A Little Trouble With Kids 2.

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  1. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    I'm baaaaaaaaaaack!!!!!!!


    *****

    Qui-Gon Jinn sat alone on his couch. The Council wouldn?t let him go on a
    mission until he was fully recovered. I?m fine, he thought. Master Yoda had
    told him he was bringing a surprise today when he came to visit.
    He got up to get the door where someone was knocking. He opened it to find
    Master Yoda and Mace Windu. His eyes widened at the sight of the bundle
    Mace was carrying. Small blue eyes peered at him. The small boy pressed
    himself against the tall Jedi Master.
    ?What is this?? he asked. Yoda hit him with his grimer stick. ?A child, it is.?
    No kidding. ?I mean what is it doing here??
    The boy?s eyes widened in fear. I must really scare him.
    ?He is staying with me until we can find a place for him to stay, and his name
    is Obi-Wan,? Mace said, smiling at the boy to reassure him that it was okay.
    ?Well, what do you feed it??
    Mace rolled his eyes. ?What ever is soft, would be nice.?
    ?Can it walk?? Qui-Gon asked.
    ?Yes he can.? Mace set the boy down. The boy looked around curiously
    without letting go of Mace?s hand.
    ?Well, then follow me.? Qui-Gon led the way to the dinning room.
    Mace pulled the boy into his lap. Qui-Gon watched the boy with interest.
    At least he doesn?t scream.
    Obi-Wan caught him staring and stared right back.
    Mace watched with a smile. Good. Maybe now I can tell him.
    Qui-Gon saw Mace smiling. He?s up to something.
    After dinner they were all seated in the livingroom talking.
    ?Tank you fow dinnar, Mahstah Ginn,? Obi-Wan said suddenly, in a small,
    quiet voice.
    ?Your welcome,? he said, surprised.
    Mace cleared his throut. ?Um, Qui-Gon there?s something we have to tell
    you.?
    ?Yes.?
    ?You have been chosen to take care of Obi-Wan,? he blurted out.
    ?What?!?
    Mace pointed to Obi-Wan, who looked away. ?I know it?s a shock-?
    ?I don?t get a choice do I??
    ?A very good choice, you were,? Yoda assured him.
    ?I don?t care. I-? He stopped at the look of sadness on Obi-Wan?s face.
    The boy leaned forwered to whisper in Mace?s ear.
    Mace nodded. ?We have to go now-but we?ll talk later.? He picked Obi-Wan
    up and walked out with Master Yoda.


    Obi-Wan sniffled as he pulled the covers around himself. No body wanted
    him. Not Mahstah ?Oda, not Mahstah Gawwa, not Mahstah Windy and
    especially not Mahstah Jinn. He didn?t like me at all!


    *****

    I know the first post wasn't very funny, but the next one is!
  2. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Yay! You finally posted the prequel!
    Poor, Obi-wan!
    Can't wait for your next post!
  3. PadawanKenobi Jedi Knight

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    Yeah a new story!! I love that he calls Mace "Mastah Windy".
  4. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    That's not all he calls Mace ; ) Right Neon Star? Or anyone else who read the first one?
  5. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Yeah the prequel has begun!!!!

    Don't be sad Lil' Obi I want you!

    Mahstahs Windy and 'Oda better know what they are doing leaving such a sweety with gruff ole Jinny!
  6. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    Need more story about "Baldy".....<<grin>>
  7. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    To post or not to post....
  8. PadawanKenobi Jedi Knight

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    Post, of cooouurrse (that's my sorry imitation of Kitster!)
  9. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    lol! You sound like him! *thinks about what she just said.* Ewww! Sorry! I mean he's a guy and everything! Sorry! ; )
  10. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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  11. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    Not up!!!! The word is "POST"!!!
  12. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    This goes to JediCandy! this is the funnyest yet. (i think)



    *****
    Mace paced outside of Qui-Gon?s apartment. ?Qui, it?s like this....No, that
    won?t work.? He shook his head. ?Qui-?
    ?Yes??
    Mace spun around to the door where Qui-Gon stood. ?Buddy!?
    Qui-Gon raised a eyebrow. ? ?Buddy???
    ?You?re my best friend, right??
    ?Maybe.?
    ?The thing is...well...the-the council...ordered me to....?
    ?Yes?? Qui-Gon asked.
    ?I have to go on a mission and I need somebody to take care of him!?
    ?What??
    Mace took a deep breath. ?I need you to take care of Obi-Wan.?
    ?Who??
    After Mace didn?t answer, Qui-Gon knew who it was. ?Oh, no! No, no, no!?
    ?Please! The child care takers can?t watch over him,? Mace pleaded.
    ?Why??
    ?Because he needs one person to watch over him.?
    ?Then where is he now?? Qui-Gon asked.
    Mace slowly stepped aside to show a crying little boy.
    He had heard every word Qui-Gon had said.
    Mace picked Obi-Wan up. ?Shhh. There, there.?
    The boy only buried his head on Mace?s shoulder.
    Qui-Gon sighed. ?Let me see him.?
    Mace stared at him but didn?t ask questions. He handed over the small
    bundle.
    ?It?s alright. I?m sorry I yelled.? Qui-Gon cradled the boy in his arms.
    ?No Bo?ey like me,? Obi-Wan whispered.
    ?That?s not true.? Qui-Gon walked into his living room and sat down on the
    couch. ?What made you think that??
    ?No bo?ey wah? me.?
    ?That?s not true,? he said, resting his head on the boys?.
    ?You no wah? me.?
    ?Of course I want you!?
    ?Deah? why you yell??
    ?Because I was surprised.?
    ?I ca? stay wit? you?? Obi-Wan peaked up.
    Qui-Gon smiled warmly to him. ?Of course. Ma-? He looked up and Mace
    was gone.
    ?It looks like Mace went to tell the Council.?
    Mace ran down the halls to Master Yoda?s room. He knocked excitedly.
    ?Hold on, you will,? came from the other side of the door.
    Hurry, Troll!
    ?Heard that, I did,? Yoda replied as the door opened.
    ?Sorry, my master.? Mace bowed, his face red.
    ?Tell me why came you running, you will.?
    ?Obi-Wan?s staying with Jinn!?
    Yoda?s ear?s went up with pleasure. ?Glad that I decided I would give you a
    two month vacation, I am.?
    Mace grinned. Not as glad as I am.
    ?Heard that too, I did.?
    Darn!
    *****
  13. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    That was both funny and sweet! Lil' Obi feels wanted and Mace and Yoda are a hoot!!!!


    More pwease!
  14. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    That was sooo cute and funny!
  15. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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  16. JediRogue9 Jedi Master

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  17. Rebecca191 Jedi Grand Master

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    Awww, these stories are just sooo cute and funny.
  18. Lara_Notsil Jedi Knight

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    I just LOVE little Obi stories!

    Keep posting!

  19. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    <<laughter>> Qui-Gon, you're in for it now!
  20. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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  21. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    UP! UP! UP! UP! UP! UP! UP! UP!!!!!
  22. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=631282&replies=79

    I just wanted to put the old link on here. Tell me if it works!
  23. Bastet Jedi Master

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    Yay, a sequel! (or maybe I should say prequel)
    Anyway, little Obi is soooo cute! I love this!! :) Moooooore!
  24. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Thank's Bastet. I can't post this weekend but I need you to do me a favor. Can you keep this and the other one up for me??? Please?!?!?!
  25. PadawanKenobi Jedi Knight

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    What a cute story JK Mariah! I love little Obi-Wan!
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