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A Little Trouble With Kids 2.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Aug 10, 2000.

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  1. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    UP! Please add more!! I love this story!

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  2. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm back!!!! This goes out to Neon Star as promised!!! And to other readers too!

    *****

    After Mace got back from his two month ?mission?, Qui-Gon decided to take
    care of Obi-Wan during missions.
    Qui-Gon was reading a letter when he heard a loud crash. On impulse, he ran
    to Obi-Wan?s room. The little boy was lying on the ground with a broken
    vase on top of him.
    ?I?m sowwy, Quigee.?
    ?It?s alright, are you hurt?? He pulled the boy out from under the broken vase
    pieces.
    ?Nah-uh.? Obi-Wan shook his head. ?Pway now??
    He sighed. He still had work to do. ?Alright, come on.? He picked Obi-Wan
    up and they went to the living room. He sat down on the couch with Obi-Wan
    on his knee. ?What do you want to do??
    ?Pway, siwwy!? He swatted him on the nose.
    ?With what??
    ?You!? Obi-Wan jumped on him, giggling.
    As Qui-Gon tried to pry Obi-Wan off of him, a cat jumped on the balcony.
    Obi-Was?s eyes went wide. ?Wha? da???
    ?It?s a cat that stays around here,? Qui-Gon said, prying Obi-Wan?s hands off
    of him.
    ?Ca? I pway wit? it??
    ?No, it?s a wild animal.?
    ?Oh.?
    ******

    I know it's short but I haven't wrote anymore!! And I have a idea for another story so I'll be writing for that one too! I'm very busy so please be nice!!!
     
  3. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    READ THIS!!!!!
     
  4. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OK, I READ THIS! NOW POST THIS!

    (don't ya just love being able to yell in caps?!)

    ps. I could always start another food fight....
     
  5. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I read it too! Lil' Obi is SO cute!!! He reminds me of this two-year-old I babysit sometimes. He was climbing all over me the last time, about broke my back!
    Post more soon, I love this story! :)
     
  6. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Candy, do you know where Lina is??? She hasn't posted and it's killing me!
     
  7. Rebecca191

    Rebecca191 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Nov 2, 1999
  8. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Cute, Little Obi is going to be Qui-Gon 2nd Trial!
     
  9. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hmmm. I'm not working on it like I should. Sorry. I'm writing about 4 different things right now. I'm trying to get on it. Thank you for waiting.
     
  10. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 15, 2000
    I kinda have an idea what's going to happen next in the story... :)

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  11. JediRogue9

    JediRogue9 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 8, 2000
    This is great! But you need to post MORE!!
     
  12. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    HEY!! I'm POSTING!!! You know where this ends right? After this post will be the post RIGHT before the other last post on ALTWK 1. k? I know it's hard to understand but hey! So am I!


    ******

    Qui-Gon was getting worried. He hadn?t heard from Obi-Wan in awhile.
    The boy had left to go to the garden to play with friends. That had been the
    last he had heard from Obi-Wan. He jumped when there was a knock at the
    door. He ran to get it only to find padawan Lenora.
    ?Yes?? He asked.
    ?Uh...Um, my m-master wanted me to get you.?
    ?Why??
    ?Obi-? Before she could finish he ran out the door.
    He ran to the gardens to find Master Mekal waiting for him. ?Well? What
    happened??
    ?He ran out that way and we didn?t hear from him again.?
    ?I?ll find him.? He was about to run off, when she put her hand on his arm.
    ?Yes, like I?m going to let you get lost too? I?m going with you.?
    ?Fine. What way did he go??
    ?This way.?
    They looked around for him and found nothing. ?It?s like he just disappeared!
    The Gardens aren?t THAT big!? She sat down on a rock.
    ?Is there anyplace that he like?s to go??
    ?Not really. He always stays in front.?
    Qui-Gon sighed. They weren?t having any luck. ?Let?s try that way.?
    //You ca? fin? me!//
    //Obi-Wan!//
    ?Qui-Gon?? Mekal looked at him.
    ?He thinks it?s a game.?
    ?What?? Mekal wasn?t sure if the sun had fried his brain.
    ?He?s hiding because he?s playing.?
    ?Well, it?s not a very fun game.?
    //We give up! Come out!//
    //Nah-uh! Fin? me!//
    //Obi-Wan!//
    //Dat?s my name!//
    ?Qui-Gon, did you hear that?? Mekal studied the trees.
    ?What??
    ?I heard something coming from up there.? She walked closer to a tree. ?It?s
    giggling.?
    ?Oh.?
    ?He?s not here!? She shouted. ?Let?s go back! He?s really good!?
    ?Yes, he is!? They hid behind trees until Obi-Wan hopped down. He giggled
    as he ran away.
    Qui-Gon jumped in front of him. ?Ha!?
    Obi-Wan ran right into his leg. He fell backwards on the ground.
    Qui-Gon picked him up. ?We?re going home. Thank you Mekal.?
    ?It?s all right. Good-bye Obi-Wan. Thank you for the lovely time.?
    He let out a few dazed giggles as he closed his eyes.
    Qui-Gon carried him back to their apartments before setting him down to turn
    on the lights. When he turned back Obi-Wan was gone. The dirty little boy
    ran around the room laughing as Qui-Gon tried to catch him.
    This just wasn?t his day.

    *****
     
  13. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    That post caused a flashback for me. I have guardianship of my nephew. When he was 2-yrs old, he was playing with a BIG ball as I took pictures. I got a great action shot of him just before he threw the ball........at ME! He looked the way I see Obi looking like at the end of this post---a two-legged menace with a mile-wide grin!
     
  14. PadawanKenobi

    PadawanKenobi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    What a cute story. Lil Obi is just too much!
     
  15. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You and me both Jedicandy. I have twins and what one didn't think of the other did.

    When my nephew was 2 my Sister and I were shopping and he decided to play hide n seek with us by hiding in the clothes rack. Needless to say both my Sister and I were a little frantic by the time we heard the little guy just laughing his little head off! Qui-Gon has got his work cut out for him.

    Post again soon Mariah, this is just so darling!
     
  16. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hee hee hee, I love lil' Obi!! He's soooo cute!
    More more more!

    UP!!!!
     
  17. Eryce

    Eryce Jedi Master star 2

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    Why is it I don't remember being this naughty as a child? Hmm.. but that was an awfully long time ago..*grin*

    POst more!

     
  18. Glad is June

    Glad is June Jedi Master star 4

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    It may not have been Qui-Gon's day But it looks like it was Obi-Wan's. No just how much trouble is Qui going to have getting Obi into the tub.
     
  19. Keyla_Kenobi

    Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    LOL!! Yes Obi! Make Qui-Gon suffer!! Great Job Jedi_KnightMariah!! Keep posting!
     
  20. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Post more! UP!

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  21. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    lol! hey, guys! What did I have to do the first time I posted the first story? That's right! I had to mow! Just like I did today! It's hard keeping up with Orlando weather!
     
  22. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    It's just as hard here in Dead City (ooops, I mean Dade City). I still haven't finished all five acres.....my bad
     
  23. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm lucky. My brother has to do all the mowing.

    Post more!!

    UP!

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  24. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Do ya like me signature??? I'll get on the next part soon! I'll be skippin' some parts in his life so if you see where he's 2 in one and 4 in the next, don't be surprised.
     
  25. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I respectfully request that you refer to the below link with regards to your posts.....

    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=697387&replies=0



     
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