,? Anakin cast him a stern gaze. ?You don?t want to call any unwanted attention to us.?

    Obi-Wan sighed as Siri chuckled next to him.


    [face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh]



    Keep up the good work girls!=D=@};-[:D]
     
  19. son-of-kenobi

    son-of-kenobi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jul 16, 2004
    this story is awesome. :cool: Hoping that the jedi can get off bespin before Sidious' goons arrive.
    Is there going to be a new post soon?? add me to the PM list please.
     
  20. Mireillemjv

    Mireillemjv Jedi Master

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    Mar 5, 2008
    (catches breath) still catching up with this awesome fic, but I just 'had' to say how much I enjoy reading this unique twist of the prequels :) Really, really great work! Please, keep up the great writing and keep this thread going UP!!!!!!

    Thanks for sharing this with us!

    Love
    Mireille XXX
     
  21. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 21, 2007
    ~Oh where is Kelia-Lily? Oh where is Kelia-Lily?~

    I hope that neither DRL or DWB has got you too badly.
     
  22. Darth_Drachonus

    Darth_Drachonus Jedi Master star 3

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    Oct 4, 2005
    After DRL and DWB lets go, add me to the list please!
     
  23. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 21, 2007
    *begs on hands and knees not to leave everyone, readers and characters alike, hanging.*
     
  24. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jul 26, 2005
    Apologies to our readers. DRL has been rough on both LilyHobbitJedi and myself but we are committed to getting back to this story as soon as possible.

    Thank you to those who are sticking around for the rest of the story. [:D] [:D]
     
  25. Lady_Skywalker87

    Lady_Skywalker87 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 4, 2008
    As long as you guys keep writting I'll be here![:D]